[FF]~** Dor**~ (PART 26 updated- Pg:39 june 26th) - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys sorry if there is any typo or bloopers......... if u cum across any major ones please let me knoand i will fix it...........
and thnx for reading😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waitinggggggggg for da update asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
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DOR PART 7

continued after preet decied to take meher to dinner to escape from her questions regarding heer.......

meher cums out of her room and for a surprise she is wearing a saree this time and she is looking beautiful in tarquish colour which was wrapprd around her............ preet was stumped when he first looked at her......... he said ' wah kya baat hai meher mujhe to nahi pata tha ki tum kabhi kabhi sundar bhi lah sakti ho...... ' meher : ' kya matlab hai tumhara preet bahi time main kharaab dikhti hoon kya...' preet ' maine to aisa nahi kaha par waise samajhdar ko ishara kafi hota hai....' meher is kinda annoyed at this but preet says sorry and says that ita was just a joke but she is looking very beautiful...... meher blushes hearing this and they share an awkward silent moment..........

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at shiv mandir........... after cuming to kno that advit and rishabh are the same people heer tells prem all about rishabh and his plan and prem is shocked to hear all this........ although prem is not bale to recall many things about rishabh but he believes each and every word of heer....... prem ' heer abhi tak job hi kuch bhi humne ek doosre ko bataya hai wo hamari pichli zindagi ki baatein thin..... mujhe pata hai ki shayad us zindagi se judi problems ko solve karne mein kuch waqt aur lag jaye lekin main chahta hoon ki aaj se hum apni ek khud ki duniya basayein aur ek nayi zindagi ki buniyad rakhen..... main janta hoon ki hum is duniya mein tabtak chain se nahi reh sake jabtak sab kuch theek nahi ho jaata lekin heer hum jab bhi ek saath honge hum is duniya ko mehsoos to kar sakte hian na........... ' heer holds prem hands and brushes her lips gently against them and says ' haan prem tum theek keh rahe ho muddaton baad humien ek doosre ka saath mila hai aur humein is pal ko zaya nahin karna chahiye....'

prem wears a smile on his face gets up holds heer's hands forces her to get up and says ' to phir chalo...... ' heer : ' par kahaan' prem 'are kahaan matlab..... is pal ko celebrate karne..... heer.... ab mera itna to hak banta hi na ki main tumhe ek acchi si romantic si date par le jaoon.... haan bolo... hum buddhe to thodi hai nahi aur agar hote bhi tabhi main tumhe zaroor le jaata.... ( and he gives a little push on her shoulder from his shoulder...) heer is just lookin down and blushing... prem ' heer ab app sharmana band kariye aur mujhe haan ya na mein jawaab dijiye ..... are ye kya baat hoti hai heer zara main bhi to jaanoo mera itna hak hai ya nahin....' heer feeling very shy says haan and tries to run away but prem grabs her wrist just in time and pulls her closer to himself and locks her waist in his arms lookin into her eyes he says. 'itni mushkil se miley hain itni aasani kaise jaane doon heer....' heer struggling a bit says ab nahi chalna hai kya romantic dinner pe' prem 'ab to chalna hi padega aapne jo kaha hai ' prem lifts her in his arms and carries her to his car and finally they leave......... prem and heer both reach a beautiful restaurant it had little open huts where the roof was supported by pillars and in each hut there were seating arrangement and there were candles all around the hut and a candle in the middle of the table....... the view was breathtaking..... it seemed the most beautiful place they had ever seen..... they go to one of the huts and prem pulls out a chair and gestures towards heer to be seated there..... and he sits opposeite her..... as soon as prem sat down heer was surpised to see preet and meher at the same restaurant but fortunately meher had her back toward prem and heer's table....... even preet spots heer but he was not able to make out whom she as siting but hi s main priority was that meher shudnt see her....... heer gets up and prem holds her hand and asks where r u goin she said to the washroom prem says 'jaldi aana i will miss u' as sson as heer leaves he remembers that sumthing similar has happned b4 too (wen heer/prem went and preet and every1 else join them )...

