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My Version of Kis Desh Main Hai Mera Dil.


Posting the Kahani Ab tak of Kis Desh for fans to catch up on the show - those who are reading this FF for the first time. (Thanks Shefali for the post - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1071803/kdmhmd-kahaani-ab-tak-updated)
The show starts of with a young Heer talking to Mahi and Meet who are running away in order to get married. Heer says that she is only meant for Prem and Prem is only meant for her.

14 years later -

Lalit feels very lonely in Canada, misses Balraj and wants Prem Heer's marriage to take place.

Heer and her sister Meher are shown to have a very fun life while we come to meet various characters such as Heer's mom(Teji), dad(Balraaj), chachi(Daljeet), chacha(Balwant). Daljeet, or we can call DJ comes home with Meher's alliance from the city but Teji feels comfortable and says Heer is elder so she shall get married first. Balraaj is in thoughts of how 14 years earlier he had handed Lalit the money to go to Canada and work hard and how they had promised to get thier son and daughter married when Lalit came back and reflects on his decission. Balraaj, not wanting to wait no more calls Canada where he than takes to his someone who he considers Lalit and the "Lalit" tells Balraj that he didnt't do any promise with his friend and he doesn't even know him. Balraj heartbroken and thinks Lalit has forgotten his friendship and lost his original place. On the other hand, Lalit and his wife Gayatri are remembering Balraaj while doing a pooja. In anger, Balraaj fixes Heer's marriage with Manmeet and Heer cries saying which Prem she waited for all that while didn't come.

In Canada a football match is going on India v/s Canada. Prem, Harman, Preet are shown playing for the India team and they end up winning.At home, Prem -Preet have a nice brotherly moment, and Gayatri talks to Prem about how he got hurt on purpose cuz he knew that Preet would never play cuz of his stubornness which would lead to your dad feeling bad. Gaytri carries on, saying that she is afraid, that whoever Prem marries, or loves, he will keep loving but dont say a peep about it. Preet is shown listening.

We see Heer is really heartbroken and questioning God again and again and we see Manmeet's evil intentions.Lalit tells Prem all about Prem -Heers relationship when they were young and his and Balraj's dosti, and how Balraj had helped him. Preet comes to Prem and says they are going to India, and what about Prems dreams about marriying the one he loves, and Prem answers that maybe the girl he is going to marry will be his life partner.

At the party, Heer sees Jugni, a Bhanjaran, and knows that Bhanj is a lady that dances in her loved ones memory, in pain. Heer starts dancing in India & Prem starts to dance in Canada. When Jugni comes to give Manmeet & Heer ashirwad, Manmeet gets scared & is sweating, and Jugni says, she danced, she danced till late night in "His"(Manmeet's) wedding. Heer doesnt get it, and Jugni goes to Heer, and says, that her sindoor, will be the colour red, red as in blood, which leaves Heer shocked.

Balraj & Teji are worried that Manmeet's family is asking for property, and come to Manmeet's house, and there come to know that it was Dajeet, and his brother who were there, behind all this, and that they backstabed them. BT are heartbroken, and are on their way back home, while Balraj remembers Lalit. The bus that they are travelling in meets and accident, and falls of a cliff, everyone else survies except Balraj & Teji. A guy, tries to save BT, but BT stay back, and Teji tells him to take care of their daughters. While dying Balraj says "Lalit please take care of my daughters" Lalit on the other hand, feels something is not right and with his whole family comes to India and is quite happy, when he hears about Balraj & Tejis death from someone, and he shocked. Heer & Meher on the other hand, are also feeling bad, and cry their heart out.

Heer and Meher come to Ludhiana and DJ plans a "fake" letter and a story saying how Balraj, Teji AND Heer died in an accident and how Balraj wanted DJ's daughter Ashlesha to get married to Prem if anything happened to Heer. Ashlesha is shown to have more interest in Preet than Prem. When Heer -Meher come to Ludhiana, DJ tries her best to make none of the Juneja's see Heer and Meher. Heer knows the Juneja's are staying at DJ's house and goes to Shiv Mandir where she pours her heart out. Prem follows her and feels connected with Heer, some how. On Prem-Ashlesha's engagement day, DJ steals Heer's ring and gets Ashlesha to put it on Prem. At night Heer tries getting the ring from Prem but Prem comes in time to see Heer's face and this is where Prem-Heer get fully engaged seeing Heer put her ring on Prem's finger by herself.

