FF: Kuch Khaas Pal_Part 43 updated_Page 37 - Page 25

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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy
i just started reading ur ff and loved it!
pls update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

hi dear

i read from first page till part 6 right now must say masha Allah you are a genius nothing else and inshaALLAH one day you will be famous because of writting skill .i really so much involved in your story . i wish the creative heir you .we will be not at all fustrated like this as we all are now days .

about your story it is Classic rest i will add when i will read
the emotion you are showing is ..............👏👏👏awesome
he is prem but ....... his emotion and heer i am just

Imagining if prem and heer were doing this or all these secne made on them what that must be

🤗 for you only it is what i am feeling right now .
your di
Edited by brokenheart61 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Prem is rather taken aback as he sees Preet with the nails and gestures Preet to put the nails and not say a word. Preet gets the hint. Both Prem & Preet wonder who could have got into the office when the keys were kept in a very safe place and only Prem, Preet & Harman knew where the key was kept.
Heer feels much better and apologizes to everyone. She smiles feebily as she sees Prem by her feet, pressing her feet and rubbing balm over her ankles as she had sprained them. Prem then is wrapping a crepe bandage around heer. Their eyes meet and both go into a flashback mode.
** Heers Flashback**
Heer couldnt believe her eyes, when she saw Prem in her room on the wedding day. For her, it was a dream come true. At first she couldnt believe her eyes and she couldnt believe that Prem was Alive. Her Prem. Time kept to a standstill for her as Prem stood her. Time fell short even when he walked towards his over the chest, took her hand, and crossed it over his hand over his heart saying love and then moved her hand back to her hand saying you.
Time for her further kept still as she kept looking at him, with nothing but questions.
Heer rembered Gayatri Ma, coming to her on her wedding morning, telling her that Prem is here and dont get married to Rishabh Rampal. Heer remembered, Gayatri Ma telling Her that Prem was alive and that he promised he would come and he will.
As Prem stood there, How, When, Where, What , Why all these were questions running in her mind, answers to which she got, one day when Prem was wanting to watch a movie and came across the CCTV recording and put that on.
It was that day, heer realized the pain, Prem went through and the ordeal, he went through in the bomb blast. It was that day, she realized the hurt that must have been there and It was that day, she decided to be Prems strength and helping him get over his weekness and fears..
End of Flashback
**Prems Flashback**
Heer then remembered going to the shiv mandir on the morning of her wedding, and she remembered seeing a guy there infront of the shiv ji ki murti kneeling infront of the murti and asking god to give him the strength ... She rememberd hiding behind the pillar as the guy cried and said, Main Prem Hoon par main kisse ko nahin bata sakta ki Main Preem Hoon aur zinda hoon...ki main yeh sab parivar ko woh kushii lautene ke liye kar raha hoon, jo woh bhool chuke hai.. dekha na kaise sab log jeena bhool gaye hain.... heer se sach chupa raha hoon...heer se sach chupana ka matlab hai... khud ghut ghut kar mar raha hoon... par kaise main usse takleef main dekh loo... kaaise bol doon main usse, ki isse ghar ka ek sadasya hai jo uskee jaan ka dushman hai....kaise bol doon usse ki main usse khona nahin chahta aur jab tak main yeh nahin jaan leta ki woh kaun hai, kuch nahin bata sakta main usse... bas himmat de sakta hoon..
Prem remembered wiping his tears and then going away from there when he heard some one approaching and he hid behind a pillar only to see heer there and cry her heart out at the step she was taking...
Prem remembered wiping his tears and going away, he remenbered feeling heers pain with his and as he going away, the win blew and heers duppatta flew on his face. Both felt each other presence. Prem ran away from there as Heer kept wondering if Prem was there.
** End of Prems Flashback**
Prem knew the reason he came back was not only to get to know about the truth of sanjana but also to know , who was wanting to kill Heer. He rembered becoming Gaurav to uncover the two truth. Getting to know some one could be after heers life came as a shock to him when he realized the same one day.....
To be continued
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part.........wondering who wants to kill Heer.............pls continue soon.................
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey great update it was amazing thanks cant w8 to read more
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
that was awesome.....continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
CONTINUE SOON SND PLEASE PM ME WHEN U DO UPDTAE!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Shefali / Kushi..can you lock this post please. I refuse to write FF for Kis Desh and that too for a production house like BT. Pls lock this topic.
Edited by -life- - 16 years ago

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