FF:Do Dil updt chapter 5(4/4/2009)

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

hey another great update luved it

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey, another great update.
loved each and every part of it very much.
cont.soon.
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sugii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

hey 2day only i read the 2 part.its very niceee and cute.plzzz continue asap

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Sadia87

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

yay!! you updated!!

so cute - prem being possessive already..lol

great update

so cant wait

plz one request-plz make the updates a little longer!!

mucho luv

-Sadi*

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zehra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

i wanted to change my topic name name into do dil HAMARE PYAAR makes no sense and some ther ff has the name of HAMARA PYAAR.

so im changing into DO DIL.

DO DIL

PART 3

As for meher, as usual, shes the popular kid in school.

Sangeetha: Meher, u goin to go to the prom?

Meher: didnt decide yet. kyu?

sangeetha: no its ok. nothin

Meher: c,mon wats up?

Sangeetha: well i didnt get a partner.

meher: You are going to go to the prom.

Sangeetha: Is there a problem.

Meher: No, its just dat the first tym iv heard a brainiac going 2 go to the prom.

Sangeetha:just for fun.

meher: ok, u wanna partner huh?

sangeetha: ya

meher: Why dont u ask Shyam.

Sangeetha: SHYAM!!!! him hes not my type his a cool type guy.

meher: so you wanna a partner whos a brainiac like u huh?

Sangeetha: kinda.

meher: u joking ryt?

sangeetha: i wud like to but no im not joking.

meher: oh man!

sangeetha: ill try to find a person whos cool....

meher: there u go.

sangeetha: ...... and a GEEK.

meher: wat!!!!! god plz save me.

Sangeetha was mehers close frend. Sangeetha liked to hang out with meher since they were frends from grade 3 and now until grade 11.

Shyam was a popular kid in scool too but he knows his limit.

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That afternoon at the western indian college, (prems and heers college), heer was going around her new college finding for the gym becoz the girls had P.E now. But heer didnt know where the gym was?

While she was looking for the gym prem appeared from somewhere. Heer was still looking for the gym. Then prem knew that she was finding for something, so he went to heer.

Prem: Are you looking for something?

heer: (without giving an answer just looking down)

Prem: where do you want to go?

Heer: The gym for P.E.

Prem: you just go straight and turn left

Heer: (looking down) Thank you.

Prem: your welcome

Heer was going on the path prem told her to go. While she was a light wind blew and her 4 metre dupatta flew right past prems face but then mahesh came to talk to prem about something and her dupatta flew right past mahesh's face. Prem was furious that he just left without saying a single word. Mahesh had a crush on heer,but heer didnt like mahesh because he was not her type. decent, smart and caring was her type but mahesh was too much into girls. Heer liked prem comparing to mahesh.

When Heer reached the gym for P.E. she went insideand took a seat in a bench but her new, good friends forced her to change and join them. She changed into her P.E attire and sat on a nearby bench again till her friends start a new game. Heer was good at sports, singing and studies. She was a talentedgirl.

Sneha: Heer, cmon join us, we are playing basketball.

Heer: Oh, ok.

kasak: Heer, wud u join our team please, we have less ppl in our team.

Heer: yea, sure.

Kasak: Thankyou so much.

Heer: thats ok.

Last year, tina was the vice captain of sports team, hawks and the captain was Arjun. Priyanka the vice captain of the sports team falcon and Harman the captain. Sonia, the vice captain of the team, eagles and Iqbal the captain. Shivangi the vice captain of the team, Krestels and abishek the captain.

These people, were the captains last year, and they are not in college now. So this year the CAPTAINCY VOTING DAY will be coming soon.

ILL UPLOAD THE NEXT PART ON 30TH MARCH OR B4 IT.

😊😛😉

Edited by zehra7 - 16 years ago

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

hey another great update luved it do continue soon

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sugii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

hey thts vry niceee😊 updt.its interesting plzz continue asap.

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Sadia87

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

yay!! you updated!

really cute..lol..prem's so adorable

omg capitan voting?- interesting!!

can't wait to read me

i like the new title: Do Dil

good job

Thanx

-sadi*

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zehra

@zehra7

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

i'll update ASAP Iim sorry i was busy wid school work

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zehra

@zehra7

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

chapter 4

do dil

At, the Juneja's place, Gayathri and her daughter Gulraj wre getting ready for breakfast. While they were having breakfast,

Harman: Baujee, Ma I'll pick Veera and Preet from school today

Lalith:tikke,Harman

Gayatri:ha beta,you go pick them up today, its been a very long time since u went to there school.

Gulraj: I'm also coming with you,tikke

At Meher's school

Meher was asked to the prom by so many guys, but she was not impressed by any of them as they did not know to respect ladies just then a boy walked to meher,his name was Shyam, he was a cool and well mannered guy but Meher was not interested in him.

Shyam: would you go 2 the prom wid me?

Meher:me?

Shyam:yes,u

Meher:no, im not going(meher lied), sorry

Shyam: no problem, bye

At college

Heer was going home alone today as none of her friends had come to college. When she walking out of the college gates she had a weird feeling someone was following her, all of a sudden someone pulled her by her arm it was Mahesh, heer had disliked Mahesh from the time she saw him but she did not ever think he would do something like this. All this was seen by prem he had a strange feeling his blood was boiling he never had this kind of feeling before, he went up to Mahesh and started to beat him up, he could not control his anger until heer pulled him away from there.

Heer: why did u beat him up like that,who do you think you are?

Prem:me, I'm Prem Juneja, and that guy does not no to behave with a girl and don't try to pretend I saw the fear in your eyes, btw instead of thanking me

your scolding me, anyway what's your name?

Heer: thankyou ,but don't ever do that again and im heer

(her name sounded like music to his ears)

Prem: nice name,friends?

Heer: ok, friends ,btw u also have a very nice name(blushing),anywayz bye I have 2 get home by bus today and I don't want to be late, so bye,thank you again.

Prem:can I ask you something if u don't mind?

Heer: yes, bolo

Prem: I can give u a ride home in my car, pls don't refuse my offer

Heer: ok, just because u saved me and you're my friend .

Sorry again for the late update also im sorry coz its not long, but ill update again ASAP

Edited by zehra7 - 16 years ago