Heer finds a job in Prem's hotel as a waitress where some of Ashlesha's friends misbehave with her and Heer gives them a tight slap. Heer is fired from the job where Heer than meets Prem and gives him a lecture abotu her self respect and hounour and Prem hires her back. Prem sees this and encourages Heer to give the guy another slap. As times pass, Premeer are madly in love and Gayatri knows it. One day, at a party Lalit announces the wedding of Prem-Ash and Manmeet -Heer(Who he thinks is a farmer's daughter who has the same name as Balraj's Heer). At the haldi ceremony Prem finds out Manmeet is mentally unstable and that it is Manmeet's twin Prashant who is fooling Heer. As planned by Gayatri, DJ finds a letter written by Gayatri stating how Prem was her step-son hense reffering to breaking Prem-Ash wedding.Daljeet accuses Gayathri of not loving Kulraj and Prem as they are not her offspring. They are all tensed incase Prem hears any of this drama, but he does and walks off in tears. Gayathri goes off to find him, which is by a lake Gayahri asks him to forgive her and Prem breaks down saying he does not care about the letter, his depressed only because Gayathri did not speak in her defense. Gayahtri realizes Prem is right she gives a speech about her motherhood towards Prem. Daljeet apologizes and Prem announces he is still prepared to marry Ash.

Heer is drugged by her manager and left in a hotel room. Fortunately Preet stops Sameer from entering the hotel, while Prem somehow ends up in the room in which Heer is unconscious a moment is shown between the two, which a hidden security camera has captured.Heer wakes up and is in shock to see Prem in the room with her, but he explains, a knock is heard and its Manmeet. Prem convinces Here to hide while he deals with Manmeet. Heer ends up in the place where the contrusction work is going on while Prem asks Gayahtri if he could tak the hotel in his name when Harman refuses saying it is not right. The police find out about an illegal prostitution racket and suspect Heer which she agrees to and is taken to prison where Prem comes to meet her and they share a little moment. Prashant is the real mastermind behind this all and doesn't leave any way of not making Prem jealous. While playing a game DJ uses her dirty tricks to get Heer to dance with an old man but luckily Prem saves her getting Premeer to dance. Prem tries his best to bring the truth of Manmeet and Prashant being 2 different people but is unsuccessful. Slowly Heer comes to know Prem was right and is tells Vishaka everything and is ended up being locked in a room by Vishaka who we than find out is Prashant's wife and DJ's daughter. Nihaal wakes up thinking about BT and takes the pouch with Manmeet and his wife picture and shows it to Prem.

At Prem's wedding, he is feeling bad about no one believing him and as the marriage is about to take place he gets up and says he loves Heer and confesses how he always loved Heer, no matter what. Whatever he is doing today is for Lalit but he'd never be happy with Ash. Than DJ angry with Prem's confession brings Heer out of the room and tries to throw her onto the floor but ends up throwing Heer towards Prem making Premeer hug. There Lalit tells Prem to get out of the house and does his shradh. Premeer along with Meher leave home and Preet vows to bring Prem back. Premeer have cute chawal moments where both Premeer start working telling nothing to each other. There Prem proposes to Heer and they both get engaged.

