[FF] Kuch Kum[Meet-centric] Epilogue, Pg 52 [27/4] - Page 6

Originally posted by: sugi77

hi vry cuteeee and loving updt.meet is slowly improving vry exciting plzzzzz continu soon.

Thank you! I've been putting up a part every day so far...😆 Until I run out of things to write! *prays that doesn't happen!*

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Great update!!!!!!!!

Thanks!

Wonder what's going to come out of Premeer!!

Um....Premeer has a more of a 'guest' role kinda thingie.... 😳 Sorry!

Really like this story and waiting for the next update already!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: jamune

wow dat was so gud i just hope they have alot of meet scenes today yest i missed him so soo much

Thank you! Yeah I missed Preet so much too! And that one little portion of him just wasn't enough to satisfy me...Sigh...They better give more today! *pout*

Originally posted by: Khushi34

Hey Bhav.....😊

Hiya! *waves*

OMG this is one of the best FF's on MEET iv read. Im a big PREET luver😍 😍😍so its totally fun to read something so well written about him. I read all 3 parts and they were simply amazing.👏

Yay thanks! It's totally fun to WRITE something about him...He's such a fun character to write about!

Its feels great to have such amazing writers in IF...Coming back to the story... The character are really sweet I mean realli realli sweet. Preet is totally cute, and Meher being the shy and totally different from heer is realli cute 2...

Thank you!

🤣HAHAHA when Preet was talking to himself in one of the previous parts it was totally hilarious....i couldnt stop grinnig..

Hahaha I loved that part too! I have so many favourite parts in the story already, it's weird!

Loved the way HEER and her jiju was teasing meher...👍🏼

😳 Thanks again!

Part 3 was fab...even thoguh they only touched each others hands their loved clearly showed...The way you moved 4m reality to flash back and back again really made it enjoyable...

Thank you! I was actually wondering whether repeating the whole scene again, but from Meher's POV, was odd, but I guess it wasn't! 😃

Do continue will be w8in 4 another dose of Kuch Kum

tc

Originally posted by: muqualp

oh wowzer loved this part even more...haila that scene made me get butterflies in my tummy :$ u are an amazing writer! ahh post the next part soonn!

Thanks! Didn't you just wish you were Meher? Sigh...😍

Originally posted by: jaan 234

hey wow .........mein meet ki big fan hoon .............mujay in ki jodi bohat bohat bohat pasand hai ....................dono bohat hi cute sweet lag the hain ..................................

Thanks! Mujhe bhi inki jodi bohut pasand hai! They're just so unbelievably cute!

and great part ....................mujay read kar ne bohat maza ata hai ........

😃 I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😃

thank u for pm ................

You're welcome! 😃

jaan

Originally posted by: lghosh

Hi Bhav,

Thanks for the PM! Very nice update, we got some PMhandoo here! 😃 Nice to see a character change in the story from the show, here its Heer who is lively, chirpy & fun loving & Meher is the shy & quiet type but Preet is the same as in the show.

You're welcome! 😃 Yeah I loved the PMhandoo part! Regarding the characters of Heer and Meher, that's just the way I see them...I mean, Radz told me that Meher is the livelier one, but honestly? I don't see it that way. 😆

The way he held his hand while looking at her after putting the bandaid was very nice. Will look forward ro more such interactions in future. Lovely update & will hope for a quick one again.

Thanks! Don't worry, I do have more of these interactions planned! 😃 And so far I've been putting up an update every day, and I might just end up doing that until I either run out of parts to post or I have no time! 😆

Thanks,

Lana.

Kuch Kum

Part Four

Steering a trolley haphazardly loaded with four suitcases, Ashlesha Maan navigated her way around the Ludhiana airport, trying to find her way to the exit. She paused, looking around her to find her bearings. She briefly took off her oversized sunglasses and looked around. How was she supposed to find the exit when she had no idea where she was? Sighing in frustration (and silently cursing her mother), Ash put her sunglasses back on and moved on, determined not to let her mother get the best of her.

Looking around her as she went, Ashlesha failed to notice the businessman carrying a single suitcase and talking on the phone'and she ran her trolley into him.

-||-

"Haan, Maa, mera plane abhi land hua," Harman said into his cell phone. "Nahin, Prem Bhaiya ko bhejne ki zarurat nahin hain...nahin, Maa, Preet ko bhi mat bhejo...Maa, main apne aap ghar aa sakta hoon...Ji...sachchi, Maa, main apne aap aa sakta hoon!"

Flying around the world wasn't so bad, but coming home was the worst part: he called home the minute he landed, and he was always reminded of how much he had missed being at home.

