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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!👏
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awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Part 12
Prem and Aman headed towards Karol Bagh where Prem went inside the Saree Shop while Aman stayed behind in the car. Prem came out of the shop and he saw rishabh go in a car with a woman. The woman was fairly attractive and they (RR & the woman) both were holding hands as they got in to car. At the back seat of the car was a woman, who had an oxygen mask on. The woman looked like sanjana, he thought. But sanjana here, he wondered and with rishabh, why?
Prem goes a few steps forward and sees a man run towards the building. The Man looks like prashant he thought. He follows the man, and the basement is with water. Prem rolls up his trousers and goes forward to where prashant was. He realises he goes into a shop. There is a lot of smokey stuff on the table and there he sees two men buy some arms weapons. The guys were fairly attractive and well built. They buy some AK 47 riffles, pay up and leave. Prem hides behind the door and is shocked to see Rishabh there, some later.
Rishabh and Prashant together, he wonders. Balwant comes in some time later and Prems eyes widens.
Balwant : Meri beti ko to kuch nahin hoga
Prashant : Nahin hoga.
Rishabh : Relax uncle. Kuch Nahin Hoga. Dont worry, if ashlesha is dumped, I will give her the property papers so that she can rule over the junejas and the property will be mine.
Prashant : Yeah, veera is very gulliable na.
Rishabh : Yeah and dont worry, agar veera nahin degee to uska doosra bewakoof bhai hai na, jo apne parivar ko bachane ke liye, kuch bhi karega.
Prashant : Plan kya hai.
As they are about to come closer, prashant thinks he sees some one at the door. Koi hai, darwaaza pe
Balwant Koi Nahin Hai. Tumhara dimak kharab ho raha hai.
They then hear the wind chimes and go out , only to see Prem running away from there.
Rishabh : Oh I see, Time for Plan 1 to be put in action.
Rishabh then calls some one. Says Prem Juneja will be coming to the Airport, Make Sure the accidens before he reaches the airport. Make it look like an accident and make sure the acident is serious but he shouldnt die.
They go out and Prem is no where to be seen
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very ice plot u have created waitingggggg for next asap.
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Part 13
Prem hides inside the shop and when he sees no one around, he comes out. Heer, he then thinks. He knew he was harsh on her earlier in the day. Just as he calls her, he hears a blast.
Prem falls down as soon as he hears the bomb explosion. He looks around only to see faintly Rishabh go by the car. A few moments later he gets up and sees people lie around a pool of blood. He is limping as he has hurt his foot, tries to help a few people on the way, when he sees a commotion and goes there.
He sees a woman who is crying for help and recognises her to be the one from the train. Mera beta, koi usse bacxcha lo, he hears a mother cries. Remembering his own mom, he goes to save the son.
He goes in the middle of the fire to help the guy. He cant stand the heat and this heat is a bit unbearable for him. He saves the guy, and pushes him out when the boy tells him that he will save him. Prem pushes him away and faints.
Aman meanwhile is flicking through the radio channel. Thinking its been too late since prem came and thinking it was nearing time for prem to leave so that he reaches the aiurport. He is about to remove the keys from the car, when he hears of the blast. Almost immediately he jumps out with the keys in his hand and goes out.
He sees Rishabh Rampal gets out of the car and in another car almost in a huff.
Rishabh, Yahan he wonders. He sees two other men with Rishabh and is shocked to see Prashabt as one of the other men.. Thinking, it be more important to save Prem at this point of time, he rushes to find prem. As soon as he gets out of the car. There is a blast and Aman sees a petrol pump go up in flames - a petrol pump which was quite close to where they had parked.
Aman enters the market area and sees it in all commotion. He thinks about where to look for prem, when he sees prem make his way towards an area which fire all around. He sees prem, helping a young man get out .... and then he sees fire. prem he scream. Not Believing that his friend was no more in the fire, Aman makes his way to the fire. Unable to find a way in, he sees a young TV Crew covering the event.
There is a gap from their end, realizes Aman. Thinking it will be better that this young TV Man gets to Prem first, he tries making eye contact. Eye Contact made, in what is like a sign language, he tells him to make his way into the gap to where prem could be.
The TV man on his part, didnt know what had overcome him. Leaving his crew, mid way, he makes his way into the gap. He is gasping with fire all around. He is about to leave, when he stumbles upon a body. Seeing a body there, half burnt he picks up the body and makes his way, back from the gap.
Aman has given up all hopes by now and has almost resigned to the fact that prem is no more when he sees the TV Man come out with a body.
Recognising it to be prem. Aman rushes there and thanks the TV Man,
Aman says he, Romit Sharma replies the man, raising his cap.
The fire engines have arrived by this time and Romit instructs his TV crew on what is to be done and how is it to be covered. He takes Aman along with prem in his car and they both go to the hospital
Prem is being treated at the hospital by one Dr Khan when Aman sees Rishabh. He gives the doctor some money and tells them - agar koi aapse pooche to bol dena, Prem Juneja marr chuka hai. Romit is rather surprised when he hears this.
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeee too good hope it would have happened like this in serial also.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeee too good hope it would have happened like this in serial also.

