[FF] Kuch Kum[Meet-centric] Epilogue, Pg 52 [27/4] - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
Sorry commenting late, was out yesterday.... =]

Aww so we gotto pust Meet out for a while for the other characters to develop?? Ohhh another Ash-Harman pairing...I personally LOVE this couple...not a huge fan of either one, so just push them togehter. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Seems like this couple has tons of spark to fly between them, both being hotheaded and with HUGE egos?? Loving the chemistry and you wrote it AMAZINGLY!

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Thank you for waiting for me!

*edited*
I LY for waiting for me, you know that right? And I'm hyper, we went to CB and I persuaded my mom to let me have coffee, plus we ordered chocolate. And you know better than most what I'm like when I have caffiene. ๐Ÿ˜† Be warned!
o.0 Dude. Wth?! Coffee AND chocolate? Good thing you didn't have Coke, or else who knows where you'd be bouncing off to now!
I've told you how much I love this altercation right? (You gonna look that word up or do you know what it means? ๐Ÿ˜†) They're hilarious. And espcially since I know what's coming next, ๐Ÿ˜† I love this part! Collision is Ms NRI's fault, and poor Airport Guy gets yelled at. At least he gives as good as he gets. And both are so sarcastic! So mean. ๐Ÿ˜† I love it! ๐Ÿ˜‰
๐Ÿ˜› Save your big pretentious words for your portfolio, dude! ๐Ÿ˜› You just love bringing up the fact that you know what's next, doncha? *shakes head* What are we to do with you?
And I love the next part too, their next interaction. People are going to love this couple as much as I do. ๐Ÿ˜† Already, and the story hasn't even started properly yet! ๐Ÿ˜†
Yay! Let's hope! ๐Ÿ˜†
Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey great update two new ppl luved it update soon

luv ya
Thanks! The next part will be up in...a few minutes!

Originally posted by: shikha87

i'm so happy that you updated got broed without ur fic ( shows how gud you are) and thankyou for not making harman and ash cum in between the love brirds thankyou

Awww...You got bored without it? ๐Ÿ˜ณ That made my day! And no one - and I mean NO ONE - is going to get in the way of Preet and Meher...well, not for now, anyway! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: fj08

hi Bhav

great FF, i hadnt seen this and caught all the updates at once, looking forward to reading more, harman isnt my favorite character so his track doesnt really interest me but for a change we have Mehere and Preet in the lead which is great,
could u send me a pm when u update, i would like to know when u post next
thanks
fatima
Hiya! Yup sure I'll PM you! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And I'm glad you like it so far!

Originally posted by: sugi77

hey vry nice updt.harman ash scene is grt. .expecting loads of funs.plzzz continue soon.

Thanks! I tried to do away with the scene because I realised the story could proceed without them, but I loved it too much...๐Ÿ˜•

prayer for u๐Ÿ˜Š

oh god plzz give bhav loads n loads of meet๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ dreams

Awww! That's so sweet! Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

*sigh* I love this story Bhav! ๐Ÿ˜ณ You are making me want to love Meet....(and yes I know they weren't in this part, but I re-read all three parts for the heck of it again!) ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Yay! To entertain and to convert, these shall be what I shall try to achieve with this story, especially for you! ๐Ÿ˜†
oooo I liked Ash's description here, she doesn't sound totally rude, but hey at least we know she won't ruin Meet, since she finds harman attractive! ๐Ÿ˜› Keep it that way please? ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Don't worry, no one's gonna get between Preet and Meher this time around! I'm writing, remember? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Not some people who just care about getting paid...Hmph...*grumblegrumble* Then again, they have given us some damn good Meet scenes so far...!
The cute comebacks between Ash and Harman were hilarious! ๐Ÿ˜›
I loved them so much that I couldn't bear to delete the scene!
And ahhh they forgot what date it was? ๐Ÿ˜† Crazy ๐Ÿ˜› but ahhh I know all about waiting in the heat for someone to pick you up...not fun! ๐Ÿ˜†
Haha I can't say I understand, because I waited in the night for my uncle to pick Mum and me up from the airport! Yeah, that wasn't fun either...
Continue soon,

Meera๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaan 234

nice part .............thank god harman ash ek sath hain................

Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: muqualp

aww great part...so ash and harman are gonna be together?
no meet :(
Sorry dear! Meet parts are coming up soon! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And I guarantee you'll love it! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
@ and yes i so wanted to be meher for that part :D and i love preet so much! he rocked today's epi!!!

He was so awesome last night too, no? With the whole 'angry young man' thing... ๐Ÿ˜

Originally posted by: chandani90

Hi Bhav!!

OMG you updated. You know when I logged on I was hoping you had updated. And my wish came true :D.
Awww...You prayed to (god) Preet, didncha? He makes miracles happen! ๐Ÿ˜†
Another great part. I am just loving the way all the characters are shaping up. You have given us Ash just the way she is. Very stylish (per her definition hahaha). Though imagining Mihika as Tyra Banks made me laugh so much. I loved her tought process as to why she is her e in India and all.
I'm glad it made you laugh! I'm having such a blast writing the characters out...
Harman is also cute, well so far. Though he is not my favorite on the show. But I liked him here right now.
Yeah Harman's not my fave either, but Ash ko love interest chahiye na! ๐Ÿ˜†
One more interesting thing is that all of them have a very contemporaty language. Thats great. And Heer swearing almost made me jump. So very different to read
I loved the idea of Heer swearing, because, well, she doesn't look like the kind who would, you know?
Thank you so much for another great part. Great goint *lots of claps*.
Eagerly waiting for next part :D

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Posted: 16 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Hey Bhav

Once again awesome update!!!
๐Ÿ˜ณ Again, thanks!
Really like this story and glad to see a Ash/Harman story!! Very few out there!!!!
Yep it's partially Ash/Harman, partially Preet/Meher... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Really looking forward to your next chapter!! Hopefully it will have some interaction between Premeer!!!
๐Ÿ˜ณ Not...exactly...But I shall do a Premeer one-shot specially for you! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Once I figure out the structure of it....๐Ÿ˜•
Meet are already quite interesting!!!
Updtae soon please!!!

Originally posted by: shabo24

Sorry commenting late, was out yesterday.... =]
Naw, I'm just glad you commented! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aww so we gotto pust Meet out for a while for the other characters to develop?? Ohhh another Ash-Harman pairing...I personally LOVE this couple...not a huge fan of either one, so just push them togehter. ๐Ÿ˜‰
๐Ÿคฃ Agreed!
Seems like this couple has tons of spark to fly between them, both being hotheaded and with HUGE egos?? Loving the chemistry and you wrote it AMAZINGLY!
๐Ÿ˜ณ Thanks! I'm struggling a little with how to get them together, but I hope I'll think of something.... ๐Ÿ˜•
--shabz

Originally posted by: jamune

please update soon

Update's coming up in a couple of minutes! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

Hi everyone! Thanks for the comments! ๐Ÿค— I am dedicating this part completely to Radz (even though she's already read it and stuff) because she made me a Preet icon! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Isn't she awesome? (*has a feeling she'll regret inflating Radz's ego so much...**ducks*) So here's the next part. Not much Meet intereaction, Parts 5 and 6 are more of a filler...Ooh and I can tell you guys are gonna enjoy Part Six (the part after this one!) because...well...read on and you shall eventually find out! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜† Lemme know what you guys think/thought of it! P.S. Radz, I waited till you came online before I posted it...

Kuch Kum

Part Five

The taxi pulled up to the Juneja residence. Harman paid the driver and stepped out into the hot Ludhiana sun, spending a moment to look at the house. His house. It felt good to be back. He smiled and made his way into the house.

-||-

Just next door to the Juneja residence, Kulraaj, Heer, Meher and Kiran were hurriedly making last-minute preparations for Ash's arrival.

"Meher, guest room tayaar hai kya?" Kulraaj yelled from the living room, where she was quickly straightening out the pillows on the couch.

"Ji, Didi!" Meher yelled back. She smoothed down the bedsheet and smiled at her work.

"Meher Maasi, Meher Maasi!" Meher turned at Tannu's voice, smiling at the little girl and scooping her up.

"Bolo, Tannu."

"Meher Maasi, main Berry ko Ash Maasi ke room mein rakh sakti hoon?" Tannu asked, holding out a fuzzy brown teddy bear she slept with every night.

Meher felt her heart melt a little. "Tum toh har raat Berry ke saath soti ho. Tumhe dar nahin lagega?"

Tannu shook her head. "Mere paas Sher Singh hai," she replied, referring to the big lion that Heer and Meher had gotten her for her third birthday.

Meher set Tannu down. "Go ahead, sweetie," she said.

A big smile on her face, Tannu ran to the bed and placed Berry next to the pillow. She turned back to Meher. "Thank you, Meher Maasi!"

-||-

The Juneja family was giving Harman a very warm welcome.

