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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: nikki786

wow ive just read all the parts and its so good i wish this actually happens in the show gaurav is prem yeeaaahhh im dying to see prem- heer meeting

cant wait for next part

Thanks Nikki. Milatee hoon dono ko. Wait. BTW, if my memory serves me right... you were there in the kaisa section tooo right?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 18
Preet goes to the parking lot all flustered and muttering to himself, Woh Samajhta kya hai apne aap ko.
Ashlesha - Preet and puts her hand on his shoulder. You OK?
Preet Nods and says rests against the car, his hand on the bonnet on car. Pata nahin kyun Ash, mujhe lagta hai us chehre ke peecha chupa hua insaan hai, woh prem bhaiya hi haan.
Ashlesha - true, Kaafi baari, jab aankhein dokha deti hai, par dil kabhi galat cheez nahin bolta. Pata hai preet, jab tumne shaadi ki thi, tab mujhe bahut bura laga tha. Bura is liye nahin laga tha, ki tumne shaadi ki thi - Meher ke saath, par is liye bura laga tha, kyunki tumne yeh baat mujhe pehle batana gawara nahin samjha. Pata hai Preet. Us Din, tumne jo kiya,tumne woh kiya jo tumhe theek laga - Parivar ke liye. Heer bhi galat nahin hai, Woh woh kar rahee hai, jo usse theek lag raha hai, Parivar ke liye. Agar tumhe heer ko rokna hai, to aaj phir tumhe ek aur kaam karna hai, krishna aur laxman - dono ka farz nibhana hai.
Preet looks at Ashlesha and is amazed at her maturity...
Preet - Ash ... I.....
Ash - kuch mat bolo preet, aur isse pehle main kamzor pad jayoon - go... go inside and get him. Your mother needs him. Its what we need right now, to make gayatri chachi well again. Go Preet Go... No matter how much you hate that guy right now, go and get him.
Preet goes and Ashlesha calls Harman - Mahabharat ki ladai main, jab arjun nahin tha, tab abhimanyu ko chakravyuh todne ke liye bheja tha. Aaj bhi arjun ho ya na ho, par apne parivar ko chakravyuh se bahar nikalne ke liye, do do abhimanyu ki zaroorat hai. tum tayaar ho?
Preet goes inside the newsroom and starts packing Gauravs things.
Gaurav enters - Excuse Me?
Preet - Chalo
Gaurav and where will that be
Preet - Juneja mansion.
Gaurav - and what makes you think you are going there.
Ashlesha comes in and says - Here I lakh Cheque and dont worry we shall pay you every month. Paise Tumhare Bank main har mahine chale jayegein.
Gaurav takes the cheque and smiles - ok, 7 am tomorrow.
Preet - takes Gaurav by the collar and says Dude, 6 am tommorow. Ghar ke andar entry kaise leni, bata doonga.
Preet and Ashlesha Leave, Gaurav Calls up some one and says kaam ho gaya hai, cheque lene mera paas aa jao. Yaas rakhe, aatein we, koi tumhe dekha nahin.
Few Hours Later, there is a knock on the door and Its Nihaal with Amen. Gaurav hands over the cheque to Nihaal, saying encash it and then ensure that the money goes to the Prem Foundation by way of donation.
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
just started reading ur ff...its awesome.👏 really hope this comes true and premeer meet soon in the show too. update soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 19 :
Next Morning:
The sun rises and the sounds of the birds chattering away can be heard. Two white doves come and sit by Heers Window. Heer gets up, stretching her arms. Its a day before she is to get married to Rishabh. In one day time, the junejas will be happy. She looked at her watch and realized it was nearing 4 am.
She gets up and puts her chin on her knees looking at her bare hands. In a couple of hours, there will be a mehndi ceremony, which she cant get out of. She wonders the irony of the situation. Its her mehndi ceremony and the day happens to fall on karwa chaut!!
Damn it, she says. Trust that Rishabh to come up with something like this. Ok, Main bhi dekhtee hoon, woh mere haathon main mehndi kaise lagata hain and karwa chaut, for him - never.
She gets up and puts her gown, standing by the window. She notices the doves by the window. It was the first time these doves were pertched by the window after prems death, her thoughts going to her memories with prem.
Flashback
Prem was in his room and was dressed in white. Come, lets go, heer has remarked. Tumhare haathon main mehndi dalwane. Mehndi, remarked heer. Haan Heer, Mehndi, dekho kal karwa chaut hain.
Heer - haan to. Prem - to tum mere liye karwa chaut ka vrat rakhogee.
Heer - Karwa Chaut, prem, thats for married girls right.
prem - haan, par humaree to shaadi aaj nahin to kal ho jayegee, so my dear, you are keeping a karwa chaut vrat, puts his arms around heer and smiles.
Heer - theek hai, main nahin khatee, rakhoongee vrat, par tumhe bhi mere liye vrat rakhna hoga.
prem - aapka hukam sar aankhon par.
They hug and he kisses her forehead.
Heer is awakened from her thoughts. She realizes its 4 am and time for sargi. She goes to the kitchen. Everyone sees Heer coming and make sniggering comments.
Gayatri is making preparing sargi for heer when daljeet comes and throws that plate.
Daljeet - aaye maharani aaye, bas aapka hi intezaar tha. Sargi aa gayee na, sasural se. Heer is silent and gets to sit. She sits and waits. Its 4:30 am and everyne leaves. Once everyone has left, Heer bends down and eats the sargi that has fallen down, a silent tear falling from her cheek.
Its 6 am and the door bells. Is Gaurav Sharma, with his assistant. Preet opens the door and takes them towards the outhouse. This is where you will stay, says he. Sara intezaam kar liya hain. Gaurav looks around. If he has tears in his eyes, he does not show it. After all this place has a lot of pleasant memories for him.
Hours pass by and the assistant set about, doing their work. They have been instructed on what to do as Gaurav will watch them.
In the afternoon, its time for the mehndi ceremony. Heer is dressed in an elegant green satin and net lehnga, with red embroidery all over. Her blouse is a simple one but cut sleeves , in satin There are matching ruby and emerald earning and necklace to match. Make up is minimal with just a mascara and kajal highlighting her eyes.
If everyone is unhappy, they dont show it. The girls all put the mehndi and heer has to get hers done. While the mehndi ceremony is going on, heers thoughts go to when prem had put mehndi on her.
She is awakened from her thoughts when she is asked the name of the husband. R should be intial says Rishabhs Mother. The mehndi walee is making the intials when ashlesha comes and sits admiring the mehndi. In a fun and game event, she brushes against the mehndi walee that the R becomes a P.
Every one is aghast and Heer is left shocked staring at the Mehndi.
Rishabh is furious and drags heer to get her hands washed. RR is taking Heer from one end and Gayrav is walking from the other end. Some body calls Rishabh as there are some guests looking for him. Heer enters the outhouse, without realizing where she is. She goes to the washroom sobbing and falls on the ground. Gaurav enters the outhouse. Its dark and thinking some one in inside, Heer gets up to go out , only to collide into Gaurav on the way out.
Gaurav - Sorry - woh andhera tha, dekha nahin.
Heer is shocked as she remembers the first time she met prem was similiar to this.
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Ghia

