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pratiksha

@iksha20

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: zaibun
hey great update wounder wt happens next update soon thanx

thanks zaibun for readin and commentin...........
hope u will like my further work........
luv
-iksha

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pratiksha

@iksha20

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: sugi77
hey vry nice and cute updt.i enjoyed😆 all the scenes specialy preet's. eager to see what premeer going to do nxt.plzzz updt asap.

thanks sugi......... for readin and commentin...........
glad u liked it
luv
-iksha

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pratiksha

@iksha20

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: happybrar
awesome
love prem and heer scene

hey thanks a lot for likin them😊😊😉.........

luv
-iksha

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pratiksha

@iksha20

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: premeer928
hey
that was awesome. loved premeer scenes. cant wait for the next part...continue soon. 😊

i will surely update soon..........
thanks for readin and commentin😊😊😊......
luv
-iksha

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pratiksha

@iksha20

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: kash fan4ever
hey iksha,
gr8 part yaar.

cant wait to have a look at the mandir scene.

pls. cont soon and if possible, do pm me

cheers,

sakshi

hi sakshi..........
thanks u for readin and thanks a lot for ur comments.......
i will surely pm as soon as i update..........
luv
-iksha

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pratiksha

@iksha20

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: purplestar22
awesome part and cant wait for next update prem carries heer home😳

thank u................
he surely does but u will have to w8 for that part a bit
sowie😉😉
luv
-iksha

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pratiksha

@iksha20

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#127

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bauji: "chalo ab to tumhai maa ne haan bol do main kaun hota hoon rokne waala"
preet : 'kelin ye to galat hai this is not fair ye sab PB ki chal hai hamara plan todne ki..."
gayatri mom : 'preet chup kar unhe jaane de........."
preet : ' chalo theek hain dekh lunga iska badla due raha......"
prem ; ' to ma hum cahlein"
gmom: ; haan jaao lekin samhal ke jaana

