Fatal Game of Marriage~*Pt 20 Pg 93 20/7*~ - Page 62

hey, i jst read all ur parts...truly amazing!!

i liked how u went from the past to the present to the past, it really keeps the story going, nd i cant wait fer the story to come back to the present, so heer will be able to tell everyone bout her child, nd prem gets better, nd lol obv, they live happily ever after...

but those two evil ppl, not really lykin their character, too much jealousy, it shows how jealousy can make a person do too much wrong, nd they wont even realize it...

lol, finaly, cant wait fer the update, keep it up!

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Hey,

Nice part! haha Heer is being teased constantly!!!! Thanks dear i am glad that you like it😉

Oh ho, Premeer can't keep their hands of each other, can they!?!?!? That was so intense and passionate, as usual!!!!!! lol Yeah they just cant resist eachother, spark is there on the both end😆😆

I wonder what Prem is about to do!!!!! It seems Heer's pleadings have no effect on Prem!!!!! lol

Great part, can't wait till the next one!!!!

Sorry for the late reply

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey, rohit....

sry yaar, i didnt comment on the last 2 parts..*holds ears*
Its okies dear, i can understand

all i have to say this is soo interesting, its too good!!

again the attraction between Prem and Heer is too cute, i find it to be really cute!!


i am glad that you felt that to be good.

i love the oh-so-lovely names they have given eachother rofl... very good,

i cant wait for the next updates!! up date wen u get the chance, and til then, take care, lol...

~nikki😃😳

Will update soon

ps.

again really sry that i neva got to comment on the last two, and thanx for the PM's..

Originally posted by: sonu0511

mindblowing...great...

thanks for the pm...

waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: Deizy

hi rohit...thanks for the pm!!!

owesome!!!!!

cntn soonnnnn

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

😆😉 Rohit u r here too ....😉.... I am fan of Preem heer ... good to know ... i will read this one to know what will happen with Mayank and Nups contract marraige .... Rohit I am going to cheat ..😆😆. I have hit a Jack Pot when i find this one

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

just gone through chapter 9 i knew it that Nikki will be Jealous and will creat troubles .... i was right ....


Yeah you were right absolutely😉

so Chipakli and monkey will get married ... 😆😉 due to drinks and kisses....Yup...will they be??

now let me check chapter 10 ... thanks this one have an index...😉

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

Rohit u will kill me ... so she didn't marry sahil but lied to Preem/ Mayank sis.... my Preem and My Mayu😭.... why yaar ...😭..... God what will happen now .....she needs to know thta Preem/ Myank is in hospital ....😭... lets check next chapter ...