just started reading ur ff...its awesome.👏 really hope this comes true and premeer meet soon in the show too. update soon 😊

updated... got gaurav colliding into heer.. Thanks for the appreciation.
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iqra238

Awesome update!!!!.... plz continue soon!!!

Thanks for the appreciation..... do check out the colliding part and tlet me what you feel about it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rag-ran4ever

i just reall the parts its awesome i cant wait til prem and heer meet plzzzzzzzzz update soon!@@@2

Done...let me know what you think of the colliding part... karwa chaut ... **runs to hide for cover**
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: happybrar

awesome

i read all parts today
update soon

Thanks for the appreciation. I am doing this after ages and hope I am able to live upto your expectations......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 20 :
Heer... says a voice... Its Daljeet Chachi and she has come looking for her.
As Heer leaves, she looks at the outhouse. What happenned inside, was it for real. Can it really be that Prem is here? My Prem? Our Prem? Can it really be he is alive. What is everything pointing it, Is this a khismet ka khel that god pointing out.
The Mehndi in her hands have dried up and show the letter of P. All this while, Heer thoughts are on how she is going to sit with everyone in the pooja while they pray.
Heer sits down, knowing that the best option she has in the circumstances. Gayatri keeps looking up, a look giving her the reassurance that everything is going alright.
Ever since 6 am, for reasons unknown to her, Gayatri is tempted to go to the outhouse but something or the other stops her. Tonight, I shall go there, Pata nahin, dil itna bechain kyun hain.
While others had something to eat at 4 am, Heer chose not to eat, Feigning tiredness and telling everyone else to wrap up as she is not supposed to work, she leaves to resign in her room. The music was platering high and she suddenly realizes that Rishabh hasnt signed the agreement Thinkig she has to get the signed agreement from rishabh, she resigns to sleep or s she thinks
She sees herself going towards the outhouse, She raises her hand to knock on the door, only to be interrupted by some one or the other.
Gayrav on the other hand is trying hard to control himself. He knows what he is doing and he knows that tomorrow is going to be a long day. He sits there clenching his fist, more out of helplessness. Where is Aman, he wonders. He was supposed to be here by now.
Its is 8 pm, and there is knock on heers door. Great, she thinks. No one can let me be in sleep. Arre maharani, chand nikal aaya hai, she says. Its a full moon, you know pura chand but alas there is no prem you can think of.
Wiping her tears and making herself calm, heer opens the door. This time she is dressed in a soft pink lehnga with silver embrodery. She is wearing matching silver jewellery.
Heer walks up slowly, step by step, to the terrace, thinking how she will break this fast without Prem. Its not for rishabh after all that she has kept this fast.
Everyone looks at the chand and then at their hubbys face. There is a certain sadness in ashleshas face as she looks at preet from her distance and breaks her fast.
Heer look at the moon and silently closes her face and she turns around , having prems image in her mind. She opens her eyes and sees rishabh. As she raises her channi to look at rishabh and then throw the diya, heer faints.
Paani, cries some one. Some one comes foreward. Its Gaurav in a new get up. He has a moustache on and has a pagdi on, so that no one recogbnises him. Gaurav immediately picks up the glass, Slowly, he raises heers head and makes her drink the water. Isse kuch khana chahiye, niwala. preet gives a barfi to Gaurav and he makes her eat it. With the barfil still in his hands, Gaurav gets up and says isse araa ki zaroorat hai. Thak gayee hai shayad.
If Preet had any doubts that this Gaurav was not his Prem bhaiya. They were put to rest now, It is prem bhaiya indeed.For in gaurav eyes, he saw the same softness for heer as he had seen in his prem bhaiyas eyes.
Gently, Gaurav puts Heer down and goes from there.
Thank You, says lalit. She may not be my daughter any more. But had something happenned to her, I would not have been able to forgive myself.
Gaurav does not say anything but goes walks on.
Hey you, says Rishabh.
Not heading to Rishabhs voice, gaurav goes from there, Rishabh runs after Gaurav, but there is no one in sight.
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg...lol... the collidig part was awesome and just everything was brilliant... please update soon!!!

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