FF: Bittersweet Allusions [Pt 13 pg.57] - Page 20

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

I read Part 3 long time ago and I think I even reserved. OK. Yes you did =) You said Blubber😆

I personally am in "awe" of this part! I love it...it actually feels like Cinderella where she is getting ready to go to the ball. Personally Ravs, I LOVE it. Aww thanks Shifali😃 I have a big smile on my face now =) And funny how me and Meera were talking about Cinderella😆

The part where 'We' her friends come to get her to go the party, was soo realisitc and Heer's displeasure...muhahaha! Yupyup. I tried to make it as realistic as I could. Glad to see it worked out =)

I personally LOVED it all Ravs! Something like Cinderella with Ravs touch and an Indian feel. Hehe. Aww thanks Shifali😳 I hate to admit it but this is actually making me blush a bit😆

But the funny part was, the dialouges right, so I was reading them and suddenly, my mind kept translating them into Punjabi which made me laugh even though I was not supposed to.<< Don't ask. LOL. I bet it's because of the conversations we had in Punjabi🤣 Maybe I should add some in the next update🤔

I LOVED the part~ Thanks =)

*Claps* *Bows*

Mice

Cinderella, Cinderella
All I hear is Cinderella, from the moment I get up
till shades of night are falling
There isn't any letup, I hear them calling, calling
"Go up and do the attic and go down and do the cellar, you can do them
both together
Cinderella."

How lovely it would be
if I could live in my fantasy
But in the middle of my dreaming
they're screaming
at me
Cinderella

Heer walked away angrily, leaving the rest still lost in thought about Prem. Chandni followed her outside

"Heer rukho na" Heer stopped and faced Chandni with an angry look on her face. "Why do you not like this Prem person?"

"Because he's rude" she said simply.

"Are you sure about that?" Chandni asked, knowing what had happened between Heer and Prem. "Are you sure that is wasn't a bit of your fault too?"

Heer sighed. She knew Chandni was right and didn't like it. "But still...I don't like him."

Chandni rolled her eyes. "You don't have to like him. Just go to the party, apologize for your little outburst and then leave. If he wants to accept it then ok and if not then at least you'll seem like the bigger person"

The thought of her looking better than Prem did bring a smile to her face.

"Of course you do have to mean it" spoke Meera, who was standing at the doorway.

"So you're finally done daydreaming?"

"No." replied Kimz, who still had a lost look in her eyes.

"Snap out of it Kimz. He's not THAT good looking" smiled Chandni.

"That's because you're too busy staring at Chandu" Shabz smirked while Chandni turned a bright shade of red.

"Speaking of Chandu, kahan hain tumhare pati dev?" asked Ravs.

"Main yahan hoon" came a voice from behind Heer. "So Heer, I heard you had an interesting day yesterday" Chandu tried to hold back a laugh but made a serious face when Chandni gave him "the look"

"Jiju aap bhi na" Heer pouted.

"Do you know him?" asked Shifali. Since Chandu was the doodwala, he knew everyone in the village,

"Yeah I know him. He's ok I guess" he replied.

"Maybe you can introduce us?" Shabz batted her eyes while Chandni rolled her eyes.

"Oye Shabz! Stop hitting on jiju" Heer couldn't help but laugh at Shabz's behaviour. She turned to face Chandu "What do you know about him?"

"Nothing really. He seems ok. Hey you want to pull a prank on him?" Chandu loved pulling pranks and knew that Heer would never back down from something as good as this.

Chandni gave her husband a disapproving look. "She's supposed to apologize to him and you're trying to have her prank him?"

"What? I'm not forcing her to do it. I'm just asking her. If she happens to agree, it's not my fault now is it?" Chandni knew he had a point.

"Yes jiju!" Heer had a big smile on her face, it was as if the day just got brighter.

"I want to prank him too" Meera smiled. Everyone turned to look at her.

"YOU want to pull a prank?" asked Shabz

"Yeah. Why?" Meera looked confused.

"Because you're supposed to be the responsible one" Shifali pointed out.

"But if I prank Prem, I'll get to be closer to him" Meera explained.

Kimz understood what Meera was getting at. "See! I knew you weren't that innocent!" she exclaimed.

"No, none of you guys are getting involved. For all I know you might ruin it by staring at him for too long and get distracted" seeing how crazy her friends were over this new comer made Heer more determined. She walked away with Chandu, leaving Meera sulking and Kimz trying to convince everyone that Meera's not innocent.

Chandu and Heer walked as far as they could until they were far from everyone.

"So...what do you have in mind?" she asked.

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K so I finally updated😃 And I had a lot to say but now I can't remember what it was😆 But anyway, how are you all? Hope you liked the update =) Btw incase anyone cares, my sister deleted Africa from our computer cuz she said I listened to it too many much Oh and I have a new favourite song😃 It's called Tu Hi Mere Rab Ki Tarah Hain. I love it😃 And it's3:36 a.m. so I think I should go sleep😆 So if I have any mistakes, that would explain why😆

mine!

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hey thts soooo sweet and cute updt.wow prank on prem thts grt news.plzzzzz continue asap.