[FF]~** Dor**~ (PART 26 updated- Pg:39 june 26th) - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i m realli very sorry as i said i m busy with my university so i might not be able to update frquently but i will try my best to do it......

---------DOR PART 8--------

preet sum how manages to take gayatri to her room and make her lie down.... as soon as she was asleep preet goes to check on heer and prem...... prem had fainted and heer was struggling to put him on the bed..... preet came in and helped her out......

PREET : 'bhabhi PB ko kya ho gaya ye achanak aise behosh kyun ho gaye'

HEER: ' pata nahi preet kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai....... par ab hum kya karenge prem ko aisi halat mein kahin le bhi to nahi ja sakte......'

PREET: ' filhaal to prem bhaiya ko yahin pe rehne dijiye aur aap andar se karma band kar lijiyega taki subah glati se bhi koi aapke kamre mein na aa paye.... baaki main kuch sochta hoon aur subah dekhte hain ki kay kar sakte hain.......' preet stands up to leave looks at prem and think 'prem bhaiya aaj is ghar mein ram ka greh pravesh hua hai aur bahut jald ye ghar uske astitva ko bhi pehchanega ye mera vaada hai aapse'

Heer locks the door from inside... she goes and removes his shoes puts a blanket on him and sits beside him... holds his hand and couldn't resist herself from stroking his forehead which were covered with silky hairs.....

HEER : ' tumhe pata hai prem jab tum chale gaye the to main bahut akeli pad gayi thi.... aisa lag raha tha ki jaise zindagi mein kuch bacha hi nahi...... lekin phir main apni dhakano ko dhadakhte hue sunti thi to aisa lagta tha ki kahin na kahin tum ho prem tum ho..... aur dekho mera vishwaas jeet gaya prem meri dhakkane jeet gayin..... aur ye is baat ka sabot hai prem ki hum ek hain aur hamari sasoon ki dor ek doosre se judi hui hai jise koi nahi tod sakta.....' ( heer falls asleep while talking )

In the morning when heer wakes up prem was no there she thaught that where can prem possibly go then she thaught may b in the washroom but he wasn't there then she panicks..... she didn't know at to do she was just praying that nuthin shud go wrong....... then preet enters ' bhabhi bhai kahaan hain'

HEER : ' wo pata nahi preet maine jab subah uthi to prem kamre mein nahi tha muhe to bahut dar lag raha hai agar ghar meinkisi ne use dekh liya to!!!!'

PREET : ' aap ghabraiye mat bhabhi main dekhta hoon ' preet was goin out suddenly heer spots prem he was walking casually but then she also saw lallu walking from different direction reading the newspaper....... seeing this heer and preet both get tensed......... preet says bhabhi aap prem bhai ko sambhalo main bauji ko sambhalta hoon...... preet goes towards lallu and heer goes towards prem....... prem was just goin to say bauji when heer grabs his hand and pulls him inside a room...... (prem's room ) while pulling sumhow heer disbalanses herself and falls on the bed with prem falling over her....... they have an eye locking session......

Preet goes to lallu and and starts discussing about what was was the news in the paper and then he and lallu both walk towards the main hall downstairs and then preet make sum excuse about office work and goes from there.....

preet cums inside the room and sees prem and heer in that position and smiles.... and makes an intruding noice hmm..... hmm..... they get up embarrassed and both prem and heer say ' wo preet wo.....'

PREET: 'wo preet wo kya kar rahe ho seedhe bolo na yaar preet hum romance kar rahe the ek doosre ki aankhon mein kho gaye the...... '

PREM: ' preet to ek mauka bhi chodta hai jab dekho tab beech mein tapak padta hai...... ruk ja aaj main tujhe batata hoon ki romance kya hota hai......'

PREET : 'kyun aaj mere saath romance karne ka irada hai kya heer bhabhi se man bhar gaya kya......'

PREM: ' hair ja abhi main tujhe batata hoon..... ruk ruk main abhi batata hoon ' (they start running around the room) but heer suddenly realizes that prem was acting very differently with preet just like he used to do previously and why was he goin to call bauji when we didn't even recongnize.....

HEER : ' prem mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.....'

PREM: ' nahi heer abhi nahi aaj to main is badmash ke akal theekane laga kar he rahunga......'

Heer goes to prem and looks him in the eyes and says that nahi prem mujhe abhi tumse baat karni hai.... prem understood that it was sumthin very important and says ' heer tum itni pareshaan kyun ho aakhir baat kya hai.....'

HEER : 'prem abhi tum nauji ke pas kyun jaa rahe the..... kyun jaa raha tha matlab are subah subah unka aashirwaad lene jaa raha tha.....' (heer and preet both re surprised )

PREET: 'iska matlab bhaiya aapko sab kuch yaad hai..... i mean main ma bauji preet veera sab.....'