Premeer and the Juneja's go to a dargah where while a big wind comes, Lalit sees Heer's locket with a Balraj-Teji picture and remembers Heer and his Balraj's Heer and how DJ and Balwant lied to him. Heer is blown away by the wind and Prem goes in search for her. Prem finds her at a river bank and is than taken to the hospital where he finds out Heer had lost her memory but she is just acting to bring Lalit-Prem closer not knowing Lalit knows she is Balraj's Heer. At Premeer's wedding Juneja's trick DJ into believeing Preet-Ash are getting married and Heer decieds to leave home.
Prem stops Heer from leaving at the train station and everyone comes to know the truth about Heer being Balraj-Teji's daughter. There we see Veera having a rough atttitude towards Heer and how Veera likes Rishabh Rampal, a hard core enemy of the Juneja's. Heer tries to prove RR is playing with Veera a numerous times but ends up failing everytime. On Premeer's wedding day, we see a bomb blast, and Prem meeting new people and going to save some people from the blast and ending up "dead".
The next 3 weeks are shown of sorrow and Prem's death, flashbacks etc, and Premeer flashbacks. Heer is heartbroken but doesn't want it to effect Veera-RR wedding. There Nihaal comes saying how he used to own a some company but someone betrayed him and took over his shares and gives Heer a number to call. Heer calls that number and sees RR picking the phone up.
Veera's Wedding is called off and Rishabh Rampal gives them 18 hours to get Veera married. Nihaal agrees to get married to Veera (Heer gives this idea) and Harman agrees to married to Meher.
Ashlesha in the meanwhile has gone to visit her ailing mother. On the wedding day, Harman ditches Meher and choses to live a luxurious life with Maya - the love of his life. Preet marries Meher. Ashlesha omes back from her visit and is shoked to see Preet face in the thaali. She is moving out of the house, hurt, when daljeet comes in and RR hands over the property papers to her.
Life is not the same for the Junejas any more. Meanwhile RR tells Heer that he can help her but she has to come to Ajmer with him. Heer agrees and goes with him. At Ajmer, Heer gets to know, that RR wants to get married to her and she is shocked. She runs away from there and is saved by some one (We see its Prem/Prem look alike). Prem /Prem look alike saves heer on innmerous occassions but heer never gets to see him. They both feel eah others connection and presence.
Back in Ludhiana, Heer tries to tell Lalit that she has got engaged but to no avail. Its in Prem fecilitation, that the family gets to know that Heer is engaged. Heer acts rudely with the family so that they hate her and does things against their wishes...
after prem feliiation, everyone is against Heer including her own little sister. Heer tells Gayatri Ma aboutwhat all she is doing and why she is doing so. We see Gaurav who looks exactly like Prem and he is cobvering the feliiation. We see Preet touching the ground that gaurav walked on(he doesnty see gaurav) thanks to a coin that falls down which Prem had given him, we see relatiionships between preet and his father improving and we see Gaurav is totally materialiastic, they are also scenes between gayatyri ma and gaurav where gaurav does not recognise her but takes care of him, Laliut comes to see Gayrav in his office to get the felicitation tape but has no money so gaurav tells him to leave and they dont see each other), we see Heer remembering Prem while she is with RR and Heer finally sees prem at the shiv mandir ands thereafter ...Heer goes prem, prem , prem and irritates him... Preet has finally seen Prem and Heer has now decided to get married to RR, and says that Prem will come and stop the wedding....and today she will be getting married to Prem
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This fanfic is my tribute to Mr. Gary Bhinder, a director par excellence and when i am writing this, i cant help but think as how these scenes would turn out had Mr Bhinder been directing them. He is not amongst us today, but his memories are there to keep us going. So this one is for the director, we all loved, for the director who made us fall in love with the chemistry of prem and heer, who made us love Kis Desh....
Character Sketch

Kuch rishte shuru hokar khatam ho jatein hain...kuch rishte shunu hone se pehle khatam ho jatein hai, kuch roishton ka koi naam hota... kuch rishte upar se ban kar aatein hai , kuch rishte humhain, ek nayee savare dikhatein hai aur kuch rishte humhare duil ko todtee hain....aise hee kuch rishton se bharee hai yeh kahani....

This fan fic is not only based on prem & heers/ preet & meher's life but is also based on the lthe people they encounter on the way....and how their lives are giverned by their own thoughts and also the thought of people around them..

This one is on :

a) Prem & Heer
b) Preet & Meher

c) prem, harman and preet

The Character Sketch
Krishna Juneja ' dadi or bebe :
She is the head of the Juneja family. A very lively person, and is a live wire She is funny and light hearted, a prankster and is full of stories. She lives life to the fullest and there is never a dull moment with her around. Prem is her darling and her favourite and her best friend and she keeps referring to prem as her boyfriend. She is very fun loving and is friends with her grand children. She is having constant fights with dai jaan...

