Fatal Game of Marriage~*Pt 20 Pg 93 20/7*~

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#651

hey
awesum super
loved it tooo goood
is still the flashback?

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snowwhite30

@snowwhite30

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#652

Hey awesome FF...... fulll of emotions...... i really cried reading some parts.... gr8 work..... keep updating.....

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sugii

@sugii

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#653

excellent update...prem and heer 's POV r superb.loved it soo much.plzz continue asap..

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#654

awww....so sad. that was amazing. ur descriptions of their feelings was awesome. I almost cried reading it....it was so emotional. continue soon. 😃

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sonu

@sonu0511

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#655

hey very nice update...

i hope prem doesnt leave and questions her...

its nice to see them feeling for each other...

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Deizy

@Deizy

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#656

hi...oh god it's going very interesting..owesome

ctn soonnn

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snowwhite30

@snowwhite30

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#657

LOved ur FF....... Plzz update next part soon.................

& 1 question 4u... what r ridhima & armaan doing here......sometimes times heer changes in to ridhima & prem in to armaan.....i was confused wen i started reading this FF.... but now i understood it....

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Nikita

@HCDeewani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#658

Rohit..that was superb!! i lloved the thoughts..

there are various reasons for loving your FF, but the thing is i absolutely love..love..love the thoughts you incorperate in each paragraph..ahhh its too good.

the questions, the feelings, the realization. the confusion..ahh the list can go on.. i loved it!

Prem's confidence in his looks, and attitiude..and the way Heer just couldnt realize wat was happening eirth..i just loved it. i have nothing to say, except for the fact that i LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon..

take till then, and keep smiling..

~nikki😳😊