[FF]~** Dor**~ (PART 26 updated- Pg:39 june 26th) - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome
all parts are fantastic
update soon
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hey
awesum fantastic update
loved the precap

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awesome!!! cute premmer cant wait to see wat happens!! so does that mean hi smemory is back???anyways updat esoon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guyz srry foe a lil late update wat to do yaar busy with uni..... i hav continued from the dialogue that prem says to heer

DOR PART 5

Prem : ' aaj koi sawal nahi heer....... koi sawaal nahi........ ( holding her hands) mujhe apni sason ko mehsoos karne do heer meri dadkanon ko aaj khul ke dadakne do...... aaj mujhe ye pata chala heer ki aaj tak main zinda to tha par jee nahi paa raha tha...... aaj mujhe apni is zindagi ko mehsoos karne do aur is zindagi mein tumhari maujoodgi ko mehsoos karne do' ( background music milen jo likhya hai takhdeer ne jud jaande tukde tuti tasveer ke )...... he holds heer's face in his hand and kisses her forhead lovingly.... and the next instance they hug each other as there is no tomoro as if now they are together to never get separated..........

Prem : 'heer mujhe ye to nahi pata ki main kaun hoon lekin mujhe ye VISHWAAS hai ki jis roshni ki main tallash kar raha tha wo tum pehi aake khatam hoti hai......' mujhe nahi pata ki main prem hoon ya gaurav lekin mujhe tunhare yakin pe poora yakin hai.......' just then they hear sum noice and heer detaches herself from prem fearful that wat if sum1 sees them she tells prem to go from there and meet her the next evening at shiv mandir........ she says 'prem aise kai sawal hain jinke jawaab shayad mujhe chahiye au raise kai jawaab hain jinkon tumhare sawalon ka intezaar..... par abhi nahi prem mujhe ye baat ghar walon se chupani hi hogi' prem agrees with her he kisses heer on the forehead and leaves...'

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Heer in the middle of the night sneeks out of jzoo and decides to go to rr's place to find more about him and wat is the reason that he is doing all this to the juneja's............ she reaches there and she hears voices of two people talking she goes more closer she recognises rr's voice........... 'simran y dunt u trust me....... trust me baby i luv u........ tum to jaanti ho na ki main bas heer aur prem se badla lena chahta hoon........ u kno baby i cant marry anyone else other than u.......' simran: ' wo sab to theek hai rishabh par aakhir mujhe bhi jaane ka hak hai ki ye badla hai kis liye....... tumhare kehne par maine prem ko uski family se door rakha, i tried my level best ki uski yaddash bilkul bhi wapas na aaye aur wo apne aap ki gaurav he samjhe.....' 'ye sab kuch karne ke baad myjhe itna to hak hai ki main ye janoo ki aakhir in sab cheejonke peeche wajah kya hia'

Rishabh: 'actually u r rite baby....... actually meri prem aur heer se koi dushmani nahi hai....'

Simran: ' kya!!!! to phir tum un dono ke saath aisa kyun kar rahe ho.....' wo isliye jaan ki unki sabse badi galti ye hain ki wo juneja khandan ke bacche hain aur use bhi badi galti ki wo lalit juneja ke bacche hain' simran: what do u mean???....... rishabh: ' yes my dear the same lalit juneja..... jiski wajah se i lost my dad!!!' FLASH BAK: in Canada lallu driving meets with an accident. He himself was unconscious so he never came to kno who that person was who lost his life in that collision'

Rishabh : ' to maine socha then i concluded that the only way to hurt him is to make his childer's life miserable thats y i went after veera but lucky her he escaped.....' Simran ' iska matlab tum veera se shadi kar lete' rishabh: 'ofcourse not sweet heart maineto use chod diya lekin afsos heer ne apne bhai ki shadi use kara di so now she will have to pay for it........' heer thinking to herself itna bada khel khela rishabh rampal ne aur agar ye mujhse shaadi nahi karna chahta to ye chahta kya hai...... just then simran is about to leave..... heer hides herself beside a table situataed by the wall..... and asap simran leaves.... rishabh says to himself in his attitude way ' simran darling abhi tumhe poori baat pata hi kahan hai..... and heer tumse to main shadi zaroor karuga... ( and smiles to himself )

Heer stunned listening to his words thinking that he is just using every1 and then she thinks that rishabh at any cost should not cum to kno that i have met prem otherwise evrythin will b ruined............ i will have to keep this a secret until i reveal rishabh's true face to simran and others.

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Prem at his house thinkin about the vedio he watched....... thinking that this can only b the answer to his feelings that he has to b prem otherwise he would have never felt this way for heer......... otherwise he would have never felt such warmth towards gayatri........ these can b the only answer to his feelings.... he has to b prem......... and then he says after all the only sourse of his identity has been sam and nothing else....... then he thinks ot himself that if he is gaurav then y hasn't he found any of the pictures of his in his own house y hasn't he found any of his parents pictures............ then he goes on contemplating that y hasn't simran been able to answer these questions and if simran is his childhood friend then y doesn't she has nythin regarding him form the past......... all these thoughts made his conclusions stronger about the fact that he was the PREM.......... but he would have to find out about all these things........