So engrossed was he in his phone call that Harman didn't see the girl with the trolley coming straight at him. If he had, perhaps he could have avoided the collision.

Instead, the trolley collided into him, sending him sprawling on the floor, his cell phone flying off in one direction and his suitcase in the other.

-||-

Ash stared in horror at the man on the floor. Oh, shit, please let him be fine! She hurried over to him just as he sat up. "Oh, god, I'm so sorry," she apologized. "Aap theek toh hai na?"

"Kya main tumhe theek lagta hoon?" the man replied, angry. "Dekh nahin sakti kya? Chashme utaro, shayad uske baad tum kisi se takdaogi nahin!"

Ash stood up, indignant. "Arre, maine sorry keh diya na? Aur kya karoon? Aap bhi toh dekh sakte they! Lekin aap phone pe they na? Aur phir aap mujh par inzaam lagaa rahe hain? Wow. What class."

He stood up. He was about as tall as her (in her Manolo Blahniks, of course), and if she wasn't so annoyed at him, she might have found him attractive.

"Oye, NRI! Aayene mein dekha hai kya? Sleeveless shirt, short skirt, high heels...Pehle tum dressing mein thoda class seekh lo, phir mujhse baat karo!"

Ash stared at him, aghast. The last person who had insulted her dress sense had ended up with fuchsia hair. "Apne aap ko kya Tim Gunn samajhte ho?" she asked, digging her manicured nails into her palms and hating India more and more every minute.

"Aur tum toh obviously Tyra Banks banna chahti ho."

Ash had had enough. "Whatever, idiot." She returned to her trolley, fuming as she left.

"Real nice comeback," he shot back.

She shot a death glare his way, then, with a toss of her head, she left the area. A cartoonist could have drawn her with smoke coming out of her ears, and they wouldn't have been wrong.

What had Daljeet Maan been thinking, sending Ash to Ludhiana to spend some time with her cousins? Ash wasn't spoilt or pampered. (Was she?) She didn't need this. She sighed. She was supposed to be backpacking in Europe now with her friends, a graduation present they had promised each other. Instead, here she was, in Ludhiana, navigating through labyrinthine airports and colliding with rude (but rather attractive) men.

She finally exited the airport, emerging into the bright sunlight, thankful for her sunglasses. Ash searched for any signs of her cousins, but neither Kuldi, Heer Di, Meher nor Kiran Jiju were anywhere in sight. She sighed again. She reached into her shoulder bag and pulled out her cell phone. She turned it on, hoping to get reception.

It seemed like her luck had finally turned. She keyed in her cousins' number and held the phone to her ear, listening to the ring tone. After about three rings, someone picked up.

"Hello?" the voice asked.

"Heer Di?" Ash asked, unable to help the smile that crept onto her face.

"Arre, Ash, tum kahaan se phone kar rahi ho?" Ash could hear the happiness in her Di's voice.

"Actually, Di, main airport se phone kar rahi hoon. Mera flight kuch der pehle land ho gaya, lekin yahaan koi nahin hai..."

There was a pause. "Tum toh March 21^st par aane vali thi, na?"

Ash stared at the phone, wondering if she had heard right. "Yeah," she replied slowly. "Di, aapko pata hai na, ki aaj March 21^st hai?"

On the other end, Heer swore, and Ash raised her eyebrows in amusement. Ash had no idea that Heer had such a colourful vocabulary (she thought she was the only one!).

"Ash, ek minute de do, main Kuldi se baat karti hoon," Heer said, and she heard a hand being put over the receiver. She heard a muffled conversation between Heer and Kulraaj, with both members sounding rather panicked at her arrival.

Ludhiana mein calendar nahin hai kya? she wondered, amused yet slightly annoyed at the same time.

Then Heer came back on the line. "Ash?"

"Yeah, Di?"

"Tum vahin ruk jaao, Jiju bees minute mein aa jayega."

"Didi, koi baat nahin, main taxi lekar aati hoon," Ash quickly interjected. No way was she waiting twenty minutes for Kiran Jiju under the hot Ludhiana sun.

"Are you sure?" Heer asked her.

"Yeah, Di, I'll make it. Bas apna address de do," she replied, rummaging around in her bag for pen and paper. She scribbled down the address and hung up.

Ash looked around despairingly. This trip was not starting out so good.

-|end of part four|-

Whee...So that was part 4! Yes, Harman and Ash are finally in the picture! (Um, don't ask me where Lalit is, because I honestly have absolutely no idea! 😆) Here's hoping you guys liked it! I've got quite a few surprises for you lot coming up in the next few parts, and I'm hoping ya'll will enjoy reading them as much as I enjoyed writing them! 😃

Love,

Bhav (: