FF:Do Dil updt chapter 5(4/4/2009)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 1

It was a nice day for the juneja family, they were in the hall with the whole famil, they had 5 children, 2 girls and 3 boys. The oldest one was Bulraj juneja, she was 26 and married to karan , she was pretty, kind and loving. The second one was Harman juneja, 23 years old ,who is tall and short tempered. The third child was prem juneja,he was 22 years old ,who is lovin, handsome, caring and very responsible at times. The fourth child is Preet juneja,21 years old ,he was cute and a joker in the family he was the last boy in the family and as for veera juneja, 19 years old,who is the fifth child in the family, she was a modern typed girl she was a short tempered and aloved one at her house also she fights a lot. They were brought up by their parents, gayathri juneja and lalith juneja.

They were enjoyin their tea peacefully,they were making fun of each other and enjoying themselves. Gayathri was the best tea maker for lalith juneja, the head of the house. Everyone went after having tea.

Lalith: Isn't it time for harman to get married gayathri?

Gaya3: Lalith harman beta chota hai na.

Lalith: Gayathri he is 23 and still a baby c'mon

Gaya3: Nehi woe...............

Prem: (shouting from his room) Maa meri tie kahan hai?

Gaya3: Beta, wo apke cupboard mein hai.

Prem: (Shouting back) Tikke ma me check karthahu.

Lalith: Gayathri, thum kya khene wali thi

Gayathri: Kuch nehi, me apna kaam katham kar ke awoon gi

As gayathri went to work. Lalith was confused of wat gayathri was about to say. As prem was getting ready to go to college he didnt get his tie back as today was the 7th anniversary of the college. It was almost time and at last found his tie, inside his stylish side bag.

Prem: At last found it. (shouting) Me jaarahu.
ILL UPLOAD THE NEXT PART ON 21ST MARCH 2009
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Posted: 16 years ago
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we will wait for 21 march nice update
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sound gud cant w8 to read more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww!!
such a cute start - can't wait for the update!! plz do continue soon!
omg don't let harman get engaged to heer!
lol
are 'meet' (meher and preet )apart of this ff too?
luv it so far
thanx!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OH thanx every1 i thought this ff might b the worst
thanx a lot 4 encouraging.
😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh lovely first part...... plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sound good.
cant. wait for the next part.
cont.soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HAMARE PYAAR

CHAPTER 2

The other family in this story was the, Maan family. The head of the family, Sanjay Maan and his wife, Teji maan with their 2 children named, Heer, the oldest who was 20 years old and Meher the second child , she was 18 years old. Heer had finished High school and now ready to go to college.

Sanjay: Heer beta aren't u going to your new college. Its your first day.

Heer: I cant, theres no bus to kalchana.

Sanjay: That's why I bought you a car beta, today u are going to drive this FERRARI to

College.

Heer: But bauji I don't drive.

Meher: But I drive , right ma.

Teji: MEHER!!! You are going to drive. Band karo yeh natak.

Heer: (mocking at meher) But I drive right ma.

Sanjay: Its ok Teji, Meher is very good at driving, trust me.

Teji: Lekin, lekin…………

Sanjay: Lekin, lekin kya hai teji. Meher you drop your sister in the Wester Indian

College and then go to your school. Tikke?

Meher: Tikke daddy.

Heer: Ma , bauji, alwida.

Meher: daddy, ma bye.

Teji: Be careful my little ones.

Meher was a modern typed girl but Heer was traditional. Heer and Meher left the house. Today Heer has to wear green coloured clothes because it was the 7th anniversary of the college. Hee wore a light green shalwar kameez and a 4 metre duppata on her neck. But as for Meher, as usual, she wore a tight jeans and a red coloured short kurta top with a large belt. Meher was a populap kid in school.

When Heer reached her college, she didn't know where to go, so she used a school map to find out. While she as looking into the map she bumped into someone and it was Prem. He was staring at her when he just turned to her.

Heer: Sorry ( looking at prem in his eyes for a moment)

Prem: ( Staring at heer for a long time) Its ok.

Heer smiled at prem and went away while prem was still staring at her. Prem attended his classes but he couldn't concentrate on any of his subjects after seeing heer. Prem was a popular kid and also a smart kid in school.

Mahesh: Prem, kya hua yaar?

Prem: kuch nehi.

Mahesh: Prem, boloh na yaar me thum hara dost hoon henna?

Prem: ( thinking for himself, not a good friend though) Are kuch nehi yaar.

Mahesh: If you say so. Aur ha, did you see a new girl?

Prem: Kohn? Kyu?

Mahesh: A beautiful young lady, she was wearing a light green shalwar kameez but still

Even in shalwar kameez she looks HOT!!

Prem: (angrily staring at Mahesh, and prem angrily answered) NEHI!

Prem doesn't like, Mahesh much because Mahesh is always into girls and as for Heer, prem was so angry of wat Mahesh said.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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HAMARE PYAAR

CHAPTER 2

The other family in this story was the, Maan family. The head of the family, Sanjay Maan and his wife, Teji maan with their 2 children named, Heer, the oldest who was 20 years old and Meher the second child , she was 18 years old. Heer had finished High school and now ready to go to college.

Sanjay: Heer beta aren't u going to your new college. Its your first day.

Heer: I cant, theres no bus to kalchana.

Sanjay: That's why I bought you a car beta, today u are going to drive this FERRARI to

College.

Heer: But bauji I don't drive.

Meher: But I drive , right ma.

Teji: MEHER!!! You are going to drive. Band karo yeh natak.

Heer: (mocking at meher) But I drive right ma.

Sanjay: Its ok Teji, Meher is very good at driving, trust me.

Teji: Lekin, lekin…………

Sanjay: Lekin, lekin kya hai teji. Meher you drop your sister in the Wester Indian

College and then go to your school. Tikke?

Meher: Tikke daddy.

Heer: Ma , bauji, alwida.

Meher: daddy, ma bye.

Teji: Be careful my little ones.

Meher was a modern typed girl but Heer was traditional. Heer and Meher left the house. Today Heer has to wear green coloured clothes because it was the 7th anniversary of the college. Hee wore a light green shalwar kameez and a 4 metre duppata on her neck. But as for Meher, as usual, she wore a tight jeans and a red coloured short kurta top with a large belt. Meher was a populap kid in school.

When Heer reached her college, she didn't know where to go, so she used a school map to find out. While she as looking into the map she bumped into someone and it was Prem. He was staring at her when he just turned to her.

Heer: Sorry ( looking at prem in his eyes for a moment)

Prem: ( Staring at heer for a long time) Its ok.

Heer smiled at prem and went away while prem was still staring at her. Prem attended his classes but he couldn't concentrate on any of his subjects after seeing heer. Prem was a popular kid and also a smart kid in school.

Mahesh: Prem, kya hua yaar?

Prem: kuch nehi.

Mahesh: Prem, boloh na yaar me thum hara dost hoon henna?

Prem: ( thinking for himself, not a good friend though) Are kuch nehi yaar.

Mahesh: If you say so. Aur ha, did you see a new girl?

Prem: Kohn? Kyu?

Mahesh: A beautiful young lady, she was wearing a light green shalwar kameez but still

Even in shalwar kameez she looks HOT!!

Prem: (angrily staring at Mahesh, and prem angrily answered) NEHI!

Prem doesn't like, Mahesh much because Mahesh is always into girls and as for Heer, prem was so angry of wat Mahesh said.

ILL BE UPDATING IT NEXT WEEK OR SOMETIMES B4 IT

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

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