[FF] Kuch Kum[Meet-centric] Epilogue, Pg 52 [27/4]

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Hello not-so-random passer-by, and thanks for clicking the title! Take a raging urge to write a Meet FF, add an extremely sweet scene, toss in a poem and you get Kuch Kum, my first attempt at a KDMHMD FF! Do let me know what you think of the story, and on your way out click this and check out my other stories too! https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1152468/bhavs-bookstore-ruk-ja-o-dil-pg-107-30-3

In case you've just started reading this, or if you just feel like reading the whole thing again, here's where the parts are! (Yes, I really am that bored! šŸ˜†)

Part One: Page One
Part Two: Page Two
Part Three: Page Five
Part Four: Page Eight
Part Five: Page Ten
Part Six: Page Fourteen
Part Seven: Page Sixteen
Part Eight: Page Twenty-One
Part Nine: Page Twenty-Four
Part Ten: Page Twenty-Seven
Part Eleven: Page Thirty
Part Twelve: Page Thirty-Three
Part Thirteen: Page Thirty-Five
Part Fourteen: Page Thirty-Seven
Part Fifteen: Page Forty
Part Sixteen: Page Forty-Three
Part Seventeen: Page Forty-Five
Part Eighteen: Page Forty-Eight
Part Nineteen: Page Fifty
Epilogue: Page Fifty-Two
Kuch Kum
Part One

He sat on the branch of the big tree that divided the Juneja house from the Maan house. He bit into an apple, reclining boyishly on the branch. It was a good thing that the tree had branches that were high but still strong enough to bear his weight, or Preet Juneja would have had to find another way to spy on the Maan girls.

And speaking of them, he thought, a grin spreading on his face as Heer and Meher Maan came out of their house, ushered by their oldest sister, Kulraaj. She looked towards the big tree, looking out for Preet. Her eyes narrowed as she spotted him. He nodded at her, still grinning cheekily, waving with his half-eaten apple. With a shake of her head, Kulraaj nudged Heer and Meher to the car, where her husband Kiran was waiting to drop the two girls off on his way to work. Heer risked Kulraaj's wrath to sneak a glance up at the tree, rolling her eyes as she spied Preet and standing up a little straighter.

Heer Maan was tall and slender, willowy, with long straight hair and almond-shaped eyes that could be as seductive as they could angry. The most flirtatious of the three sisters, Heer was outspoken, saying whatever she thought, and this trait had gotten her into trouble with Kulraaj on more than one occasion.

After their parents' death, Kulraaj had taken over the responsibility of taking care of her sisters, making sure they got a proper education, something which had not gone to waste: Heer had a degree in law and was interning at a rather prestigious law firm, hoping to land a job there eventually; Meher had just completed her degree in fine arts and had found a job at an art gallery, assisting the curator in selecting art pieces from both local and international artists.

It was Meher that held Preet's attention at 8.17 a.m. every morning. Meher was a little shorter than Heer, and had a fuller figure, and standing next to Heer, no one would give her a second look. She was shy and soft-spoken, and had only looked up at Preet the first time he had climbed the tree: a bird had harassed him, mistaking his shaggy black hair for a nest and thus giving him a broken arm. He had seen a smile on her face then (though she had tried her best to hide it), and that smile had made the broken arm worth it. He hadn't been able to get Meher's smile out of his head. Once his arm had recovered, Preet spent every morning up on the tree, hoping to catch another glimpse of the smile that made his heart beat like a rabbit on drugs and his head turn to mush.

To say that he had been unsuccessful was quite an understatement.

As Heer and Meher got into the sleek white car, Preet sighed, taking a final bite of his apple. He slowly made the climb down, being careful not to fall.

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"Jiju, Preet kitna sweet hai na? Har din voh humari Meher ke liye ped par intezzar karta hai," Heer teased, glancing nonchalantly at her sister as she filed her nails.

Meher stared resolutely out the window, determined not to let Heer get to her. Her heart was still beating out a steady staccato rhythm in her ribcage, an annoying tune so loud she was sure Heer could hear it and was teasing her because of that.

Kiran glanced at Meher from the rearview mirror, smiling. "Heer, bechchari ko choro na! Bataao, tumhara internship kaisa chal raha hai?"

Meher smiled gratefully at the rearview mirror reflection of her jiju, silently thanking him for the change in subject.

Heer winced. "I feel like a doormat."

Kiran laughed. "You're an intern, Heer. You're supposed to be a doormat."

As her jiju and her Di discussed Heer's internship and the probability of her working there once her stint was over, Meher let her mind wander. And of course, it wandered to the one person it wandered to every morning at 8.23 a.m.

