[FF]~** Dor**~ (PART 26 updated- Pg:39 june 26th) - Page 15

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it immenselyyyyyyyyyyy waitingggggggggg for next asap.

thank you soooo muchh......
i will update soon
luv
-iksha

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

reserved! =)

Ok, i'm back!!!! hi maddy...... glad that u r bak........

Haha, i love Kul di, she is sooo awesome!!!! Awwww, Preet is sho cute!!! Who knew that our Prem could be such a chuparustam!!!!! That part was really nice!!! I loved Meet, Meher aways thinks he is teasing her when actually he always thinks she is pretty!!!! thank you soo much... i have been thinkin of buildin up the relationship of meher and preet wat say😉😉😉......... actually i luv those two wenevr they are shown in the show they are just too cute and innocent

Oh no!!!! Ratpal is back!!!!! Why !?!?!??! 😡 OMG, what was in those pics !?!?!?! I didn't quite catch what was in those pics exactly!!!!! Obviously Heer doen't know about them!!!!! ohhh sowie i dun think i was clear nuff those were rattys pics with heer in his armss........🤢🤢🤢

Why can't Veera just shut her gob !?!?!?! She is such a pain in the............. neck (i was going to say something else before i realized i probably shoudn't) 😉😆!!!!!!!!!!!! awww u can go ahead and say watever u want dear...... well yea i kno she is in the pain in the neck but if she is not then how am i gonna show the beautiful relationship that prem heer share........

Wohoo, Prem to the rescue!!!! Of course Prem would understand Heer's pain and innocence without having to even think about it!!! They trust each other more than they trust themselves!!!!! Prem would never tolorate anyone saying anything bad about his Heer!!!!!! *thumbs up* ejaaclty b it her owm sister........

Can't wait till the next part!!! I hoping for some dramatic declarations or something!!!! Also, hopefully someone also giving a peice of their mind to Veera and Ratpal!!!!! well i guess u will get ur answers in the next update........

Please update soon!!!!!
i will try to update either today or tomoro......😊
😊

thank u soooooooooo much madddy............
its always a pleasure to read ur comments.........
luv
-iksha

Originally posted by: sugi77

wow! prem preet scenes r sooooo cute..😆.and meet scenes r luvvvely😳.wah! what a scene yaar i lov to see prem's anger.plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooon.thnk u sooooo much for pm.

urrr welcum dearrrrrr.............
i m reali realli glad that u liked it.......
even i luv prem s anger i mean absolutely cannot get that mandap drama out of my head that they showed......
just loved it.......
nyways i m glad that u liked the scenes.........
thank u soooo much for ur comments......
luv
-iksha

hey iksha,

--------------------DOR (PART 19)----------------------

Prem " bas veeraa bas'. Ab aur ek shabh nahi samajhi tu'"

Veera " lekin bhaiyya"

Prem " maine kaha na veera basss...... aur agar iske aage tune is ghar ki badi bahu ke khilaaf ek shabh bola to darwaza us taraf hai tu jaa sakti hai'"

rishabh with a smirk on his face: 'use kyun rasta dikha rahe ho prem..... wo to sirf such he bol rahi hai na....... mujhe to lagta hai ki agar tum yehi baat heer se poocho to jyada accha hoga.... aakhir usse bhi to poocho ki wo mere itne kareeb kyun thi in tasveeron mein.....'

these lasts words of rishabh were enough to make prem's anger reach its pinnacle.....

prem grabbed him by the collor......

prem: 'rishabh aaj bol diya agar agke baar aisa kuch bhi apne zubaan se nikala to yahaan se ghar jaane layak nahi bachoge.....'

rishabh as adamant as he was to want prem to question her chastity..... released himself from his grip and went to heer and grabbed her by the wrist "tum mere saath chalogee because i kno that u luv me...."

prem was burning with anger from inside and he touchin his heer was enough to arouse him soo much that all he wanted to do was kill rishabh in one go...... his eyes blazing with anger settled on the grip that rishabh's hand had on her's followed by his hand reachin out to rishabh's and holding them so tight that it almost became impossible for rishabh to maintain his holdin on heer.......
preet came in an agressive manner but jesture of prem's hand told him not to cum near as if no one else had the right to deal with the person who dared to touch his wife....... his heer............