prem and heer goin to the mandir....
prem : heer tumne mujhe pehle kabhi nahi bataya ki tumne aisi koi mannat bhi maangi thi
heer: pehle kabhi nahi matlab........ main kab batati tumhe prem tum khud hi jaante ho ki..... ghar mein koi tumhe chodta hi nahi tha aur waise bhi khushi itni zyada thi ki dhyaan hi nahi raha
prem is all grim and lost in himself.......
heer: kya baat hai prem tum mujhe kuch batane waale the..... tum itne pareshaan kyun ho......
prem: (thinks to himself and is in a delimma wether he shud tell her or no he did not kno how heer will take this news) nahi heer koi baat nahi hai.....
heer stops walkin and holds his hand..... and very lovingly puts her hand on his cheeks and asks him
"kya baat hai prem jo tumhe itna pareshaan kar rahi hai apni heer ko nahi bataoge"
prem : 'nahi heer aisi koi baat nahi hai.... tum chinta mat karo chalo matha tek aate hain"
they both start walkin again
heer thinks to herself that there is sumthin that prem is hindin from me and that is why he seems so lost today........ but at that point she didnt say anythin......
they both go into the gurudwara seek blessings and then when they were about to leave heer says " prem chalo na wahaan thodi der baithte hain" there was huge tree which was barricaded by a a low wide brick wall......
prem and heer both go there......
prem is again lost in his own thaughts
heers taked prem's hand in hers and says " prem..... tumhe pata hai humara rishta aisa hai ki humein ek doosre ki takleef samajhne ke liye ek doosre ko batane ki zaroorat nahi padti hai..... isliye tumne mera dard meri aankhon mein hi padh liya tha...... tumne meri har baat bina kahe samjhi.... tumne mera har mod par saath diya.... yahaan tak ki jab mere aapno ne mujhe dhokha kiya to tum mere liye tumhare aapno se bhi lad gaye..... jo rishta itne kasautiyon se guzar chuka hai us rishte mein ye hichkiahat kyun prem..... kya tumhe mujhpe bharosa nahi ki main tumhaari baat samjhungi..."
prem : "nahi heer tum par to mujhe khud se bhi zyada bharosa hai...... agar kisi cheez par mujhe bharosa nahi to bas meri kismat pe....."
heer: " prem agar tumhe mujhpar bharosa hai to mujhe batao na ki baat kya hai......... kya tum mujhe apne pareshaaniyan nahi bataoge prem..... yakin karo mujhpe prem hum dono mil ke iska saamna karenge tum ek baar mujhe batao to sahi ki baat kya hai...."
prem: "heer...... sanjana........."
heer was shocked to hear this name once more from prem's mouth....
heer : ' sanjana......... sanjana kya prem......."
prem (in tears): " heer sanjana zinda hai......"
heer : ' lekin tumne to kaha tha ki tumhe uski asthiyan visarjit karni hai aur kiran jiju bhi to "
prem : "jhooth bola tha unhone mujhse jhooth.......... sanajna zinda hai heer wo zinda hai...... lekin dukh to is baat ka hai ki wo zinda reh kar bhi zinda nahi hai...."
heer :'matlab......."
prem : 'matlab ye heer ki wo coma mein hai..lekin usse bada dukh ye hai ki mere apne bauji me ye baat mujhse chupayi heer..... wo ladki jo is waqt maut se bhi battar zindagi basar kar rahi hai wo bhi sirf meri wajah se uski sacchayi mujhse chupaayi gayi...... aur wo sacchai khud mere ghar walon ne.... mere apno ne mujhse chupayii."
heer :'tum sirf apne aap ko uski is halat ka zimedar kyun mante ho prem... tum jitne uske gunehgaar ho utni hi main bhi hoon........ agar uski ye halat hamari wajah se hui hai to usse sudharenge bhi hum hi....."
prem : 'lekin heer ye sab hoga kaise..."
heer : 'tum hi ne to kaha tha ki jiju canada jaane waale hain sanajana ke liye..... lekin ab wo nahi hum jayenge.......haan prem hum apni shaadi ke baad canada chalenge prem........ aur wahan sanjana ki saari zimmedari hamari hogi...."
prem : 'wo sab to theek hai heer lekin hum ghar mein kuch nahi batayenge.."
heer: 'lekin prem agar hum ghar mein nahi batayenge to phir hum jayenge kaise...."
prem : " uski chinta tum mat karo..."
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heer and prem walkin back to the jzooo.....
prem still lost in his thaughts....
heer *in her head* (mujhe pata hai prem ki tum apne aap ko sanjana ka gunehgaar mante ho lekin is waqt tumhe is bat ka zyada dukh hai ki tumhaare apno ne itni badi baat tumse chupaayi.....lekin prem tumhaari heer har kadan pe tumhaari humkadan ban ke tumhare saath rahegi..... ye mera waada hai tumse....)
heer puts her hand on prem's shoulder and prem looks at her and heer blinks her eyelashes as if telling him not to worry everything will b alright and she will always b there with him..... but just then heer got hurt and as she was barefooted her feet started bleeding.....
prem : "kya hua heer...."
heer : "kuch nahi prem lagta hai kuch pair ke neeche aa gaya tha.kuch nahi tum chalo......'
they both start walkin again but heer was unable to walk properly.....
prem : dikhao mujhe kya hua hai.....
heer : kuch nahi prem theek ho jayega bas ghar aane hi wala hai main chal lungi.....
prem : chal lungi tum pagal to nahi ho gayi ho tumhaare pair se khoon nikal raha hai..... aur tum keh rahi ho chal lungi.... tum ruko main abhi taxi bulata hoon....
heer : nahi prem meri mannat hai wo bhi tumhaare liye main paidal hi ghar jaungi........
prem : lekin heer tumhe chot lagi hai tum chalogi kaise.....
heer : ye dard us dard ke saamne kuch bhi nahi jo maine tab saha jab tum mere saath nahi the.....
