FF: Bittersweet Allusions [Pt 13 pg.57] - Page 22

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How would you guys feel if I ended this? As in discontinued?
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Discontinued...I'd feel horrible..if you ended it...in 3 part process, I'd be okay!😳
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Pst Meera!
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Nope...initially I was like....😔 Then I realized...first of all you love me too much...and second of all...it is still april fools day! 😛
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Oh well. It was a good try😆

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I almost believed you! 😃 😳 If that helps? 😳

I was going to play a prank too...but I'm too nice! 😆
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I would, but now that I told you...kinda pointless! 😆 😉 anyways...now I have to go off...bye! 😃
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chowiee... double post 😕....

was supposed to post in another thread... i wonder what's wrong wid me or I-F these days 😕...

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Part 5

After Chandu told Heer his plan, she stood there, contemplating on where or not she should go through with it while Chandni and Kaki's words rang through her ears. After a while she sighed. "I can't do it Chandu. Whatever happened yesterday was sort of my fault and I have to apologize instead of making things worse."

"Chandni and Kaki already talked to you didn't they?" Chandu asked knowingly. Normally nothing would stop Heer from pulling a prank, especially a prank such as the one Chandu had in mind.

Heer quietly nodded. "Sorry Jiju" she smiled cutely

Chandu sighed. "Koi baat nahin. Some other time then. Waise knowing you, you'll probably pick another fight and decide to prank him after all" he joked. Heer glared at him and walked away.

While she was walking, she was thinking of a way to apologize. Heer wasn't used to apologizing and after yelling at Prem, she needed to think of a good way to do it. Why do I have such a big mouth? She thought. If only she hadn't overreacted then she wouldn't be in this mess. It was a known fact that Heer does whatever she wants and doesn't bow down to anyone, let alone admit her mistakes. This was going to hurt her ego for sure. As she was walking in deep thought, she saw takhurain ji muttering about so she decided to go ask her what was wrong.

"Kya hua auntie?" Takhurain smiled at her. She had known Heer since she was little and Heer was the only one who called her auntie.

"Kuch nahin beta. My grandson came to visit me for the first time in years and I'm preparing for that party. Par yahaan toh sab kaam chor hain" she looked at all the workers angrily.

"Do you want some help?" Heer smiled.

"It's ok. I couldn't possibly ask you to help"

"Koi baat nahin auntie. I don't mind"

After a lot of insisting, takhurain finally agreed and allowed Heer to help clean up. Heer tied her dupatta to the side and grabbed the broom and started sweeping the floor. If only Kaki could see me now, she's be so proud of me thought Heer. It's not that Heer was lazy or anything, but doing housework was not something she was known for. Of course when it came to helping others, she would readily lend help, not that most people asked her since they were afraid of something going wrong, takhurain being the exception of course.

While Heer was busy at work, Prem was in his room having trouble deciding what to wear. "Why did dadi have to plan such a huge party and invite the whole village? It's not like it's the first time I've come here" he muttered. He wasn't a big fan of parties and he didn't keep that fact hidden from takhuryain. In fact, he had spent the whole day complaining and after she had said she didn't want to hear another word about it from him, he went to his room and sulked.

Since it was almost 5, he decided that he might as well start getting ready. He took a shower and then pulled out a dark blue sherwani and a forest-green one. Which one should I wear? He deliberated but couldn't decide. "Dadi!" he yelled out a while later, taking both the sherwanis with him for takhurain to decide.

Heer was done sweeping the floor and was helping in the kitchen. She had gone outside to find Ramu kaka and ask him to buy some vegetables and he had given her a basket full of them. Unknown to her was that while she had been outside, someone had mopped the floor and while walking, she slipped but was caught by a pair of strong hands while the basket and sherwanis fell, though neither of the two cared and just stared into each other's eyes.

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Yes yes I know it's been a while since I updated but I'm sure we all know that I'm a lazy bum. Special thanks to Meera for helping me while writing this =) I don't feel like saying anything else today so yeah...Hopefully you guys like the update and sorry if there are any mistakes. I was too lazy to edit it...

Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
me!

*unreserved*

Okay first of all you dont need to thank me, I didn't really help, I just picked sherwani colors!😳😆

I've got to say though, I'm super proud of Heer for not going through with pranking Prem! 😳 As much as it would have made the party fun, it would have been wrong!😆 But yay, I can't wait to see what's going to happen at the part now!😳

Aww Heer's so shweet, helping the thakurain to make preparations for the party! 😳 And then on the other side poor Prem's all confused, ohh maybe it's like cinderella, where the his dadi's having the party so that they can find a suitable wife for the "prince" and oh the dadi will choose Heer cus she's the sweetheart who always helps! 😃 I know you won't use that idea, but it'll still work!😉😳

Anyways--update soon! 😃

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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