"Harman Bhaiya, mera gift kahaan hai?" Preet demanded.

"Arre, Preet, tum bachche nahin ho!" Lalit chided, as Harman smiled and Prem thwacked Preet on the back of his head.

Preet rubbed his head, sulking, wondering what he had said wrong. (After all, he said that every time Harman came back from a business trip, so shouldn't they have been expecting that? And it wasn't as though Harman had ever gotten him anythingโ€ฆ)

"Mera bachcha abhi aaya hai, usse thoda fresh toh hone do!" Gayatri commented. She led Harman away from the group and ushered him up the stairs. "Tum fresh ho jaao, main nashta lagati hoon."

Harman nodded. "Ji, Maa. Thanks."

Gayatri smiled back at him, watching him retreat to his room. She turned back to the family, to three of her boys.

With three sons, Gayatri sometimes wished she had a daughter to pamper, one who would enjoy cooking with her, one she could make clothes for, and one whose bidaai she would one day do.

In these moments, though, one of her boys would always cheer her up. And today was no different.

"Maa!" Preet came up to her, followed by Prem, with Lalit standing back and laughing. "Maa, PB ne mujhe challenge diya hai, aur aaj rotiyaan main banaoonga!"

Gayatri stared at Preet, wondering if he was serious or not. "Beta, tumhe toh toast banana bhi nahin aata!"

"Maine Preet ko yahi bataya hai, Maa, lekin ye meri baat sunne ke liye tayaar nahin hai," Prem chipped in, folding his arms and grinning at Gayatri.

"Maa, aap mujhe help karoge, na?" Preet asked.

Prem cut in. "Nahin, tumhe roti apne aap banani hogi!"

Preet looked from Prem to Gayatri, wondering what he had gotten himself into. Well, whatever it was, Preet Juneja was not one to shy away from a challenge. He puffed out his chest. "Theek hai. Aap dekhna, PB, main itne achche rotiyaan banaoonga ki aap sirf mujhe rotiyaan banane ko kahenge!"

Prem laughed, and Gayatri looked helplessly from one son to the other. Hai Rabba! Ab mere kitchen ka kya hoga?

-||-

Ash's taxi pulled up to the Maan residence. She rummaged through her wallet and realized that because of the incident with that idiot, she hadn't changed her US dollars. She swore silently.

"Aap ek minute yahin ruko, main abhi aayi!" Ash told the taxi driver. She got out of the taxi and walked to the entrance, ringing the doorbell.

"Kiran, darvaaza kholo!" Ash smiled as she heard her Kuldi scream to her husband. For someone so small, Kulraaj sure was loud!

The door opened, but no one was there. Ash frowned and looked down, then broke into a grin.

"Ash Maasi!" 6-year-old Varun cried, throwing his arms around his Maasi's legs.

"Hi, Varun! Tum kaise ho?" she asked, picking him up. Boy, was he heavy! She gave him a quick kiss and set him down again.

Kiran came to the door, smiling as he saw Ash. "Ash, hi! I'm so sorry, hum toh bhool gaye ki tum aaj aane vaali thi!"

Varun ran off, screaming to Tannu that Ash Maasi had come.

"It's okay, Jiju," she replied. "Uh, Jiju, sorry, lekin main airport mein apne US dollars change karna bhool gayi, aur mujhe taxi-vaale koโ€ฆ"

Kiran understood. He nodded and reached into his pocket, pulling out his wallet. He followed Ash to the taxi.

The taxi driver had unloaded all four of Ash's (rather heavy) suitcases and did not look too pleased. Of course, that changed after Kiran paid him.

Ash helped Kiran bring her suitcases into the house just as the three Maan girls came outside. Ash set her bags down again, hugging Kulraaj, Heer and Meher and picking up Tannu (who was much lighter than her brother!).

There was a chorus of "Hi"s and apologies as they all admitted they had forgotten about Ash's arrival. As they ushered her into the house, Kiran brought the remaining bags into the house and up to the guest room.

"Tannu, beta, tum Maasi ko guest room dikhana chahti ho?" Kulraaj asked her daughter.

Tannu nodded eagerly. Ash set her down. Tannu grabbed her hand and began pulling her up the stairs.

"Tum fresh ho jaao, main nashta lagati hoon!" Kulraaj called up.

Heer and Meher followed Ash and Tannu to the guest room, talking over each other as bechari Ash struggled with which one to listen to. She gave up and resorted to nodding politely.

