Fatal Game of Marriage~*Pt 20 Pg 93 20/7*~ - Page 64

Originally posted by: Mus@

awesome yaar,veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ggggggggggooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddd update,liked every part specially the dancing part of the two loving couple😳 and when prem bringing heer down too good😆,you r truely a very talented writer.

waiting for your next update.

Originally posted by: bd670816

it was awesome. loved it very much. cont.soon.

hi rohit,update was superb loved it soo much.very interesting...can't wait to see what happens next...plzzz update asap..

-sugi

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Awesome Update!!

Update Soon!!

Originally posted by: Reemz93

hey hun!

gr8 upd8! luvin the way prem carried her all the way down even with heer's resistance...lol...ah and of course heer shuda known jus 2 giv in earlier, she wud've had longer to enjoy bein in his arms that way, not that she doesnt get there often enough neway...*ahemahem*...lol


Thanks for the comment dear, i am glad that you like it, yeah he is just so naughty and when anyone challenges him he goes mad.

i see anjali n harman's relationship startin 2 blossom but seriously, they cant tell that its more than just a crush...they're all bullheaded, they jus cant C when someone is meant 4 them...lol

Yeah they are all confused😉

upd8 soon hun! w8in eagerly...

xxx

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey!!!

thanx fot the Pm Rohit!!

man that was some update, too good! mindblowing,

i just got to read the update, and it is superb...


Thanks for the compliments

i loved how Prem carried Heer all the way down to show the Khanna guts! Go Prem! and i loved Heer's repelled actions towards Prem..very nicely written.

Thanks dear, yeah he was challenged he had to do it😉

also one thing i love about reading FF, is because u put in wat the characters think, wat they feel in each situation created. Prem and Heer's reactions, emotions, were super! Rohit the more i say, the less its gonna be.. im speechless.....

Thats really good to hear from you, i am floored.

i also would like to add... I hate NIKKIE😡!!! lol, but really she is a pain! That is true and she will become more pain later😆😆

and i like how ur progressing Anjali, and Harmans story too.. very nice mix.

loved the update Rohit!

keep it up, and take care till then..

~nikki😳😃😊

Originally posted by: xxlibragurlxx

hey rohit...thanks for the pm...prem is too good and heer is just hilarious...she is so attracted to him and she tries to escape from her feelings bt in the end she'll hae to accept the truth...that nikki is a no.1 b**** and many other things that im thinking but cant type cos they're against IF rules...i personally wanna kill her...piece of s***...that's what she is...the ending was great with anjali and harman...atleast harman accepted his love...hes the only smart one...the others r too confused like anjali or plain stupid like prem and heer lol....cont soon

Originally posted by: im_charmed

hey.
awesome update as usual. like the progress between Anjali and Harman. Prem and Heer are hilarious,, they're trying soo hard to deny what they really feel for each other. hope they accept it soon.
please update soon

Originally posted by: sweetness4eva

Heyy, I just read your entire fan fiction in the past night!! it was awesome!1 it shows somewhat of an eternal lovestory here too!!1 Please let heer tell prem that she s ot married to sahil? i mean PleasE? I dont want them to have any misunderstandings? When he wakes up let him know she s not married and the kid is his?!? thanks!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: sonu0511

hey 15 part was great...awesome...

loved premheer ....