[FF]~** Dor**~ (PART 26 updated- Pg:39 june 26th) - Page 22

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi every one,
first of all thank you very much that u liked the update......
and thank you fro ur responses!
I know that now a days kis desh is facing a crisis cuz the stupid are not able to cum up with a good track...... and srsly i ahave almost stopped watchin the show all i do is read updates........ srsly//////
nyways so here is the next update..............

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Everyone was in the mandir while Prem and Heer were performing the pooja. After the pooja, at the dining table everyone was anxiously waiting for the breakfast as Heer was supposed to make something special as it was her first day in the house after marriage. Heer was contemplating that what should she make, finally she decided on mooli parathas and kheer. She knew that Prem and Pret both loved the parathas and Kheer was everyone's favourite and as far as Veera was concerned she decided to make sandwich for her as she was on a diet. Each and every member of the family was quite impressed with Heer as she had kept everyone's choice in mind. However, Veera'a behaviour was quite unlike her and surprising.

"Heer bhabhi mujhe maloom hai ki aapne meri diet ko dhyaan mein rakh ke ye sab mere liye banaya hai..... but aaj main wo khaungi jo aapne sach mein dil se banaya hai" and she takes mooli paratha... "mujhe pata hai bhabhi ki Prem bhaiyya favourite cheez apne sabse jyada pyaar se banayi hogi...... isliye aaj main wohi khaungi" Heer was in tears listening to this. It was the first time Veera had talked to her with so much of respect and care and she was more than happy to serve her what she wanted. Just then Preet said by interfering. "are kuch nahi Heer bhabhi ye Veera na ek number ki nautanki hai actually baat ye hai ki isse bhi ye parathe bahut pasand hai...... wo to bas ghuma fira ke baat kar rahi hai"

'ohh please haan bhaiyya aisi koi baat nahi hai....... agar main kabhi pyaar se kuch bol doon to aapko hamesha wo cheez fake hi lagti hai" she said angrily

"fake lagti hai..... are lagne ki kya zaroorat hai yaar...." she said with a smile and winking at Harman who was smiling back at him shaking his head joyfully

"Preet bas bahut ho gaya ab Veera ko koi kuch nahi bolega......use kamse kam chain se khana to khane do" Prem said affectionately keeping a hand on her head.

"Haan Preet bas kar ab masti aue chup apna nashta kar......... aur meri nand ki chedna band kar" she said

"accha dal badlu...... do shabd pyaar ke kya bol diye Veera ne aap to mere khilaaf hi ho gayin..... koi baat Veera main dekh lunga tujhe" Preet said pickin up a fork and pointing at her and veera teased him in return by showing him a thumb.

"Bas karo tum sab mujhe Prem aur Heer se kuch zaroori baat karni hai" said Gayatri.

"jee Maa boliye."

"main kya bolon Prem bolna to tujhe hai...."

"kya matlab?" prem asked confused

"matlab ye ki ab teri aur Heer ki shaadi ho gayi hai to tere kuch farz bante hain........ mera matlab hai ki meri bahu ko honeymoon pe kahaan leke jaa raha hai" Lalit said butting in the conversation.

Prem and Heer had no second thoughts about where they were going to go, as they had decided earlier Prem told the rest of the family that they were going to Canada. Preet hearing this said that even he wanted to join them as he was missing his friends. The other reason was that he had been invited in the wedding he first decided not to go but now as Heer and Prem are going he might as well join them however he reassured that he would not be a hindrance in their honeymoon. Heer was embarrassed listening to that and Prem turned towards him and pulled his ear. Gayatri added that if Preet was goin then Meher should accompany him, Meher was a bit hesitant initially but Preet signalled her to say yes. Preet was blushing as he wanted someone to tell Meher to accompany him, no one noticed that accept Prem. " hmmm...... Preet aapko kis baat pe itna muskurana aa raha hai" Prem said lowering his voice. "main..... kuch nahi bhaiiyaa main to bas bahut khush hoon ki finally aapki aur Heer bhabhi ki shaadi ho gayi" he said in a staggering tone. Prem gestured him to go closure to him "Tujhe pata Preet main tera bada bhai hoon, isliye mere saath ye nautanki band kar...... sach sach bata tu chahta than a ki tum aue Meher kahin bahar jaao......" "PB aap antaryaami ho.... waise to kuch bolte nahi ho lekin jab bolte ho to sabki bolti band kar dete ho

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alrighty so thats it for now.........please do criticize or comment!....... really apprecite your resposes........😊

see u guyz during the next update...

untill them byeeee and take care.....

luv

-iksha

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey iksha
i just caught up with ur ff
i loved it
awesum ff
do pm me when u update again
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg..so romantic☺️..update son..am loving ur FF..n catching up..
*edit add me to ur PM list..tell me wen u update..

Edited by Sweet_Kandy - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Please update! I would love to read about the foursome in canada!
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Posted: 16 years ago

hiiiiiiiii

i just read your entire ff at one go......brilliant yaar....its was mindblowing! you're such a fab writer......and the premeer and meet scenes you describe are soooooooo romantic and beautiful......plz dont abandon this ff.....do continue sooooooooon
eagerly waiting

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