MUHAHAHAHAHA! I AM HERE! =]
'kay ready to comment now. 😆
*sigh* Curse Preet for making us girls to faint and swoon and just turn beet RED when he isn't around! 😆 Just getting lost in his thoughts is just....ughhhhhhh! Ohh btw, jamune made this VM for the one-shot I wrote...here....watch...do you love the begining, or do you love it?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gtLxqgpdQbE
Coming to the actual part, very sweetyl written BD! I lovedddddddddd it! 😉 Very sweet, specially how Meher tried to back away but in the end Preet cornered her...ohh....pmhandooh?? meethanndooh?? Ughh well you know what I mean! 😉 Really well written...sent shivers down my spinee! 😛
Aww Tannu is the best! Can she be a toatl kabab mein haddi?? Like how she was in the anda scene with Prem and Heer? 😉
Do I even have to tell you to continue soon? How about...take your time...! 😉
--shabz
Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago