Fatal Game of Marriage~*Pt 20 Pg 93 20/7*~ - Page 63

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

Rohit excellent chapter 11 the dialogues b/w Heer/ Nups and the sis were too good and too emotional ..

Thanks dear, i am glad that you loved them😛

it was very very touching chapter ... the way u showed both emotion and confusions.... Hats off to u ... I am giving standing ovation to u on this chapter ... to sweet , tooo touching and in simple word Just plain great ... loved it 👏👏👏 👏


Thanks you.....!!!!




.... I want the sis to tell her the truth but i guess it is need to be hidden for future plot ... but can't wait when all the misunderstanding clears ....

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesome super
ok this was the flashback right
tooooo goooood
loved it
thankz for pm

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
thanks for the PM. that was amazing. love harman and anjali scenes....they were so cute. continue soon. 😊

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

Rohit i told my self i wlll comment on that Mayur ones ... but just read that chapter when Heer sees preem in hospital ... yaar u made me cry again ..😭😭. thank God not in office but at home right now ... the scene where preem , heer and child connect was beyond words completely and totally beautiful , tears r running from my eyes as i write this .😭.. Rohit till yet from all the chapters and all the fan fics i have ever read including yours ... this hospital scene ss The best 👏👏👏great going ...👏
👏


Awwww....really sorry sana to make you cry, but what will happen when you will read it for Mayur?? You wont feel the same as you know the scene, so i am giving little twist there😆

this scene did something to my heart :🥺

His Heart was Feeling it'His Blood'His Heart felt the Bond..True Bond of Love'His Hands moved'.Moved for the First time'Rocking away Heers Hands'lying on his arm 'IT went to touch her bulge'The Life..His Blood'His Unborn..Child..His Heart felt the contact'His heart started to beat'He was back back to life'

Heer Felt the movement of his hands touching her bulge'She smiled'He was Back'He has to come'He cant leave me'She lifted her head to see his hands still on the Bulge'she thanked her child'He saved him'

Prem's heart Felt the movement'Of the child'He Kicked'The child Kicked..First time'feeling his Father's warmth'Prem's heart skipped'in joy'His heart began to beat beat to life'The Machines..Attached..That monitor the heartbeat'beaped'He was Backkk'. 👏

👏 marvelous , awe-inspiring 👏 &

👏 overwhelming 👏

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

after reading this part 13 ... i am telling u rohit i am taking out a gun and to shoot these 2.. stupid ppl ...sahil and Nikki ............. how dare they ...😡... My Preem / Heer and My Mayur 😭😭😭

lets see what happen in chapter 14 😕

by the way why didn't u update ur index yaar ... !!!

Originally posted by: 876251188762

loved it thnks =)

luv

anni

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

😆😆😆 Rohit that kiss before the engagement will be hot stuff for r frnd at MJHt forum 😆 I liked the scne though ... i liked how every body tease them

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey a beautiful update it waz too good prem and heer dere just to sweet cant w8 to read da next part update soon

Originally posted by: sam78

it was awesome.

niki wants to kill heer that is sad.

harman and anjali are in love that is great.

thanks for the upate and PM

Originally posted by: Orion

amazing update as usual 👏....LOVED reading it! 😃

Eagerly waiting for the next part ...............

btw...thnx for the pm!