Oscar: (I was missing oscy from KHNK and thought of incorporating him in my fanfic😆😆)
Prems pet who prem picked up from the street as a pup. prem was going for a jog one day and he saw this pup lying on the road, bleeding profusely. prem picked the dog and got it home, immediately called a doctor and nursed the dog back to health. When it was time for the pup to leave, prem didnt have the heart to let it go, and ended up adopting the pup himself. Since then, wherever prem went, oscar was sure to go.
Dai Jaan: (I was missing Kanta Ben of KHNK and hence Dai Jaan in this fan fic😆) The nanny of the house who has bought up veera and the other kids since they were chotta chota baby. She has been with the family since eternity. She adores prem and refers to him as his jaanu. Dai Jaan & Bebe have this constant fight over prem - who loves prem more and whose boyfriend is prem. For dai jaan, prem is her jaan while dadi refers to prem as her boyfriend. DJ is blunt and outspoken and speaks what comes in her mind. Lalit is very scared of her ....

Amarjeet Juneja: (Krishna ji's husband)
The patriach of the house. he is like a coconut hard from outside and very soft from inside. very few people impress him. he doesnt care much about Balrajs friend brother whom he always though of a snake. He is very close to Balraj and treated him as his own son. Amarjeets best friend was Anand Mann, Balraj & Balwant father. They were so close that they used to live in each other house. Amarjeet had a niece (Teji) whom he was very fond of and he got Balraj married to her.

Lalit Juneja:
Lalit is Krishna and Amarjeets elder son. Born and bought up in Ambala, he is one of the 5 most richest and powerful men in Canada. He is a very fortright and honest person. In his younger days, Lalit started off his by selling and making cycle spare parts in Ambala. Slowly he became a retailer to sell electronics in the grey market.Everyone was floored by Lalit's way of doing business. Canada saw his r, but it was due rise very slowly and steadily and it is due to his own ambitions that he's where he is now. Besides this Lalit was a family man. Not many know but before every venture he started, lalit will smell the mitti that his friend balraj had handed over to him when he left as also touch a Re 1 coin that balraj had given him when they were kids. These two things are his lucky omen according to him.

Lalit respects those who have mind of their own. As the climb went higher, people around him respected him more and more. He started expanding his business by getting into higher deals and as they say Lalit had arrived

What people really liked about Lalit was the fact that he was honest and led a life which was an example for everyone to follow. He was transparent and ethical in all his dealings. His strength was his family. He never showed his feelings to any one and would only pour his heart out to Balraj.

When he moved to canada, he started pouring his heart to balrajs photo and maintained a diary which he always kept near his heart. No one knew of this.

Teji Mann best friend was Rupali juneja, Lalits sister whom he adored her to the hilt.

He loves rabri anbd insists that his family leads by example. So if they go on a holiday, they have to fly the airline, they run (buy tickets like any other regular customer), they have to stay in the same hotel they run and pay for their cost of stay there. and if they want to have beer, well then they can go and get beer from the alcohol store but only the beer they make!!

Shipra or Mittu Juneja:
lalits first wife and school lady love. Lalit and shipra got married once they entered college and shipra gave birth to prem in her third year. She had a daughter Kulraj in her first year of college. Shipra was a soothing factor in Lalits life

Gayatri Juneja:
She is Lalit's second wife and a stepmother to Kulraaj and Prem. She is Shipras younger sister. She is not the typical stepmother and for her the world revolves around Prem. She loves Prem and no one can point any fingers on her son. Gayatri has stood by Lalit trough all the rough times and that the reason Lalit respects her a lot. Gayatri commands a lot of respect from everyone around. She is the single thread that binds the family together. She is into a lot of social welfare activities and supports causes for the under priviledged. - She is now a homemaker. She had done her fashion designing course and had started her own boutique before marriage. After marriage, she gave it to her best friend rehana to run and sacrificed her career as a budding fashion designer for her husband and children.


Kulraj:
Kulraj is Lalit and Shipra's daughter and is the eldest sibling. She fell in love with Kiran and married him against all odds. Kiran is working as a marketing manager in a firm, but both are happy and they have three children, two-year-old daughter ' Gunjan, four year old son, rehan, and a one year old daughter juliet. Kulraj has to think twice before she has to spend but she is proud of the fact that her husband is a self made man. For Gunnjan, her world revolves around her mama prem and when she is crying then only prem can keep her quiet. kulraj and prem are very close to each other. She adores her family, is very homely. She was a budding marketing professional and met kulraj when they both started working on an assignment together. Love blossomed between the two, Kulraj had to quit her job after marriage . Kiran married Kulraj as he felt kulraj could be a stepping stone to his success but kulraj used to never ask her family for favours - something which bugged kiran, though he was a self confessed, self made man.


Kiran Kapoor:
kiran is kulraj's husband and he loves kulraj a lot. He thinks he is a self made man (though he is not) and works as a marketing manager in a firm. At times the the financial constrains take a toll on his and kulraaj''s relationship where he lashes his temper out at her. Those times he feels that Kulraj can help him or could have helped him out. Kiram suffers from what is known as extreme mood swings thanks to his own frustrations in life

Prem Juneja
Prem is Lalit and Shipra's son. He is the pillar of strength for the entire family. Everyone looks up to Prem during the time of any crises as he has a solution for anything and everything. He is an ideal son, brother, husband and person with a heart of gold. Prem has sacrificed his ambitions for the sake of his family. He had wanted to be an airforce pilot and had studied to be one ever since one could remember. He later went on to do huis MBA in Marketing & Finance when he realized that Lalit needed his help. (As Lalit needed his help in business), he foregoed his dreams and started helping his father out. Prem is a man of words and principles. People think he is very boring and unromantic but he in actuality is very romantic and has a naughty and flirtatious side attached to him. He thinks silence can be best conversation one can ever have and he lets his eyes do the talking.

For Prem Gayatri's words are like the final decision and he will do anything to make sure that Gayatri is happy. He is man of strong convictions and a giver by nature. Prem is good looking, well spoken and has a great sense of humor. Prem is a man any girl would want to marry. Like Gayatri, Prem is a single thread that binds the entire family and has a unique ability to be a fun loving prankster as well as a responsible human being.

Prem is softspoken and usually tends to keep his feelings to himself. He would do anything for his family, even at the cost of foresaking his open happiness. He eyes do most of the talking and he feels that silence is the best conversation that a person can ever have. He is searching for a person who would look at his eye and know what he is going through.


Harman Juneja

Harman is Lalit and Gayatris son and is studying to be a lawyer. He is currently doing his internship with Ram Jethmalani and is very ambitious. He has a hidden talent - painting

Preet juneja:
Preet is Lalit and Gayatris son. He is a rebel at times, outspoken and a brat. preet always looks up to prem and wants to be like him but does not want to make an effort.Preet is in love with sports and wanted to play alongside Sachin Tendulkar one day!! He too has a hidden talent attached to him and that is writing and flirting, the latter which comers naturally to him!!All the girls in college are fida over preeet while preet has only one best friend - one whom he lost when the family shifted to candada, one whose name is meher.


Veera Juneja
Veera is Lalit and gayatris youngest child and the most pampered of the lot. She is use to luxuries in life and feels that having money is the only way to live. She is very spoilt being the youngest. veera wants to get married to a 'Bank Balance' and feels that love is just good in books and without money nothing can work. She is proud of her good looks and se knows that her good looks are the ticket to getting a wealthy husband. She has the perfect body, a figure to die for. She is intelligent and witty and not used to the hardships of life

The Manns.

Balraaj Maan:

Balraaj has immense pride in his daughters and has thought them to always keep their head held high. He is a farmer and has petrol pumps as well and runs a few schools at his farm. They are very modern cum routed family. Balraj has bought up his daughters to stand shoulder to shoulder with a man. He has 100 acres of land on the outskirts of Ambala and given the charge of his farm to his wife Teji Mann.

Teji Maan:
She is balraaj mann's wife who is very simple and who cares for her family. She is a homemaker and has bought up her children with principles and values.


Balwant Maan:
He is younger brother to Balraaj'he's a hen pecked husband to Daljeet who is jealous of his brother and his wealth and the popularity that he has. Balwant is good for nothing and he feels that he has been poorly treated and dealth with. He is further more jealous of balraj as he was in love with teji ever since he could remember. When balwant saw balraj and teji getting married, he could not bear it yet he could do nothing about it, as his was a one sided love.
Balwant has a very dark side which only balraj, lalit, gayatri and teji know of. Well balwant does not know that lalit and gayatri know. He was always being compated to balraj because of which he suffers from an inferiority complex.