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heer msgs preet and calls her towards the washroom..... preet goes there ' preet tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho....' 'wo bhabhi actually meher aapke bare mein mujhse bar bar pooch rahi thi to uska mind thoda divert karne ke liye main use dinner pe le aaya' (preet was smiling with his teeth showing ) ' aise hass kya rahe ho preet poori duniya mein tumhe yahi restaurant mila tha kya are main yahaan prem ke saath aayi hoon....' preet ' ye accha hai akele PB ko milne jaati ho aur mujhe kuch nahi batati aur ulta mujhe hi dat rahi ho dekho heer bhabhi this is not fair haan...... accha nyways main abhi PB se mil ke aata hoon.......' heer grabs his hand and says ' pagal to nahi ho gaye ho preet meher hai tumhare saath agar usne dekh liya to sab gadbad ho jayegi.....' preet gives a oh hi forgot look.. then he asks ki accha ye batao PB kuch bataya ki wo aise kyun kar rahe the.....' heer tells him all about rr and prem's memory but she says still he does recognise and remembers sum things.... they were talkin to each other and then heer spots meher and prem cuming towards washroom she turns immediately and tells preet that both are cuming and do sumthin...... preet walks a bit sideways and then walke towards meher grabs her by the shoulder and turns her around and says 'are meher tum yahaan main t obas aane hi wala tha wo actually ek dost mil gaya tha to use baat karne lag gaya....' while prem walked straight and wen heer felt that coast is clear she turned but there another surprise was waiting for her she saw rishabh walking towards her just behind prem..... she was panicking she didn't no wat to do...... but then she said out loud 'rishabh tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho....' prem surprised to hear that b4 prem cud react she goes towards rr collides with prem and and in a fraction of a second wispers go straight meet in car.... then says srry out loud and continues walking towards rr....... heer ' tum mera peecha karna kab band karoge' rr ' heer for ur kind information main tumhara peecha nahi kar raha tha mujhe aur bhi bahut kaam hai tumhara peecha karne ke alava aur waise bhi tum jaa bhi kahaan sakti ho.... aakhir apne pariwaar se itna pyaar jo karti ho....... unhe khushiyan dene keliye tum mere paas hi to aaogi.....' (gives his side smile) heer ' bas rishabh ye mat bhoolo ki main ye shaadi sirf apne bauji aur unke pariwaar ke liye kar rahi hoon...... aur waise bhi agar mere pas koi raasta hota to main ye shadi kabhi nahi karti......' she pushes him aside gives hin a look full of disgust and walks away........ rr ' tum job hi kar lo heer shaadi to tumhe mujhse hi karni hogi ' ( he again smiled but little did he kno that simran was hearing everything ) simran was shocked to hear that she was totally shattered she had thought that she will giv rishabh surprise as it had been a year since thre engagement but she never knew that she herself is goin to get a surprise from rr that too in this way.....

heer goes to the car..... ' wo rishabh samajhta kya hai apne aap ko...... use to main bataungi ki kaun kisse shadi karega....... use to main dekh lungi...' prem luks at her and smiles ' ab tumhe kya hua prem main inti pareshan hoon aur tum has rahe ho....... ' prem ' nahi main to ye dekh raha tha ki tumhe gussa bhi aata hai... lekin accha hai kabhi kabhi gussa hona cahiye aakhir tum itni pyaari jo lagti ho.....' and at that moment all the anger melted away and heer laughes along with prem......... they cudnt have nythin bcuz of rr so they decided to have paani puri in the way they fed each other and were just lost in each other..... finally prem left heer at jzoo.... heer sneeked inside and to her relief everybody was asleep....she went into her room and was reliving the moments that she spent with prem....... suddenly she heard a knock on the window she opened looked outside but couldn't see ny1 she turned and just then prem hopped in and grabbed her from behind she was about to shout but prem said main hoon.... she turned ' prem tum pagal to nahi ho gaye ho tum ye kya kar rahe ho.....' prem 'heer bas ab ye sab sawal baad mein wo main actually umahre liye ek gift laya tha par main tumhe dena bhool gaya.... he gives to her and says heer ye dress tumhare liye... it was pink salwaar kameez very similar to wat he had gifted her earlier.... heer took it and said bahut sundar hai prem par tumne to mujhe aisi gift pehle bhi di thi.. prem i dunt remember it but nevertheless i want u to wear it. Heer ' abhi. Nahi abhi nahi prem....' but them prem gives a please kinda luk so she goes and wears it..... she was looking ravishing and prem was just flattered prem ' heer tum to bilkul.....' 'chaudhvi ka chand lag rahi ho wagarah wagarah....'

heer : ' preet ... tum yahaan ' ' ab bhai jahaan jahaan ram wahaan wahaan lakshman...' heer was just goin to say sumthin but prem was holding his head it was hurting.... ' he remembers heer wearing he same clothes remembers how he had confessed his luv for her.....' PB kya hua...... prem kya hua....' prem kuch nahi wo thoda sir dard ho raha hai...'

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gayatri in her room.. feels sumthin... gets up walks out of her room (kabhi khushi kabhi gham tune playin in the background... ' gayatri walking towards heer's room 'prem mera prem aaya hai mera prem aaya hai....... ' preet hears gayatri and walks out of heer's room and says maa aap yahaan kya kar rahi hain. 'mera prem mera prem aaya ha......' preet ' haan ma prem bhai yahin hian hum sab ke beech par abhi bahut raat ho gayi hai aap chakiye so jaayiye.....' gayatri ' prem mera prem aaya hai..... ' (she keeps on sayin that) and in the room prem is having flash backs of heer and then he suddenly see gayatri's photo and says ' maa' and gayatri looks back and says ' prem ne mujhe bulaya hai mujhe jaana hai uske paas....' preet ' haan maa challenge par kal abhi bahut raat hogai hai and again they start walkin towards gayatri's room..... and in heer's room prem faints........


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Posted: 16 years ago
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i m really very sorry guyz for updating a bit late actually i went out with my family........ so i m really very sorry....... and sweta i m really very very sorry dear to u specialyy........
and i might not b able to update it very frequesntly as i have my midterms but i promise wenevr i get time i will do it..........
thnks for reading it luv u all 🤗
-iksha.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
VERY GOOD UPDATE.i loved it.I hope prem will regain his memory soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
that was really good.. cute premeer scene!!! update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
very nice tooo good
loved premeer scene

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hy it wz gud updt soon plzzzzzz

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