He says ' mujhe pata hai ki ye sab bahut mushkil hai par mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai heer ki agar tum mere saath ho to main is poori duniya se lad sakta hoon......' (talkin to himself lukin at the moon)

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mean while preet goes to heer's room to talk to her but cudnt find her..... he searches all aorund the house and last he spots her entring into the house

PREET: heer bhabhi aap kahan thin...... heer: main rishabh ke yahaan gayi thi and then she tells him wat she witnessed over there (but she didnt tell about prem visiting her) at that tiem lallu cums out and says 'kaun' heer puts a finger on her mouth and tells him not tell lallu she is there.....

PREET: 'koi nahi bauji main hoon...... preet' 'are preet itni raat ho gayi ai beta jaa jake soja' preet: 'ji bauji.....

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precap: heer prem meet at shiv madir prem tells how he got rescued heer tries to do sumthings similar to the past........ sum changes in prem....... preet/heer have a plan....... prem knew rishabh form b4........

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hey guys i kno this part might not b that gud cuz i m really sleepy but i promise other update will be longer and better...... and yea do comment and feel free to pm

luv

iksha

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good part.....Keep on updating.I hope in actual also in the serial the same should happen.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks a lot guyzzzz........... for all ur comments and pareciation and i will update next as soon as i get time............
thanks once again
luv u all
iksha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hy wikd ff carry on lovd d meet scene
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DOR PART 6
continued after heer cumin to kno about rishabh........ and prem thinkng about heer at nite after visitin her......

next morning.....both preet and heer are very tensed about everything that had happened in past couple of days......... preet knew that lallu met with an accident and he told heer that laalu was laso very srs but survived but unfortunately the other person died..... but he had no idea that he was rishabh's dad cuz it was in the newspapers that he died bcuz of heart attack...... so preet thinks that may b rishabh didn't want us to kno nythin thats y he had spread rumurs.......

heer : 'preet agar aisa hai to bauji ki isme koi galti nahi thi aur nahi kisi aur ki wo to ek hadsa that.....'

preet : 'main aapki baat se sehmat hoon bhabhi lekin rishabh jaise sirfire insaan ko kaise samjhaye....... wo apna matlab nikalne ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakta hai......'

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prem : 'Sam mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni thi.... tune mujhe itni saari baatien batayi mere bare mein par utne mujhe mee ksi rishtedaar ke bare mein kyun nahi bataya....... aur jab bhi main apni mom-dad ki picture tujhse mangta hoon tu hamesha ye keh ke taal deti hai ki tujhe yaad nahi tune kahaan rakhi hai.....'

sam: (very nervous ).... 'wo gaurav kya hai na ki mujhe tera koi rishtedaar yaad nahi aur tere mom dad pic i promise main tujhe kal tak khoj ke dedungi......... chal ayways yaar tu itna tension kyun le raha hai chil maar dude'

prem to himself 'chill to mujhe maarna hi hoga agar tumse sab kuch pata lagana hai '

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preet and heer are sitting in a coffee shop........... thinking that wat should they do to get out of this mess....... then all of a sudden preet becums hyper and 'bhabhi bhabhi bhabhi...... in sab mooseebaton se hum nikal sakte hain..............' heer: 'wo kaise??' then preet goes on with his plan...... (sory guyz cant reveal it u will cum to know when it is executed ) heer has slight smile on her face.....

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its evening time now and prem is waiting for heer in shiv mandir in front of shivling....... suddenly he thinks ' ye jagah itni jaani pehcahni kyun lag rahi hai' and suddenly a pair of eyes cums to his mind...... ' wo aankhein kiski thin, itna dard kyun that un aankhon mein aur aisa kyun laga ki un aankhon se mera bahut hi gehra rishta hai...... wo dard mujhe itna apna sa kyun laga.....' and at the same time heer cums there....... she is wearing the same clothes that she wore when they first met and everythin became clear to prem........ every single thing that happened that day and suddenly with a gush of wind heer's dupatta hid prem's face (back ground......hum hain is pal yahaan) and he removed the dupatta slowly from his face went up to heer and covered her head with it..........