PREM : ' ye kaise baat kar rahe ho mujhe kyun nahi yaad hoga....' ( but then it strikes to him all the past things what happened last night.... everything, it seemed that he had forgotten everything that had happened to him in past few days ) and then he says ' ma..... ma kahaan hain preet maa kahaan hain heer ma kahaan hain mujhe unse milna hai.....'

HEER: 'nahi prem abhi nahi main chahati hoon ki abhki baar agar ma tumse mile to unhe tumse alag na hona pade........ isliye tumhe thoda intezaar karne hoga prem...'

PREM : 'ye tum kya keh rahi ho heer.....'

HEER : 'haan prem tumhaare peeche yahaan bahut kuch ho gaya prem then he tells how veera got married to nihaal........ and how Harman left the house........ '

PREM : ' to phir meher heer......... meher kahaan hai tum chinta mat karo heer meher ki shaadi main bahut dhoom dhaam se ek bahut acche ghar mein karunga........'

PREET: 'uski zaroorat nahi padegi PB...... meher ki shaadi ho chuki hai...... mujhse'

PREM : ( shocked) ' kya... par ashlesha..... preet tune ye sab kaise.....' the heer explained everything that they decided to do that bcuz of bauji and then DJ had cum and tortured every1....... and then the biggest thing heer marrying rr for all his dreams.......

PREM : (tears in his eyes....) ' preet tu sach mein bahut bada ho gaya preet bahut bada....... aaj mujhe tujhpe naaz hai........ tune bauji ke liye pane aap ko hi kurbaan kar diya..... aur heer tum tum to mere pariwaar ke liya khudkhushi karne jaa rahi heer..... tum dodno is had tak jaa sakte ho sirf is pariwaas ko bacahne ke liye ye maine kabhi nah socha tha.......'

PREET : ' kaise nahi karte PB jo yakeen aur jo vishwaas apko hamare upar tha hum kabhi nahi tutne dete PB hum khud toot sakte hain par is pariwaar ko jode rakhne ki hamari koshish nahi toot sakti......'

PREM : 'bahut badi badi baatein karne lag gaya hai tu.... haan' and then they hug.......

PREM: ' bas bahut ho gaya..... ab main aa gaya hoom ab main sab theek kar doonga sabse pehle t mujhe sam se jaake baat karni hogi.......'

HEER: 'magar prem jabtak ye sabh theek nahi ho jaaye hum ghar mein nahi bata sakte kit tum.......'

PREM : ' main samajh gaya heer tumhe aur kuch bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai..........'

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome and close to our prediction for KDMHMD
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
great update. I am so happy prem remembers everything now...hope this happens in the real show too soon 😍 prem and preet scenes were really cute. continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome..its good he got his memory back!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guyzz here is another update njoy........ srry for the delay though......
------------DOR PART 9-----------------
continued after prem preet heer interaction after he gets his memory back.............

Prem goes away from jzoo... without meeting anyone but ofcourse preet and heer...........

Prem goes to sam's place........ in sam's house she is still thinking about rr and how he is two-faced... she thinks that upon sayin once she agreed to keep prem away from his family she did such an evil thing for him and what did she get in return betrayal......... she thinks that she is not going to take this rr will have to pay for it......... just then prem enters......

SAM: 'gaurav mujhe tumse bahut zaroori baat karni hai...........'

PREM : 'lekin mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni sam infact mujhe to yahaan pe wapas aana hi nah chahiye tha magar maine socha ki agar main tum jaise ban gaya to humme fark kya reh jayega ya yun kahoon ki prem aur gaurav mein fark kay reh jayega.......'

SAM : all surprised ' kya matlab tumhe pata chal gaya kit um prem ho........ dekho main tumhe batane hi waali thi prem mera yaheen karo.......'

PREM: 'kab sam kab jab wo rishabh meri heer se shadi kar leta tab haan bolo..........'

SAM: 'nahi prem tum galat samajh rahe ho mera yakeen karo mujhe nahi pata tha ki rishabh heer se sach much shaadi karne jaa raha mujhe to laga tha ki......... wo mujhse pyaar karta hai aur wo sirf mujhse hi shaadi karega'

PREM : ' iska matalab tumhe pata chal gaya ki rishabh tumhe bhi dhoka de raha hai.............'

SAM: 'haan prem par ab bus........ maien bahut galat kar liya pyaar ke liye ab waqt aa gaya hai ki main insaniyat ke naate kuch sahi karoon......... aur main karungi.......... prem jo bhi mere wajah se bigda hai wo meri wajah se sawar bhi jayega........ but please forgive me prem mujhe maaf kar do.......'