prem : itna pyaar karti ho mujhe.......
heer : shayad tumse kam.....
she again starts walkin but prem tells her to stop.....
prem bends down to pick her up in his arms but heer starts resisting....
heer : ye kya kar rahe ho main chal lungi....
prem: (in stern voice) chup bilkul chup..... kuch nahi bologi tum....
heer: lekin.....
prem: maine kaha na chup.... tum aise nahi manogi... ab lagta hai tumhe chote bacchon ki tarah muh pe ungli rakhwaani padegi..... actually padegi kya tum yehi karo... fingure on ur lips.....
heer : prem......... tum........
prem: kuch prem kuch nahi..... fingure on your lips.....
heer does wat he said......... prem smiles to himself and lifts her in his arms........
they both stare at each other...... lost in each others eyes and they didnt even realize when when they reached home.......
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from the terrace preet and meher were lookin down
preet: aaye haaye meher zara apni didi ko to dekho kitne pyaar se prem bhaiyya ki godi mein sawar ho knar aa rahi hain......
meher: first not understandin what preet was sayin...... says kya??
then he holds her head and turns her in the direction of prem heer...... and says : "ye hai tumhaare kya ka jawaab..." meher sees them and instantly a beautiful smile cums across her face........
preet: 'are waah kya smile hai subhan allah......."
meher: "preet tum bhi na....."
preet : " kya preet tum bhi na........ tumhe uthaaon prem bhaiiya ki tarah na baba na mujhe maccho man banne koi shauk nahi hai aur aapke saamne to bilkul nahi...... haan agar tum jyagda nahi bas thodi si bilkul zara si aur patli hoti to main zaroor try karta....."
the smile that was on meher's face fades away and instead she started chaisn preet shoutin at him " kya matlab hai tumhara ki main thodi patli hoti......... tumhe moti lagti hoon main....... tumhe sharam nahi aati apni patni ko aisi baat karte hue......"
preet : "are meri punjaban jisne ki sharam uske foote karam...." meher still runnin behind preet.........
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prem : hmmmm heer ghar aa gaya....... heer still lookin into prem's eyes.......
prem : heer ghar aa gaya..
heer listenin to his voice came back from her world of dreams........ and broke contact from prem's eyes shyly....
prem: ' waise agar tum chaho to muh pe se ungli hata sakti ho...."
heer realized that she still had fingure on her lips..... and removes it hastily while prem smiles to himself
prem carried heer inside the house
heer: tum has kyun rahe ho.........aur ab to main chale jaungi neeche utaro mujhe......
prem: bilkul nahi jabtak aapke pair ki chot ki dressing nahi ho jaati ap zameen pe kadam bhi nahi rakhengi...... aur waise bhi shaam ko mehendi hai to uske liye bhi tumhaare pair ko theek hona zaroori hai isliye agar tumne phir se na nahi ya no bola to main tumhe phir se wahi saza de dunga.....
heer: saza kaun si saza....
prem: fingue on ur lips...... (heer feels shy and embarresed and buries her face in his arms)
he carries heer to her room....... places her on the bed gets the first aid kit and starts dressin her wound on the feet.....
prem : " jalan ho rahi hai....."
heer : " jalan kaisi jalan kyun mr. prem juneja mere alava koi aur bhi hai kya........... ki tum mujhse pooch rahe ho ki jalan ho rahi hai...."
prem :(surprised)...... not bad not bad..... to ab aapko bhi thodi thodi badmashiyan karni aa gayi hain......
heer : (in a low tone) aap hi se to seekha hai
prem goes to keep the first aid box and heer gets up to fetch sum water to drink which is kept on the side table....... just then a pair arms wrap around her waist and a chin rests on her shoulder and a soft voice uttered in her ears....
"mrs. heer prem juneja shayad aapne suna nahi ki main apse bed se uthne ko mana kiya tha..... lekin chalo koi baat nahi hai ab hukum ka palan nahi kiya hai to bharpai to karni padegi......."
he soflty kisses heer on her neck.......
heer : again in low tone as if she was trying hard to not to get under his spell says..."prem ye tum kya kar rahe ho koi aa jayega....."
and suddenly they hear a voice of hmmmmm..........
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sorry guyzzz i kno that i have taken a bit long to update this part hope u will forgive me.........
nyways njoyyyyyyyyy and do comment or criticize😊😉................

luv
-iksha

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#128

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

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sugii

@sugii

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#129

wow!beautiful....😍.cutte......😛.nd luvvvvely 😳updt.each and evry scene is awesome👏👏👏.njoyed it sooo much.can't wait plzzzz continue asap.

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Reine

@Reine

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#130

hey iksha,

thanks for the pm.😃

i just love ur ff. its so fun to have both the couples in one ff.

love having prem back. 😳preet is so funny. lol. i hope even they start falling for each other so that v can have some real romantic scenes with them too, which is next to impossible cos. preet is bound to mmake even a serious romantic moment funny with his witty talks.😆 i just adore premeer and meet.

lovely update.

pls. update soon and do pm me.😊

cheers,

sakshi