Daljeet Maan:
She is a very typical small town ambitious mother and aspires that all her three daughters get married into rich families and does not feel a wee bit awkward if she has to be pushy to find prospective bridegrooms. Daljeet has two children ' Ashlesha and son ' Nihaal . Daljeet saw money come and go from an early age and hence she became extremely materialistic and after the riches of the world. She is a great cook and had even written a her own cook book. It was her cooking that Balwant fell in love with and it was through her cooking that she made way into balwant's heart.

Ashlesha:
She is someone who wants to be known and does want to be in the limelight all the time. She is very arrogant and brash. She cannot hear a 'NO' for an answer and always gets what she wants. The reason that Ashlesha had got attracted to preet was because she considered him to the heartthrob of the university where she wished to apply (she googled it!!).Has no mind of her own. Is hell bent on being a model and the fashion industry enthralls her. She has no knowlewdge of whats happenning in the world outside. Uskee life main ek hi tension hai, ki woh miss indua kaise banegi aur is tension ka uske paas jawaab nahin hai.

Heer Maan
Heer is the daughter of Balraj and Teji maan. Heer had studied law and works a lot for the NGO's and the underprivilidge... Heer is not a rebellious person but does not hold herself before fighting for causes that she feels are right. She indepedependent and has a mind of her own. Heer is a person who would listen to her Parents and would even give up her dreams if they came in the way of her family. She is a simple girl next door who has no qualms about life. She is a dreamer but hides her dreams under the pillow! Takes each day with a smile on her face. Her family means a lot to her and is aged 23 years


Meher Maan:
Is second daughter to balraaj and teji maan. She is a simple and a innocent gorl living in the big bad world.... Loves to eat food. She can do anything for her family.She is very good at drawing and belueves that art is the best form of expressing ones creativity.

Nihaal Maan:
Nihaal is the son of Balwant and daljeet Maan. He is someone who wants to be a model and is always in the gym. He is a very typical jaat, good to look at but no gray matter up there. Nihaal is willing to sweat it out and struggle his way up in the modeling industry and wishes to be in Bombay soon.

Satinder Mann.
Balraj and Tejis Son who ran away and married mahi, the woman he loved much against the wishes of mahis parents. A freak accident made everyone believe that he and mahi arent alive any more but in actuality they are. Balraj isnt willing to hear anything about his son and Teji often thinks of him.

Gaurav Sharma (This is my friends character sketch of Gaurav Sharma) : Prem acting to be like Gaurav Sharma. Is completely opposite to Prem . Has the soul of Prem, the youthfulness, mischeviousness and playfulness of preet and akshat of ambar dhara, is Mean like karan of mamta, Has a I dont care dmn attitude like alekh and huda of LRL, is innocent like Ali of LRL. is arrogant like darcy of pride and prejudice. No body knows whats going in mind and no body knows how he will react. Nobody knows what his real intentions are or whats he going to do in any particular situation.
The basic premise:
Balraj & lalit are two friends in Ambala whose friendship is a misaal for everyone at Ambala. often people say dost ho to balraj aur lalit jaise. Both have seen the thick and thin of life. Lalits father has never liked balrajs younger brother and often warned balraj about him but balraj would not heed to his attention thinking that the day is not far when his brother would change.

Teji and Shipra went to the same school and while balraj used to eye teji, lalit used to eye Shipra. They grew up and married their love. Actually regarding Lalit and Shipra, it was the master plan of Amarjeet Juneja - Lalits Father!