there were no words spoken...... what people saw was enough to comprehend what was goin on in prem's mind........ rishbabh was dragged ruthlessly by prem who held him by the collar with one hand....... went to the fire place..... and took a piece of burning log from there without caring how hot it was becuase it couldnt b as burnin hot as his anger was towards the person standing in front of him...... everyone as aquainted as they were with his temper were petrified with this jesture of his...... rishabh somehow wresseled himself out of his grip "have u gone mad...... put away that thing"

'no i m not goin to...either you are going to leave from here by telling the truth to people or you are not going to leave at all'

'tum pagal ho gaye ho prem mai jal jaunga '

'mujhe koi farak nahi padta.... is duniya mein tum akhri insaan hoge jiske jeene ya marne se mujhe koi farak padega'

'prem beta tera haath, beta chod de tu jal jayega...'

'nahi bauji aaj nahi '

rishabh wanted to leave the premises but to his surprise harman and preet were already guarding the door.... he had no way to escape....

'rishabh aaj ya to tum is saboot ko jhootha sabit karoge, apne aapko jhootha sabit karoge ya to phir yahaan pe tumhare jhoote saboot ke saath saath tum bhi jaloge'

rishabh: ' ye kaisa pagalpan hai...... whatever i said was true....'

prem's patience was reaching the borderline and somehow rishabh also sensed it.... he had no other option at that point he would have to divulge the truth... there was no other way out because prem's warning was unquestionable.....

'alright alright heer never came close to me..... infact she was not even there with me at that point she left me that day as soon as we left the juneja mansion she couldnt even bare my presence forget her loving me'

'then what about those photographs' veera asked

this question made him smirk as if he got another opportunity to draw his pleasure by insulting the juneja's......... he went close to veera 'these hmm... these were your photographs with me.... remember how romantic were the days when we used to be together i used those.... all had to do was replace u with heer isnt that simple and you were fool enough to believe it. Only if it was not for prem heer would have been out of the house' veera looked away in disgust.......

'that would never happen heer is an integral part of the family she would never ever be thrown out of the house unlike you who i think needs to be thrown out right away.....' and harman and preet had dun the needful all they had to do was keep moving closer to him and rishabh's foot automatically retraced his way outside the house.... his legs was not complimenting his thoughts he wanted to stay but the strength with which both the brothers were proceeding towards him reduced his thought to mere nonexistent ...

once rishabh had left, veera was feeling really guilty not because she had insulted heer but because she had hurt prem beyond repairs.... she went to him tried to talk to him but all she got was a hurt look that torn her from inside she didnt have the courage to meet his eyes after that one painful glance....prem moved away from her...

at this point all he wanted to do was hold heer close to his heart... hold her and tell her how much he trusted her tell her that he would rather die before doubting her..... he wanted to tell her he loved her no matter what...... but heer was no where to be found as far as his eyes could see

he felt a hand on his shoulder she said "terrace......" that one word from meher conveyed the message thats all he wanted to kno......

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she was still horrified with what had just happened.. she couldnt bear the pain of her heart..... her eyes showed how hurt she was yet there was no trace of tear in them.. it seemed that the whole ordeal didnt quite sink in.... a hand genlty landed on her shoulder.... she knew who he was but she didnt have the courage to meet his eyes... or rather she didnt want him to see her in such a condition because she knew that it would rip him apart from inside for it was unbearable for him to see even a drop of tear trickle down her eyes.... prem understood very well what she was going through it seemed that her pain got transferred to his heart... he turned her sharply and held her in his strong arms close to his heart.... he knew what was coming and he was prepeared for it. Heer's hands clenched the front of his shirt and tears started rolling down her cheeks, her hiccups were just too much for prem to bear but at this point all he could have done was tighten his grip around her and give her the reassurance that he was always there for her..................

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ok guyzz so there u go as i promised the next update will b in a day or two.... so here it is..... hope u guyzz like it just a warning hence forth this is goin to b a bit more intimate😉...... i m sure u guyzz are gonna njoy the track cumin up......

next update will be on wednesday.....

uptill then njoyyyyy

luv

-iksha

bhangdha!!!

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

bhangdha!!!

lol maddy can u please tell me wat does that word mean!!!!!
luv
-iksha

Originally posted by: purplestar22

awesome update!!! Hate Veera

thank you........
awww sowie for veera par kya karein thoda villain ka bhi roll hota hai na😉😉
luv
-iksha

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey great update

thank you😊😊
luv
-iksha

Originally posted by: gr8ronny

lol maddy can u please tell me wat does that word mean!!!!!
luv
-iksha