Was Heer Di right? Did Preet Juneja, the Preet Juneja, notorious for his charming, suave ways, really wait for her every day in the big tree that divided the modest Maan house from the extravagant Juneja mansion?

No, he was probably interested in Heer Di. Which guy wasn't? Heer was movie star material, Kuldi was as pixie-like as one could get (and if she wasn't already married, there would be another queue of guys lining up for a date with her), and Meher'Meher was the wallflower sister.

She sighed softly. Maybe I should spend just a little more time there, Meher thought. For the past few weeks, she'd been learning cooking from Gayatri Juneja in a thinly-veiled attempt to catch another glimpse of Preet. All in vain, of course. He usually came home an hour or so after she left.

"Meher?" Heer asked, waving her hand in front of her sister's face. "Are, Meher, kahaan kho gayi ho? Preet ke bare mein soch rahi ho, na?"

Meher blushed furiously as she turned to sister. "Nahin, toh," she insisted.

Kiran pulled the car to a gentle stop. Heer said goodbye to Kiran and turned to Meher, a cheeky smile playing on her lips. "See you, Meher. Take your mind off Preet for a while and concentrate on your work!"

Meher felt her face heating up so much that you could have cooked an egg on it. She mumbled a 'goodbye' to Heer, turning back to look out her window, wishing the car seat would open up and swallow her.

As Kiran set off for Meher's art gallery, he glanced at her in the mirror again. He smiled. "Agar tum chaho to main tumhe Preet se mila doon..."

She stared at him, aghast, redder than ever. "Jiju! Aap bhi?"

He laughed, turning up the volume of the car radio.

Meher leaned her head against the window, turning her attention to the song and blocking out her thoughts.

Kis taraf hai aasman

Kis taraf zameen, khabar nahin, khabar nahin, oh

Jab se aaya hai sanam

Mujhko khud ki bhi khabar nahin

Khabar nahin

Meher smiled to herself.

-|end of part one|-

Ta-dah! That was the first part up! Here's hoping you liked it enough to keep checking back for the second part, which should be up pretty soon! 😃😳

Love and thank you!
Bhav (:

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Posted: 16 years ago
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mine!
I will be back to edit this, though you already know how much I love this story!
*edited*
I still think you should change the title. šŸ˜‰ You know I'm obsessed with that other song. šŸ˜† Plus it fit, and you know that! (Or maybe I should just listen to Kuch Kum, and become obsessed with it too. šŸ˜†)
Anywho, loved the part, (love the next one too, but no one else has read that! šŸ˜‰) Preet is awesome, climbing trees to see Meher's smile. *sigh* And what a smile she has no? We need mention of (god) Preet's smile too. Maybe Meher likes it?
Loved the teasing of Meher on the part of her sister and Jiju. Very realistically done. If I had family like that, oh wait, I do have family like that! šŸ˜†
And that song, I love that song. *starts humming* Okay, I really need to listne to Kuch Kum.
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
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omgg!

So many things to comment on, I haven't even read this yet but I SHALL BE BACK! šŸ˜Ž

So Bhav di, you joined the gang of us fanfic writers? *rubs hands in glee* Excellent...*before you ask, yes I used to write a ff, finished one, dropped one....*

The characters seem really interesting in this one, with the strict Kuldi, sweet & understanding Kiran and Mehar and Heer's roles seem to have switched?? šŸ˜²šŸ˜†But it works completly....

ā˜ŗļøThat description of Preet....*sigh* enough for anyone's toes to curl. šŸ˜†Loved his thoughts on everything...specially how Mehar's smile was worth the broken arm...*sigh* šŸ˜‰šŸ˜›šŸ˜†

Ohh the song at the end!! *visions of SRK swining back and forth...* Er - sorry! šŸ˜›

Fab job BD! Keep writing...! And I shall keep waiting!

--shabz

EDIT!

Amazing poem. šŸ˜‰ and the title of this fanfic sounds adorable! What was the other one Radz di was talking about? šŸ˜†
Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey mindblowing šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘updt.i loved this soft 😊meher vry much and asusual funny šŸ˜†preet.grt start.plz continue asap.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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dat was absolutely very gud and if u would like u kan add the kuch kum video with it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey awesome i loved it meher character is so sweet great start
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great ff sooooooooooooo sweet preet in a tree omg
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww Bhav! 😊

I love the concept of this story! 😃 Meet really do make an interesting unusual but ADORABLE couple! 😃

I can't wait to see how you progress their story..

Awww Preet climbs the tree every day? 😳 how sweet is he? šŸ˜›

Continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wow mindblowing fantastic ......lovly part ....
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i like it!!! update soon please!!! you have kept the essence of the characters and i really like that! (i'm talking about Meher and Preet of course)!

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