[FF]~** Dor**~ (PART 26 updated- Pg:39 june 26th) - Page 14

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hey wounderfull update keep it up

aww that was soooo cute... update soon plzz!!!

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

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Hey, good update!!!! I'm glad Prem told Heer everything and she didn't judge him what so ever!!! She is simply going to be there by his side and provide help!!!! *sigh*, now that is true love!!! Premeer ki jodi ko kabhi nazar na lage!!!!!! 😆

Awww, Prem carried Heer in and then so gently bandaged her wound!!! Oh ho, our Heer has become naughty now has she!!!!! I like it!!!! 😉😳😆 Meet were really sweet too!!!! I love how Preet constantly teases Meher and it definately has the desired effect!!!! *thumbs up*

Ooooh, someone is interuppting a Premeer moment!!!!! Who could it be!!!!!!!

Great update yaar and i hope you update soon again!!!!!

P.S. if you have a PM list please add me!!!!!

aww maddy thank you soo much dear.🤗....i m makin this story light and happy cuz it might b able to provide sum releif from the painfull track that they are showin rite.............
and i will surely pm you wen i update again.........
njoyed readin ur respose a lot......
and i m realli gald u liked it......
luv
-iksha

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heer : again in low tone as if she was trying hard to not to get under his spell says..."prem ye tum kya kar rahe ho koi aa jayega....."
and suddenly they hear a voice of hmmmmm..........

prem turns and kuldi is standin there and prem bcums all nervous......
she cums inside and says: "ye kya ho raha tha"
prem : 'woo kuch nahi di wo achtually dekhiye na heer ko wo pair mein chot lag gayi hai to main bas wohi dekh raha tha......."
kuldi smilimg..... " prem beta chot pair pe lagi hai gale p enahi samjhe mujhe bana raha hai tu........ ye mat bhool main tujhse badi hoon aur teen teen baccho ki ma bhi hoon....... isliye kujhse to jhooth mat bol..... ruk abhi main sabko batati hoon'
prem: 'are nahi kuldi please apne is chote bhai oe zara taras khaao woooo woo hai na hamare yaar ka dushman preet wo to is baat ki kahaan se kahaan pahuncha dega..."
kuldi : ' tu chahta hai na main nahi bataonn to chal mere saath yahaan se mabdir jaane ki choot kya de diya tu to mauka ka fayda hi uthane laga'
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whole juneja mansion is all decorated as it mehndi and sangeet ki raat in the house........ kuldi has given preet the responsibility to keep prem away from the part of thehouse where all this is takin place.......

preet with prem.......
preet: kya prem bhaii appki wajah se i m also missin out on so much of masti.....
prem : are to tujhe roka kisne hai jaa na.......
preet: sacchi jaaon......... bhool jaao main itna bevkoof nahi hoon mujhe pata hai ki app bhi yahaan se wat loge mauka pake ur fir to kuldi ka joota aur mera sir.....
prem : nahi yaar aise kuch nahi hoga dekh main bhi tere saath chalta hoon hum dono chuo ke jaayenge...... kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega......
preet: nahi nahi nahi nahi aisa to bilkul nahi hoga......... sochna bhi mat
prem : dekh preet tujhemasti karni hai na to tujhe meri ya baat manni hi hoga........ chal accha agar kisi ne pakad bhi lya to tu bol dena ki main yahaan aa gaya tha aur mere peech peeche mujhe rokne ke iiye tu bhi aa gaya......... kyun ye theek hai na......
preet: haan ye theek rahega atleast main to bach jaunga na.......
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prem and preet are hidin behind the stairs....... preet wants to have sum fun but cant...... all he can do si watch ppl dancin and havin fun... meher and kuldi are dancin on the song MEHNDI HAI RACHNE WAALI
preet is stunned at how beautiful Meher is lukin.....
preet: prem bhaiiya aap yahaan se pyaar se apne pyaar ko dekhte rahiye main chala apni biwi ke paas.......
prem: dhokebaaz aakhir tune bhi mera saath chod hi diya na.......
preet: chalo chalo sabse bade dhokebaaz to aap ho....... pata nahi is chote bhaii app kitne aur zuln dhane wale ho shaadi ke baad.....
prem : teri to main......
but preet escapes and goes to meher.......
meher : preet tum yahaan........... lekin kuldi ne bola tha ki.......
preet: sshhhh...... hai main mar jawaan tussi kinni soni lag rahi ho aaj.......
meher: tum phir se mera mazaak bana rahe ho na.......
preet gettin closer and holdin her face in his hands.......nahi meher ajj tum sach mein bahut pyaari lag rahi hooo......... (and they an eye lockin session)
meanwhile prem is caught by harman and was compelled to go upstairs....... so he went upstairs and was playin with the kids...
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preeet meher eye lock still goin on

just then RR enters the house...........
rishabh: accha hai to jzoo mein aaj jash chal raha hai....... chalo accha hai manalo manalo khushiyann....... main bas 10 minute deta hoon...... jitni khushiyan manani hai mana lo.....
preet all furious to see him but meher holds him back....... sayin
jaane do preet wo hamara kuch nahi bigad payega aur main nahi cahhti ki tum khamokha uske muh lago.....