preem: heer mujhe tumein kuch....... heer : nahi prem abhi nahi...... aaj main tumahre kandhe pe sir rakh ke jee bhar ke rona chahti hoon..... apne saare dard apne saare aansoon is pal mein fana kar dena chahti hoon........... (while sayin this she moves towards the stairs and prem follows he sits beside her on a step higher than that on which she was sitting ) heer puts her head on his lap and starts crying uncontrollably... it seemed that sumthin was locked inside her and she was letting it go.... it seemed that all the pain all the misery that she held in her heart had finally found a door to escape....... and prem put one hand on her head and another on her waist and feeling helpless looks into the sky with tears in his own eyes........ then heer after sumtime lifts her head up and says 'prem maine hamare pariwaar ko bahut dukh diye hain par mera yakeen karo main to sirf tumhare sapno ko poora karna chahti thi aur unhe zindagi bhar ki khushiyan dena chahti thi....... mere paas aur koi raasta nahi tha' premm 'ssshhhhhhh.... heer mujhe pata hai ki meri heer kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti...... main ye to nahi jaanta heer ki tum kis bare mein baat kar rahi ho..... lekin itna zaroor janta hoon ki jo ladki mujhe meri hi pehachan batane ke liya mujhse lad sakti hai wo ladki wo heer meri heer kabhi galat nahi kar sakti......... jo ladki khud se jyada usmein basne waale prem pe vishwaas karti ho uspe khud prem kaise na vishwas kare...... haan heer bolo (he holds heer's face so that she can look into his eyes) and heer hugs him resting her head on his chest wrapping both her hands on his waist and prem's one hand on her head and around her waist where he tightens his grip slowly and his chin touchin her forehead.......


heer : ' prem tum kahaan the abhi tak prem......... ' prem: ' heer mujhe khud bhi nahin maloom ki main kahan tha ab tak ( he looks into her eyes )........ then after a while he tels her...

FLASK BAK : prem geting up in the hospital doesn't remember nythin....... has sum minor burns has a heavy head ache....... doctor asks his name....... he can't remember it and keeps on giving balnk looks and is frustrated.... his vision is also blurry..... then sum1 says from behind that his name is gaurav..... gaurav cant remember nythin...... he asks the gentleman who are you he says dutn worry u r in safe hands and he tells gaurav that he knows him.... after sumtime advit brings gaurav to siman's place where she takes care of him for sumtime and convinces him that he was a photographer used to work at KBC and then employees of KBC also acknowleged him as gaurav so he had no choice but to agree with them........'

then suddenly he said that heer lekin tum advit ko kaise jaanti ho?????........

Heer: ' main aur advit ko nahi to......' prem ' ye kaise ho sakta hai maine us vedio mein advit ko tumhare sath dekha tha ( then he described how that person looked like)' heer is shocked upon what prem just told her and she said 'iska matlab advit aur koi nahi rishabh hai.....' PREM 'are nahi nahi prem wo to advit hai sam ka fianc haan wo alag baat hai ki uss din ke baad wo kabhi mujhse mila nahi!!!' and then heer cums to kno that rishabh knows that prem is alive and he himself saved him and now he is just playing with both of their lives......

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Preet at home' kahaan ho aap bhabhi aap to mujhe marwaogi.............. aaj to meher mujhe kaccha chaba jayegi..... poochne pe batati nahi ho ki kahan ja rahi ho aur bolti ho ki ghar mein sab kuch sambhal lena....'

meher: 'preet.......... preet tumne to bola tha ki heer didi jald hi aa jayengi aur wo tumhe bata kar gayin hain... to abhi tak ayi kyun nahi...... preet to himself (mar gaya jo soch raha tha wahi hua chal preet kuch soch ) preet : ' abbb bb.. haan haan meher wo...... wo heer bahbhi ka phone aaya tha ki unhe aane mein thodi der ho jayegi to mujhe unhe pick karne jaana padega...... ' meher: ' haan wo to theek hai par kahaan.' Preet ' wo meher actually mujhe bhi nahi pata hai kahaan... wo heer bhabhi jahaan gayi thin wahaan ab wo hain nahi...... mera matlab hai ki wo wahin thin par ab kahin aur hain aur ab wo jahaan hain wahaan ka mujhe pata nahi to jab mujhe pata chalega tab main tumhe bata dunga.... ' meher all confused about what preet said.....' preet tum kya keh rahe ho mujhe kuch samajhnahi aa raha hai........' preet ' aur tumhe samajhne ki zaroorat bhi nahi hai kyunki hum dinner pe jaa rahein hain aur tum jaldi se tayaar ho jao.....' preet putting his hands on her shoulders and taking her towards their room....... meher 'lekin preet ghar pe khana bana hai.....' 'are to kya hua agar mera man kare to main apne dost ko dinner pe nahi le ja sakta kya' meher : ' haan wo to theek hai lekin....' preet : ' lekin wekin kuch nahi dekho agar tum apne dost ki baat nahi man sakti to tumhe apne pati ki baat manni padegi...'

Meher smilingly says ' jo hukum patidev...' and she goes to change preet looking upwards " thank god kamse kam ek interrogation se bach gaya..... par jo bhi ho meher mujhe bahut aacha lagta hai kit um apno kiitni parwaah karti ho.....'

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precap: prem/heer and preet/meher land up in same hotel sum hide and seek amongst them...... simran cums to kno about rr not luving her and prem meets preet and gets his memory fully back.....................


Edited by gr8ronny - 16 years ago

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