Varun was already waiting for them in Ash's room, bouncing lightly on the bed. He stopped as soon as they came in, and ran over to Ash, nearly knocking her down as he hugged her waist. Not to be outdone, Tannu wrapped herself around her Maasi's legs, thus rendering her incapable of movement.

As she looked helplessly to an oblivious Heer and a laughing Meher, Varun peered up at her. "Ash Maasi, humare gift kahaan hai?"

"Haan, Maasi! Humare gift kahaan hai?" Tannu echoed.

It was Kiran to the rescue. "Arre, bachchon, apni Maasi ko thoda time do na! Pehle usse breakfast karna hai. Phir usse nahana hai, aur phir voh unpack karegi, aur uske baad tum dono ko apne-apne gifts milenge, theek hai?"

Varun and Tannu looked at each other, Tannu taking her cues from her big brother. Varun nodded. "Theek hai."

Kiran pried his kids off their Maasi. "Ab chalo, Mama ko help karte hain!"

Ash mouthed a 'thank you' to Kiran, sitting down on the bed as he winked back at her and led the kids out. Fifteen minutes in the Maan residence had already tired her out. How was she to survive the next few months?

-|end of part five|-

Ta-dah! Part Five, a filler part that sets up something for Part Six! Aren't you guys just dying to know how Preet's attempt at making rotis comes out? Well, I shall prolong the torture even more and not post part six today! I'm not sure if I'll get time to put it up this weekend either...But anyway, absence makes the heart grow fonder, right? ๐Ÿ˜† TGIF, people! Have a great weekend ahead!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
cheap thrills.
*edited*

Oi, shuddup! I don't have an ego. I'm just fabulous. ๐Ÿ˜‰ (Don't you dare contradict that! Else.. I'll sic Yeggie on you! ๐Ÿ˜† Oooh, or your sister. *sticks tongue out at Bhav*)
And once again, you are awesome for waiting for me no? What am I going to do when we have that time difference to worry about? Oh, and ILY for dedicating this part to me! ILY in general, but ILY more now. ๐Ÿ˜†
I want a Tannu. She's adorable. *sigh* So cweet. *pinches Tannu's cheeks* She can bring Berry if she wants, I don't mind.
And Preet, always wanting a gift, and always knowing Harman isn't going to bring him one. How cute is their relationship? It's like their own private joke. His way of telling his brother that he missed him. *hugs Preet* ILY more just for that!
The parallels between the families are way too cool. I love the way you did that. (Here and *cough**cough*) I love knowing what comes next. *ebil laughter* ๐Ÿ˜† Yes, even more cheap thrills. So sue me. ๐Ÿ˜† I seriously love the dynamics between both families. And I cannot wait for part 6! Everyone is going to love it! I know I do. I wanna reread it. Maybe I can dig it out of the recieved files folder. *wanders off in search of the part*
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
mine! ๐Ÿ˜Š

*unreserved*

I love the icon! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Good job Radzie!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

Tannu is officially my fav fav FAV character! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ "Sher singh" and "berry?" totally adorable!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Awwww Preet doesn't even know how to make toast?๐Ÿ˜† He is the most adorable person EVER!๐Ÿ˜† And now he's going to make roti? This I've got to see!๐Ÿ˜‰

WOW! Poor G mom! "Prem laughed, and Gayatri looked helplessly from one son to the other. Hai Rabba! Ab mere kitchen ka kya hoga? " She must've flipped out!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Ash's coming there was good! ๐Ÿ˜› I loved how she didn't have any money, that's happened to me in mumbai sooo many times!๐Ÿ˜† they're not all so nice though! ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜†

Continue soon Bhav!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Love you loads,

Meera๐Ÿ˜ณ

P.S. Sorry for the crap comment! ๐Ÿ˜”
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
I just read your ff at a stretch and loved it a lot... it's really very cute... loved it how it all started with Preet over the tree hawking Meher at a specific time everyday...๐Ÿ˜†.. so Heer's a flirt over here???/๐Ÿ˜ฒ... that's so unlike her na???๐Ÿ˜ณ but I loved it a lot... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I loved how Prem teased Preet for climbing the tree and how he himself is fascinated by Heer...๐Ÿ˜†

So, Meher's a cooking student of Gayatri??? wow!!! she's learning great dishes and me jealous for not able to taste them๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†... aww bechaari cut her finger.. but Preet took care of that๐Ÿ˜ƒ....

Ash and Harman's entry was classic I loved that.. truly enjoyable and now Ash in Mann house...let's see how does she cope up with the typical desis... waiting for the next part....๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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unreserved my comment! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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