PREM : ' sam main tumhe maaf kar dunga par ek shart par tumhe wo karna hoga jo mai tumse kahunga..... heer aur rishabh ki shadi ka mahurat do din baad ka hai........ aur us din rishte zaroor judenge..... kuch toote hue aur kuch bikhre hue.........' (kabhi khushi kabhi gham. Playing at the background........)

Next day in the morning........ rishabh cums to jzoo.........

Lallu : ' tum yahan kya karne aaye ho........ heer se tum mil hi chuke the na to phir hamare ghar ab kaun sa naya tamasha karne aaye ho.........'

Rr: 'bauji mana ki main bura hoon par itna bhi bua nahi ki har waqt aap log ko takleef hi doon..... main to ye shadi ka card aap sab ko dikhanae aaya tha poochna tha ki kaisa hai...... aakhir aap hi log to heer ke ghar waale hain to aapki bhi to rai leni hi padegi na bauji.......... (his side smile)'

Heer cums downstairs...... rr: 'aah............. here cums my wouldb wife......... to hher tumhi dekhe bata do ki shaadi ka card kasia hai.......'

HEER: 'bahut accha hai rishabh mujhe pasand hai........ '

Rr: 'ok to mera kaam to ho gaya to ab mai chalta hoon.....' heer: 'aao main tumhe bahar tak chod doon...'

Outside HEER : 'tumhari himmat kaise hui rishabh mere ghar mein ye shaadi ka card lane ki........... ab se shaadi tak main tumhari shakal bhi nahi dejha chahti hoon dafa ho jaao yahaan se aur aainda yahan mat aana'

rr: 'gussa kyun hoti ho heer, gussa hone ke liye to poori zindagi padi hai aakhir tumhe apni poori zindagi mere saath bitaani hai to thoda gussa aur thode aasoon apni baaki ki zindagi ke liya bacha ke rakho' (rishabh again laughs and leaves)

HEER: 'has lo rishabh ye khushi sirf chand lamhon ki mehmaan hai uske baad tumhe aisa dhakka lagne waala hai jiske bare men tumne sapne mein hi nahi socha hoga'

Next day there is mehndi rasam..... Heer talkin to prem on the phone : ' prem main kuch nahi jaanti tumhe kuch bhi karke is mehndi par aana hi hoga........ aur main us rishabh ke naam ki mehnde apne hathon par nahi laga sakti..' PREM : 'heer samajhne ki koshish karo ye mehndi ki rasm hamare plan ke liye bahut important hai........... aur tumhe ye dhyan rakhna hai ki ye mehndi ki rasm rishabh kr ghar par hi ho.......' HEER : ' wo sab to theek hai prem par rishabh ka naam main apne haathon par nahi likhwa sakti.........' PREM : 'haan o theek hai na heer main kaunsa keh raha hoon ki tumhe rishabh ke naam ki hi mehndi lagegi tum fikr mat karo heer tumhaare upar sirf aur sirf mera hak hai aur tumhare haathon mere hi naam ki mehndi lagegi....... accha heer mujhe tumne Harman ke bare mein to kuch batay hi nahi wo kahaan hai kya kar raha hai haisa hai.......' (heer tells him everything that she knows about him) PREM : 'accha heer bahut raat ho gayi hai ab tum so jaao........ aur haan mere sapne zaroor dekhnaa (an he smiles to himself)' heer feels shy and says 'gudnite prem and hangs up'

Harman's place Harman receives a phone call : 'harman ji apke office mein aag lag gayi hai aap please jaldi aayiye......' Harman itni raat ko au use insaan ne bataya bhi nahi ki wo kaun hai........ but Harman says that its too late nevertheless i will go myself and check there is no need to disturb others... so Harman leaves for his office..............

Harman reaches his office but no one there he thinks who can call me and play such a nasty trick...... as soon as he was going to get into the car the felt a hand on his shoulder.......... he turned and he said preet tum but seconds later his mind was blown off........



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mevrulz4eva

kwlllllllllllll updt soooooooonnnnnnnnnnn


thnz a lot for reading and replying......😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Intellienough

awesome and close to our prediction for KDMHMD


thnak you intellienough............. realli appreciate ur reply😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ghia

hey
great update. I am so happy prem remembers everything now...hope this happens in the real show too soon 😍 prem and preet scenes were really cute. continue soon.


thank oyu ghia............ even i hope that prem remembers everything soon hope these BT ppl cum up with sum cute scenes😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rag-ran4ever

awesome..its good he got his memory back!!!


thank you ragran4ever....... but i realli hope that gets his memeory bak in the show too lol

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