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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was amazing. I love the unsure and cute prem....cant wait for the next part....continue soon. 😊

Awww thank you Ghia!! I love him too! 😳 Glad you liked it! Will continue as soon as possible! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
Can't wait to see why he called her!! 😃😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
I finally unreserved =) On pg.44
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

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Unserved Yayyy!!
Do you knw how many times I tried to unreserve but people kept calling me? Yeah, it happens to me too! Anyway, lets play a game where you guess where I'll add an emoticon and which one cuz I'm too lazy to add em myself. Okay, I'll probably end up thinking of really weird emoticons in the totally wrong places!! 😆
I love how you added how Prem can't think of what to saw. Poor guy doesn't know what to choose. Good thing he thought of Meera and her suggestion. I bet Heer probbly had a huge smile o her face when Prem said yes. Everything is starting to work for her isn't it? Bet they both don't know where this'll lead them later on. Yeah, things are looking up for them!!
Ooh Prem called me? Wonder why. Can't wait to read the next update. Continue soon You will find out in the next part, which will be up very soon!! Thankoo, Love Zahra xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

Ummm yeah, well it is Thursday for me in the UK, so I decided to update! It's not a really great part, I wrote it quite quickly, but hope you like it! 😃

PART THIRTEEN
Prem stood on the pier gazing on to the troubled sea as it lashed against the pillars of the pier underneath him. He had made his decision and he knew it was the right decision. Once Ravjot got here, there would be no going back. If he didn't ask her now he wouldn't ever be able to ask her. She was his friend and he didn't take his decision out of helplessness or out of being forced by anyone. He decided to take the initiative and would just come out and ask her, despite the tinge of fear inside him.

He turned at the sound of her mellow voice behind him. Ravjot stood behind him in a simple pale yellow chudidar suit, twiddling with the edges of a plastic bag. She looked at him shyly, her famous blush spreading across her cheeks within seconds. Before he could speak she held up the bag for him. 'Cotton candy- I know how much you love it' said Ravjot, and Prem automatically smiled, taking the bag that she offered. They awkwardly walked to the nearest bench and sat down.

'Why did you call me to the pier Prem?' asked Ravjot. Prem looked up at her, he didn't know how to get the words out and felt himself going hot with anxiety. 'I don't really know how to say this...but...Ravz...I...Ummm...well you know the ball is coming up soon...' he started and Ravjot nodded. 'Well, I would really like it if you went to with me...'

'You're asking me to the ball?' asked a surprised Ravjot, to which Prem nodded nervously. This was the first time he was asking a girl on what technically classed as a 'date.' It amazed him that he even managed to get the words out straight. 'Err...y...yes' she muffled, 'I would love to go with you Prem.' He could tell she was just as nervous as him, and instinctively offered her some of the cotton candy to ease the mood. They were going to the ball- together, she could hardly believe it.

Prem and Ravjot sat for an hour eating the cotton candy, talking about things and awkwardly watching couples walk by holding hands or with their arms around each other. All of a sudden Prem slowly raised a hand to her face as if to caress her cheek and she shyly drew back. He gave her a small smile, 'You got a bit of cotton candy in your hair' he pointed to her hair and gently brushed it out. Looking at each other for a moment, they both ended up falling into laughter about it.

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'Meera you should have seen me- I was turning as red as a tomato' griped Ravjot and Meera laughed on the other end of the line. 'I don't know what he must be thinking, it was so embarrassing.' Ravjot felt the heat rise in her cheeks as she remembered the way his hand had reached to brush the cotton candy out of her hair.

'Ravz, why are you always worrying? See-I know Prem so well! I knew he would ask you to the ball!' boasted Meera. She couldn't wait for the ball getting more and more excited as the days passed. She was constantly dropping Gaurav hints about what to wear, how to pick her up and what to bring with him, seeing it as an important night for the both them.

'So when are we going to go dress shopping?' asked Meera excitedly and they began discussing the perfect colours and styles of what to wear to the ball.

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The following day after college Heer sat on her bed packing her stationary into her bag, assuming that Prem would have all the books and she wouldn't need to take any of them. She had no idea what to expect from the day ahead of her, she hoped she wouldn't end up embarrassing herself and looking like a dunce in front of the school geek- it was bad enough having to beg him for help. But she did feel extremely grateful for all that he was doing for her, he had the full liberty to refuse to help her yet he hadn't which clearly showed how considerate he is.

'Mama I'm going to my friend's house!' Heer called out before she exited out of the front door to make her way to Prem's house. She clutched onto the address and took a rickshaw to there, suddenly experiencing knots in her stomach as it stopped in front of his house. Giving the rickshaw driver money, she took apprehensive little steps towards the front door. Knocking on it three times she waited nervously for it to open.

Ooooh, so that was it!! Don't be angry at me for what I've done, this is the story so... Anyway, hope you liked it, can't wait to read comments!

Love Zahra xx

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
meera's spot! 😳

Maybe I shouldn't be so proud of that? 😆 😕🤔 I should really shut up and let the story play out !😛

Hmmmm but see I'm totally giggly over the way you described Ravs and Prem at the peir, (first of all, super romantic spot!😉) and it was just so awkward that it was still adorable in terms of simplicity! 😳😃 But I'm still curious as to why he asked her! 😕 (don't get me wrong, I'm happy he did, It proves me right, but I'm still wondering why...he was so adamant on not going...😆)

Ahh but the whole bit with cotton candy was adorable, you portrayed the awkward initial feelings so well!😆😆

I loved the phone convo Z! 😃😳 Totally cute! 😃 And it's okay Radz...I really was full of myself na? Gaurav will probably break up with me once he sees how crazy I really can be! 😆 But anyways,

Ahhh tutoring's going to start! 😃😳 I can't wait to see how this goes Z! 😳

Update soon! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

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Awesome update.. It was sooo funny and cute how Rajvot and Prem were nervous.. I cant wait till the tutoring starts!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aw, so sweet how awkward Ravzie and Prem are around one another. It really looked like they liked each other, as more than friends. So sweet.

And Meera *shakes head* full of herself. *ducks*

Loved the part, and I cannot wait to see how the first tutoring session goes!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: purplestar22

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Awesome update.. It was sooo funny and cute how Rajvot and Prem were nervous.. I cant wait till the tutoring starts!!

Hey Amna!!! Glad you liked it!! Yes it was very cute and funny!! I can't wait either!! Thank you!! Love Zahra xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello Poonam!! Thank you!!! I'm happy you liked it!! 😃 xx

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