serial ka to pata nahin but whatever i think should happen in the serial or should have happenned will be reflected here..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!👏

Thanks. I am actually enjoying writing this FF.... hence i think I am addicted to one too. Wait till the plot build up and Gaurav comes to the juneja house.... you all will love it... I am sure. 😃😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 14:
Romit walks up to Aman - Prem Juneja - maar gaya ? What do you mean?
Aman looks away, and says I know what I am doing and I need your help. Its a question of Prems life and more importantly, its about saving the Juneja. I know when they get to hear of this news, it will break them. But its the best I can do.
Romit - But how how... will they believe...
Aman - that you leave upto me.
The doctors come and say that the work is done. But there is a problem. Preet Juneja & Harman are here looking for their brother.
Aman - Doctor can you do me a favour? . Is there any body here, whose face is badly burnt and is no more.
Romit is looking at Aman, almost surprised.
Aman removes prems clothes and makes prem wear the hospital clothes. He removes Prems watch and takes out 20,000 rupees. Here take these, Aman tells the doctor and be sure the face has to be badly burnt so that no one is able to make out whether its him or not...
Aman looks out at Prem and then heads out - I need to see how they will deal with this pain. Aman goes out and come back almost instantly... They have broken down and I should have known better. But for now, Prems life is more important.
Prem was taken into the operation theatre and his operation was a successful one. A sigh of relief overcomes Aman. Aman and Romit go to meet Prem and Romit is overwhelmed by the act of friendship he just saw.
Prem opens his eyes and tells aman about what he had heard and saw. He tells him that he is worried about his family and wants to protect them.
But there is one way, I can find the truth - What cry Aman and Romit in unison. That I be dead infront of the world. Aman tells Prem thats the work is already done.
In getting ready for their next plan, Prem takes assurances from Aman that they will be updated on the Junejas through Nihaal, a trusted lieutant of Prem. only Nihaal could know that Prem was alive and if they needed to know about the Junejas, then Nihaal would have to get into the house.
Prem thinks deeper and realizes the fight that ensued between preet, harman and Nihaal and realized that the company they had lost tender too was Nihaals company. Prem remembered talking to Nihaal, and he read in nihaal eyes that he really loved veera. Veera was a stubborn little girl, not worthy of nihaal he thought.
Prem told Aman to call up Nihaal and tell him to sell his company's shares. Tell him to trust me on this.
He needs to go to prashant and tell him to buy over that company since he has no money. Tell him I said so. He needs to build a situation so that rishabh does not mary veera. Tell him, I say that this is his chance to take his destiny in his hand and make his, what is rightfully his forever.
Aman does as he is told ands Nihaal replies in affirmative.
Now says Romit, is what you need is a new look. Ek Naya Chehra and if you worried about a job, dont be.. you can be a part of a news agency if you like...
A new look amuses aman and what exactly do you have in mind. Well says Romit as if studying Prem closely, a change in wardrobe is definately what you need. So out goes that suits and in will come in a new set of clothes. You are going to sport, stylish clothes, you will wear a range of clothes from kurtas with Jeans, to collared T shirts with Jeans & Jacket, may be sleavless shirts too. No More going in cars. You will start going by mobikes No more of these formal shoes, you shall be sporting all kinds of shoes, from floaters to skeds.
The hair will sport a slightly gelled look and you will wear different coloured lenses or wear spectacles.
Prem hears Romit as he says all this - ek naya chehra ... thats all he needed to expose rishabh rampal to the world. As if in conformity, all three shook hands.
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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Part 15 :
Gaurav comes back from his thoughts. He looks at his watch and then at the stars. It was a full moon night. If only Heer, If only you knew that each and every time you thought dreamt of me, it was actually true. It was me indeed.
He takes of his jacket , and gets up, strolling by the river, his mind very much concerned about his mother. He hated doing this to his mother. He streches his arms andputs one hand around his shoulder as if streching it. The shoulder still hurt and if one thing could give him away, it was this!
Gaurav goes back to where he left his jacket, proceeds to his bike and drives back. He stops at a grocery shop to pick up a few things for the house and of course to eat.
Prem -That cant be Prem - thinks Ashlesha as she sees a familiar face go inside the grocery shop. Ashlesha thinks whats become of her and goes towards the grocery shop. As soon as she is crossing the other end of the road, she sees the man get out and zoom off in his bike.
Areee stop stop... says ashlesha but its too late. As soon as she reaches the shop, gaurav is gone and ashlesha notices something has fallen... Gaurav Sharma reads the card. Ashlesha takes the card and goes to the shop - Woh kaun that - she replies and feels immediately stupid at asking that question - After all how can a shop keeper know who he was.. there would be soo many people visiting the shop.
Kaun Gaurav Beta... replies the shop owner.
Dejected Ashlesha shakes her head and goes off from there.
Ashlesha is lost in her thoughts when she reaches home. Her head hurt after a not so great discussion with harman but her heart was light. Almost impulsively and as was her habit, set about looking for preet. She knew she had been wrong in not giving preet one chance. She was hurt and she was aching but that didnt give her mother the right to make things worse.
Ashlesha didnt know what had become of her but she thought, if she had to make things right. Then this was her chance. If harman could do this for the family, so could she.
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago

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