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I'm back Zaza!!!!! Miss me!?!?!? 😳 *hug*

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

meera's spot! 😳

Maybe I shouldn't be so proud of that? 😆 😕🤔 I should really shut up and let the story play out !😛 You should be proud of that, how else am I going to pan my story out without your yapping? 😆

Hmmmm but see I'm totally giggly over the way you described Ravs and Prem at the peir, (first of all, super romantic spot!😉) and it was just so awkward that it was still adorable in terms of simplicity! 😳😃 But I'm still curious as to why he asked her! 😕 (don't get me wrong, I'm happy he did, It proves me right, but I'm still wondering why...he was so adamant on not going...😆) Awww thank you! Yep it is a totally romantic spot! 😳 He was adamant on going but he feels that he is doing the right thing, and since you said you won't go if he doesn't go, he couldn't have you missing your first ball! And I guess he himself wants to experience his first ball too, and he feels Ravz is the best person he could take! It's not totally forced, he does want to go and feel like a normal guy! 😳

Ahh but the whole bit with cotton candy was adorable, you portrayed the awkward initial feelings so well!😆😆 Thank you again! I love portraying awkwardness, it's the best part of any relationship!

I loved the phone convo Z! 😃😳 Totally cute! 😃 And it's okay Radz...I really was full of myself na? Gaurav will probably break up with me once he sees how crazy I really can be! 😆 But anyways, I tried to make it as friendly like and open as possible, how I'd expect best friends to talk to each other!

Ahhh tutoring's going to start! 😃😳 I can't wait to see how this goes Z! 😳 I hope I can make it good, I feel a bit clueless as to how I'm going to write it though!

Update soon! 😃Next part up soon! xx

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Originally posted by: bd670816

Awesome update.It was so funny and cute how Rajvot and Prem were nervous. cont.soon.
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Originally posted by: shabo24

aha Prem and Ravzie at the pier! So cute, so adorable, so perfect! Hehe, yes it was perfect!! Lucky Ravz, lol!

Meera man, tone down na? 😆Nooooo Meera can stay the way she is!! Her actions play a significant part in what happens later on! Love you, Zahra xx

--shabz

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

I'm back Zaza!!!!! Miss me!?!?!? 😳 *hug* MADDY!!! Of course I missed you!!! *hugs back*

OMG!!!!!!! Prem and Ducky are going to the ball together!!!!!!!! Eeeeeeek!!!!!!!! Kya twist hai story main!!!!!! 😆 Yes they are, LOL, it's a big twist isn't it? 😆

Of course i don't hate you!!!! Though i'm a little confused as to how this is a progress in PREMEER's story 😕, but i trust you and i know you will do a fab job with this new twist!!!!! 😉😆You will see eventually how it effects their story!

I'm quite glad to see a change in Heer's attitude slowly!!!!! 😃 The humility, and the fact that she is thankful to Prem is great!!! I like how she realizes that this is an oppertunity where she has to prove herself!!!! 👏Yes she is changing slowly! And she will prove herself aswell!

Awwwwww, Meeru is so adorable!!! She is such a great friend!!!!! *hug for her* Ducky was simply too cute!!! *pinching cheeks* The awkwardness, friendship, hesitancy, all these emotions between them were captured really really well!!!!!! *thumbs up* She is a great friend, she feels what she is doing is right, and in a way it is right, she just wants Prem to be happy- but she has chosen the wrong person! I want to pinch her cheeks too! Thank you Maddy!!

I love the story so far and i can't wait till the next part Will update soon!! Love Zahra xx

Love you, *hug* Love you too *hugs and flying kisses all the way from UK to Canada*

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was fantastic. cant wait for premeer to meet...continue soon. 😃

It's not that great or very long, but I wrote it very quick! 😛 This part is dedicated to Harshad Chopra as it is his birthday today!! He has totally captured all of our hearts and I wish him all the best on this special day! Happy Birthday Harshad!! 😳

PART FOURTEEN

'Namaste' she said, joining her hands respectively, 'I...ummm...I am here to see Prem' she spluttered. The woman's smile immediately grew and she grabbed Heer by the arm gently pulling her inside. 'You must be Heer! Come in! I'm Prem's mother- Gayatri!' she said, pushing Heer down on the sofa and rishing to the kitchen to pour Heer a cold drink from the kitchen. 'Aunty, don't go to any trouble!' protested Heer and Gayatri shook her head, smiling. 'No trouble at all!' Gayatri said.

Hearing the way Gayatri talked, Heer could tell that Prem had told his mother all about her. She didn't know whether to feel humiliated that Gayatri knew or thankful that she had been so understanding. 'Uh...where is Prem?' Heer asked, almost feeling embarrassed for having asked his mother this. Gayatri smiled. 'He is where he always is. In his bedroom, studying. I'll take you up' she said standing up and leading the way.

Heer could feel the heat rising in her cheeks as they walked up the stairs to Prem's bedroom. The idea of going into a boy's bedroom made her cheeks turn vividly red. She had never been inside a boy's bedroom before, in spite of what others thought of her. Gayatri stopped outside a door. 'This is my laadla's room' Gayatri laughed, 'Just don't tell him I said that, otherwise he might die of embarrassment' she said, and Heer automatically giggled. 'Prem!! Look who's here' called Gayatri whilst knocking on the door.

Heer didn't understand why her heart was suddenly beating so fast, and she almost jumped as the door opened. She felt an odd feeling as she saw Prem standing there looking at her. He was dressed in a casual t-shirt with jeans, his hair looked as if he had been running hands through them all day, and his eyes looked almost tired. He looked even more nervous than she felt. He didn't know what to feel as he saw her standing there next to his mother in his house. He was both surprised and happy to see that she had arrived on time, which obviously indicated that she was taking this whole tutoring matter seriously.

'I'll leave you both to it' cut in Gayatri and they both looked at her immediately, wishing she would stay and not leave them alone together. As Gayatri walked off both stood on the spot in silence staring at the floor for what felt like hours before Prem finally gathered up the courage to speak. 'Come inside' he said weakly, and she awkwardly took small steps inside. As she entered his bedroom she almost burst into laughter at the sight of it. She pursed her lips in order to suppress her giggles as she stared at the posters of mathematics equations and different science experiments that stuck to his walls.

But at the sight of the Albert Einstein poster she couldn't help but explode into a fit of giggles. Prem frowned, wondering what had suddenly some over her. 'What's so funny?' he asked innocently, but she continued to laugh. 'Seriously, what is so funny?' he repeated staring at her incredulously. 'You have a poster of Albert Einstein on you wall?' Heer asked, clutching onto her stomach. Prem shrugged, 'What's so funny about that? Doesn't everybody?' he asked naively and Heer laughed again.

'Ummm...no! If you came to my bedroom you will see posters of Shahrukh Khan, or Shahid Kapoor on my walls...' she pointed to the poster '...NOT of Albert Einstein'. It was now him blushing at the mention of him coming to her bedroom. 'Who or what are they?' asked Prem, and Heer rolled her eyes. 'Forget it- should we just start what I came here to do?' Heer asked and Prem nodded, dismaying over how he would put up with this girl for the next few weeks.

That was it!! Hope you all enjoyed it!! Can't wait to read comments!

Love Zahra xx