In her first year of college, shipra gave birth to a daughter and in her third year, she gave birth to prem. When prem was born, lalit used to often joke that he would marry prem to a girl who was tejis parchai. Shipra wished that teji would have a child soon so that her daughter could have a friend to play with and prem too.

a year later it is diagnosed that shipra has cancer and she passes away when prem is just a year and an half old and kulraj 3. Lalit is shattered. Knowing that the children are small and need a mother amarjeet and krishna ji want to get him married and think the best match for him wiould be gayatri, shipra sister. gayatri does not agree at first but later agrees when balraj n teji convince her. . She was always in love with the kids and then adopts them as her own. She didnt want to get married as at that tyime she had just started her career. But she loved her sister dearly and prem & veera were like her children. In fact they used to call gayatri ma and their own mom badi ma. Prem started calling gayatri ma ever since he could remember.

3 years later, Heer is born and kulraj is excited. Prem sees heer and wonders why is she small and why is she crying and why cant i hold her. Lalit used to laugh at this and say oyee puttar wait till you are older and then you will not want to leave her....

Gayatri used to be be back from college & work and used to play with the kids the whole day long.

After his kids were born, he sifted base to canada to be something in life. Before leaving he promised balraj that he would get his elder son prem married to heer, balraj daughter. (He sd it was his fathers wish and his wish too)

20 yeats pass and there is no news from lalit. Assuming that he has forgotten his promise, balraj then starts looking around for a match.
Balwants frustration have arisen in the mean time and he knows that the only way he can get the zameen is if balwant and teji are out of the way. The zameen is a prime land and moreover they are 100 acres. The house is a prime property too and balwant used to always wonder as to why everything was in balrajs name n not his or then shared.

Only Hitch - The land is in prem's name and the house was in heers name!! So devises a plan, to get heer married off to manmeet, then kill of balraj and that way he would get the house after manmeet marries heer and puts the property in his manmeets name and manmeet would then transfer the land to daljeets name. Manmeet is the son of daljeets sister.