preet all furious to see him but meher holds him back....... sayin
"jaane do preet wo hamara kuch nahi bigad payega aur main nahi cahhti ki tum khamokha uske muh lago....."

kuldi : 'tum yahaan…….. dekho rishabh tumhara yahaan koi kaam nahi hai…. Mrs. Kulraj juneja mera kaam to abhi shuru hua hai….;

lallu : (cumin dowstainrs) ye kya ho raha hai yahaan par… sab kuch shaant kyun ho gaya… rishabh tum tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho…..

rishabh : are aaiye aaiye main apka hi ka intezaar kar raha tha…. Aakhir aapke ghar ki izzat heer ke bare mein baat karne aaya hoon to aapse aaha insaan aur kaun ho sakta hai…..

just then a person enters with a parcel..

rishabh (taking the parcel..) ahhh finally just the thing I have been w8in for…..

preet : dekho risgabh tum yahaan se chale jaao humein nahi tummein koi dilchaspi hai aur nahi tumhare is parcel main….

Rishabh: koi baat nahi preet mujhmein na sahi tumhe apni heer bhabhi mein to dilchaspi hai na…

Preet: kay matlab takin the envelope… when he saw wat was inside it he was flabbergasted…..

he couldn't bliv his eyes althou he was a bit shaken but he regained his composure in no time and smiles… 'rishabh tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum aisi wahiyaat harkay karoge aur hum chup chap man lenge job hi tum humein batane ke koshish karoge…..'

rishabh: preet preet preeet (half smiling) tum chahe job hi socho lekin sabot to kuch aur hi kehte hain….

Veera cums in and says : 'aakhir aisa bhi kya hai in photographs mein…….." she snatches them from preet's hands….' (veera shocked)

Veera: ' ohh to ye hai heer bhabhi ka asli rang….. to aapne mujhe rishabh se shaadi nahi karne di taki aap uske saath rangraliyan mana sakein…. Agar rishabh itna hi pasad tha to apne rem bhaiyya ke saath pyaar ka natak kyun kara….. are aur to aur aapne meri shadi apne bhai se kara di taaki appka rasta hamesha ke liye saaf hojaye…. Kyun kin a rahungi main aur na rahega aapko koi darr…….kyun bhabhi'

Heer : 'veera ye tum kya bol rahi ho'

Preet : 'bas veera ye koi tareeka nahi hua heer bahbhi se baat karne ka'

Veera: 'accha to mera baat karne ka tareeka galat aur ye job hi Karen wo sahi waaahh bhai waahh aaj aapne apni behen ka saath na deke ye sabit kar diya ki aapko kaun jyada pyara hai"

Lallu : "chup kar veera bahut ho gaya…."

Rishabh: 'are mr. lalit juneja aap kis kisko chup karayenge….. abhi to bas shuruwaat hai.."

Preet goes and grabs his color….

Harman goes and detaches him from rishabh…

Veera: goes to heer "to bhabhi aapne jawab nahi diya kya hai ye sab….."

Heer : 'veera mujhe khud nahi maloom…"

Veera : 'nahi maloom kya in pictures mein aap nahi ho ky awohi dress nahi hai ko rishabh ne appko di thi….. aur app us din rishabh ke saath uske ghar bhi gayin thin na us din…."

Heer " haan lekin main uske ghar nahi gayi thi….. main to…."

Veera " bas bhabhi……. Aur aage kuch bhi bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai…. Sharam nahi aayi aapko aisa karte hue….. sharam nahi aayi aapko rishabh ki bahon mein jhoolte hue…"

" ye heer jo apne aap ko ganga ki tarah pavitra batati hai…… ye raha uski pavitrata la sabot.. she raises her hand and starts showin it…… just then another hand snatches the pic from hers…..
prem looks thru the pics looks into heer's eyes and then tears them….

Veera: 'dekha prem bhaiiyya app jis…."

Prem " bas veeraa bas…. Ab aur ek shabh nahi samajhi tu…"

Veera " lekin bhaiyya"

Prem " maine kaha na veera basss...... aur agar iske aage tune is ghar ki badi bahu ke khilaaf ek shabh bola to darwaza us taraf hai tu jaa sakti hai…"

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OK GUYZZZ abhi ke liya itna hi keep readin and i have sum realli gud scenes cumin u and i hope u will like it.........

thank ou soooo very much for appreciation and commet realli motivated me to rite.......
so do comment or criticize.........
luv
-iksha

awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it immenselyyyyyyyyyyy waitingggggggggg for next asap.

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wow! prem preet scenes r sooooo cute..😆.and meet scenes r luvvvely😳.wah! what a scene yaar i lov to see prem's anger.plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooon.thnk u sooooo much for pm.