FF: Ajnabee Ehsaas ||Part *13*-Pg 19 ;March 25th|| - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey riya!!! uv got an awsome FF!!!!!i jus read it..its relly addictive.....do add me to ur pm list please..thank u
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awesome update 👏 cant wait heer to find out who prem reaaly is....it will be fun 😆 update soon.
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awesome part cont soon plz 👏 and can u add me on your pm list plz!😊
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awesum fantastic update
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Awesome update!!!... loved the way heer bumped into prem
😆😆...cant wait for your next update!!!!
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hey I'm new to this forum and just wanted to say your FF is really good. Just read the whole thing now. Continue sooon :)
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hey, awsome part!!👏👏👏 poor heer. now she has to deal with prem being at her job too!!!!!😆
but wait... Prem noes heer! yay!!! waitng.. udate soon, oh and add me to ur PM list too please!!
thanks in advance!!
~nikki
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Happy Monday guys 😊!!! Hope you are all having a happy Monday lol. So here I am with the next part, nothing too exciting has happened here accept the mystery of the mystery man who keeps bumping into Heer is revealed, although it was not quite a mystery lol... it's was quite obvious who he was 😛. And Lallu's plane has finally landed too ... so Enjoy!!! 👍🏼

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Normal Again...


After bumping in to Heer he made his way to Kulraj's office.

"Kul di, bauiji ka call aaya tha, his flight lands around five so he wants me to be at Balraj uncles tonight..." he began informing his sister while he plopped himself down into a chair.

Kulraj listened to her brother's words, and then lowered her gaze.

"Di aup please, don't get all sad, I'll work all this out I'll convince bauji to get over his stubbornness and then everything will be back to normal like it used to be," He reassured her.

"Nahi Prem, too much has changed, it's never going to be normal again... don't worry about me I'm used to staying alone now. The last thing I want is for you to be stressing over my situation, I deserve all this. I shouldn't have been so selfish." Kul eyes where slowly welling with tears, she turned away from Prem to stare out the window. "Kher, meri baat chodo. You should go home then, get all your things together. "

Prem walked toward her sister who was still facing the window. He grabbed his sister's shoulder and pulled her in to give her a tight squeeze, "Just leave it all to me, everything's going to be back to normal." A moment of silence passed by. "So about that annual Belle event, you going to let me work on the marketing and budgeting for that?" he let out in an attempt to break the solemn mood.

"No, it's your last semester before you complete university, just focus on that. And besides bauji would be fully against this, forget working with me, he doesn't even want you associating with me in any way. Mein bauji ko aur dhuki nahi karna chahati,"

"He won't even find out, at least not until the time is right, and plus have you never heard of business co-op, I've already done the whole school and work thing, it's all a piece of cake to me," He walked back to the desk to grab his water bottle and leaned on the desk.

Kul let out a wary sigh, "You're not going to stop until you get what you want are you?"

He took a chug of water, and answered, "Nope,"

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Nihaal stood at the receiving waiting for Lalit, when he spotted a half bald short man and immediately recognized that it was his Lalit uncle.

Preet approached first to grab Nihaal's fist and then pulled him in for a hug, "Hey, wow look at you, someone's been hitting up the gym," Nihaal commented.

Preet laughed, "I guess you can say that, I see that you spotted us from far eh, let me guess, you saw something shiny getting into your eyes, his head has that effect, reflecting light. At least it's good for something."

Lalit gave Preet an angry look, "Gaytri tu mujhe abhi rok varna mein is ki aisi peetai karunga sab ke saamne ki.."

Gaytri cut him off, "Acha acha woh sab baad mein pehle aup mujhe apne Nihaal beta se milne de," Preet continued to chuckle.

Nihaal bent down to touch Gaytri's feet, and then Lalit's.

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Heer retreated to her desk, Hadd ho gayi yaar, ab wo mera kaam thak poch gaya? Who cares, what's it to me. I'm just here to work right... what happened to me back there... k never mind you have far more important things to think about than this.

Completely ignoring the questions her conscience was throwing at her she got back to work. Eventually the clock stuck five and it was home time. She was excited that Lalit uncle was coming, whenever her own dad didn't agree with her Lalit uncle was always there to take Heer's side and convince Balraj.

Heer hitched a ride with Ash who had volunteered to pick her up, getting in the car she noticed that Ash beaming.

"Why are you so happy," Heer chuckled

"Guess what......... I've been promoted!!!" Ash squeeled

"Wow! Serious? We've got to go out and celebrate!" Heer replied equally excited.

"For sure, I'm so happy di, finally I feel like I'm going somewhere in life," Ash was ecstatic.

Ash continued her bantering on in excitement until they reached home, parking the car in their enormous three car garage. Heer creeked the door open when she heard a very familiar laugh, she turned to Ash smiling, "They're here,"


Edited by riyapk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey.. oh i loved the Preet part. keep up the great work.. cant wait to see hoe prem helps Kul and lalits relationship.. not mention wat heers reaction will be finding out who the stranger is....
update soon, and take care, oh ya thanks for the Pm,
~nikki
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

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