The plan almost works only manmeet is married from before. Manmeet is a good for nothing guy and is a prankster who suffers from adverse moodwings. He is reckless and was often caught on the wrong side of law. Had some dealings with the underworld.
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Starting this from where the episode ended last night.
Part 1 :
Heer came back inside and rushed inside her room, breaking down as she saw Prems Picture. She took it and embraced it in such a way that the thought of holding the picture would keep it warm. She kept looking at the frame, tears trickling down as she sobbed and crying where are you prem - where are you? she looked at the picture and then she thought of the promises she made with prem and to prem. She kept thinking in her mind about what she had done , what she said and the impact on the family when it dawned on her on gayatri moms reaction.
Suddenly there was a knock on the door
Gayatri Ma walked in and started proceeding to take away all the pictures that there were hanging in the wall. Heer ran to gayatri ma to stop her.... telling her no ma dont do this... please dont... Gayatri Ma tells heer that now that heer is getting married to RR, these pictures have no right to be here and forget these pictures, all the memories of Prem must be taken away.
So Gayatri Ma gets up and proceeds to take Prems Belongings in heers room, when heer gets hysterical and begs gayatri ma to listen to her. She makes gayatri ma sit down and admits that she has been wrong, She confesses that she never wanted to hurt them, but if she didnt hurt them and they didnt sit up and fend for themseklf, then DJ would rule over them and she didny want that to happen, for she didnt know how the family would be when she is gone and who would look after them. She tells her of her deal with RR, where they will get all the wealth and property back..
Gayatri is stunned and shocked. There is an immense sense of pride she has in heer. She didnt realize that heer was all grown up.
Gayatri wipes heers tears and tells heer that she is with heer and that she should go to the shiv mandir where heer and prem used to go and where they met for the first time.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awsomeeeeeee too good very part update more plzzzzzzzz asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1 Continued:
Heer walks up the stairs of the shiv mandir, her thoughts going back at the time when she and prem first felt. She still remembered that feeling, that sensation, that connection. For some reason, she was feeling that same kind of ehsaas today.
As she is walking up the stairs.... a car stops by. Gaurav Sharma looks out of the window and sees someone climb the stairs,... he thinks he has seen her somewhere and wonders where. His assistant ask what happenned..he says nothing and drives off... Some 20 minutes later, the car comes by the shiv mandir again. This is my chance to see her, he thinks. He walks up the stairs and heer is sobbing looking at the shivling.
Phir se rona he wonders, yeh ladkiyan bhi na.... he shakes his head as he leans himself on a pillar looking at heer totally mesmerzed by her beauty... wohi khubsuratee, wohiii ehsaas... he thinks. He takes out the payal and looks at it. plays with it, and a the tunes of which get carried by the wind. Heer hears it and feels the same ehsaas and connection. She looks around and sees no one there.. Thinking he is caught, prem gets to face her... he does not want to show her his face - nt just yet, so he covers his face, with a stroll and prceeds to walk towards her.... She sees him there and time stands still for time. She looks at the eyes, thinking she has seen these eyes somewhere... gaurav moves his hand as if to stop her but uns away from there before he can get caught ... as soon as he goes, heer stops by the lower most stair...there is a bracelet and a ring there which has fallen... Heer picks it up and recogises it that of prem - could it really be prem? She shakes her head, picks up the bracelet and ring and goes away from there...
Gaurav comes from behind the trees and with tears in his eyes, sees heer go away from there....
Back Home, Gayatri has convinced everyone to be apart of the wedding celebration.
Gaurav Juneja in the meanwhile proceeds to go towards the barsati of the juneja mansion. Gaurav enters the room, and flungs his keys, He cant thank nihaal enough for being his saviour. He looks at the watch and realizes its 3 am. He switches on the DVD Players, so that he can look at his family. One plyus point of being a news reporters thats its a good enough bahana for him to be closer to his family. He cant thank that news reporters enough who saved his enough and got him to the hospital where he was treated upon. He rememberd regaining consciousness and he remembered seeing his family walk past his ward...
He then also remembered the blast in delhi and he remembered seeing rishabh rampal fleeting image in the car in delhi just before the blast ...(which lasted for a couple of seconds )
Gaurav proceeds to watch the tape and he thinks of the times he spent with his family. He hears the announcement made and proceeds to make himself a drink. He knows he lied to his assistants cum friends but this was a lil too much for him to handle. How can he stop this wedding? He didnt want heer marrying that rishabh rampal and time was running out for him. He got to know of rishabh rampals connection with the blast and thus ever since then he has made it his mission to show the true face of rishabh rampal - the face of a psychotic spilt personality man, the face of a killer
Gaurav takes a sip from the bottle and proceeds to fall asleep. its about 6 am when Gauravs alarms rings. Knowing it will only be a matter of time before his mom - gayatri ma wakes up, he proceeds to head into work.... he goes to the office building and like always hides in the basement store.... before he slowly makes his way up the left to the post 28th floor of the news room tower
He arrives in the towers casually flinging his jacket over his shoulder and strolling in humming and hawing.. he flirts with the ladies on his way in to the bosses cabin... where the discussion is on the much awaited heer mann and rishabh rampal wedding.
Gaurav hands over the tape to his boss who then gives to the editor to show the tape on their news channel along with the breaking news that they will cover it...
We will cover it - Gaurav Says out aloud
Boss - yes we will cover it and for that you have to stay with the mann at their residence to cover the event
Gaurav - stay at the mann, boss dont you think its a lil too much ... after all why such a fanfare for a wedding...
Boss - Gaurav.....................
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey misty....
i just caught with your ff....it's awesome..
so you're going along with the theory that prem is faking a memory loss.....well will have to see how the track develops and the mystery unfolds....
update asap..
love
vandana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: riks1

hey misty....

i just caught with your ff....it's awesome..
so you're going along with the theory that prem is faking a memory loss.....well will have to see how the track develops and the mystery unfolds....
update asap..
love
vandana

Thanks. Yes, thats the theory that he is faking memory loss...his entire plan will be unvieled in flashback... next part would be updated in the evening....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey misty nice idea for a ff .hopefully get to see something along these lines on the show.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Misty...
Just read your ff.I always love the way you write this ff is not an exception.
Looking forward to read the rest....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeee too good very nice part will waitingggggg for next part asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fijiana

hey misty nice idea for a ff .hopefully get to see something along these lines on the show.

apke muh main ghee shakar aur chocolates bhi!!
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Originally posted by: NeIN

Misty...
Just read your ff.I always love the way you write this ff is not an exception.
Looking forward to read the rest....

you know something .... i can do way better than this.... i seemed to have lost that magic touch i used to have during nimmo days....but thanks... with each one of your encouragement, i can only become better...

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