FF:Do Dil updt chapter 5(4/4/2009) - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sadizzle

yay!! you updated!!

so cute - prem being possessive already..lol
great update
so cant wait
plz one request-plz make the updates a little longer!!
mucho luv
-Sadi*

thank you so much, but let me know if u guys are losing interest, sorry i cudnt reply to any of your posts as i was busy with skool work.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz guys rply im gettin da feeling dat u gys dont lyk dis ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
hey zehra just gone through your FF..
its good..

i liked it..

continuesoon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

wow !grt.... updt.luvved prem's anger sooo sweet....can't wait to see premeer scenes.plz continue asap...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
hey fast move but very gud
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Do Dil

Chapter 5

Prem and heer were going in the car when suddenly,

Heer shouted out: ICE CREAM

Prem stopped the car and told her he would be back in a minute he went to the ice cream seller and bought one chocolate ice cream,he went back to the car and handed the ice cream to heer,

Prem:do you like chocolate ice cream?

Heer:no,I just love it,how did u know that I loved chocolate icecream?

Prem:chocolate is sweet just like you he blurted out(heer was blushing)

Heer:anyway didn't u get one for you, we can share one ice cream if you don't mind

prem was surprised by what she had asked but he quickly agreed to her offer as he did not want to miss this opportunity(again he was thinking why he was feeling this way he had never felt like this before,and he wasn't the type of guy who was interested in girls)

prem:sure,why not after all we are friends aren't we

while heer was passing the icecream to prem, bymistake prem kept his hand on heer's hand she felt as though an electric current had passed through her,after finishing the ice cream prem drove heer to her house by which time they had got know almost everything about each other.After dropping heer at her house prem felt that he was something(but little did he know that he was falling in love with heer)

At the juneja house:

Prem was sitting on his bed and smiling alone, preet came into his room,

Preet:what happened bhai, why are you smiling alone?

Prem didn't seem to hear what preet had asked,he was in his own dreamworld,Preet snapped his fingers in front of Prem ,prem came back to his senses

Prem:what are you doing here,preet?

Preet: you tell me bhai,why are you smiling alone?do you know when people smile alone? Don't try to hide anything from me bhai, is it about any girl? come on tell me I'll help you?

Prem: no,it isn't about any girl

Preet: don't lie plssssssssssssssssssssss tell me

Prem: no no no

Preet: yes yes yes

Prem: no no no

Preet: no no no

Prem:yes yes yes
Preet: see you agreed to it,it is about some girl,come tell me about my bhabi?

Prem: I will kill you for tricking me

Prem chased preet around the room in the end he caught preet byhis ears, preet started making faces as though prem was hurting him,

Preet: ouch, prem bhaiyya leave me plssssssssssssss I wont tell anyone

Then prem let go of him

Preet: come on bhaiyya at least tell me her name

Prem: her name name is heer, now leave me alone, I'll tell you about her later,but for now I want to be alone.

Preet: okay,bhai but don't think I'll forget this subject

Preet left the room and prem was back in his dreamworld

plsssssssssssssssss leave your comments, next update ASAP

Edited by zehra7 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
its too cute awesome waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

wow!! sooooo cute😛 and luvvvvvvvvely update.premeer and preet scenes r sooo cute😳 and funny😆.cant wait plzzzz continue asap..

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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sweta2005

its too cute awesome waitinggggggggg for next asap.

thanxxxxxxx for ur comment,glad u liked it😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: sugi77

wow!! sooooo cute😛 and luvvvvvvvvely update.premeer and preet scenes r sooo cute😳 and funny😆.cant wait plzzzz continue asap..

I'll update it on sunday if i have tym,anyway glad you liked it

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