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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry for the long wait guys... i was just caught up in my exam and studies...Here is todays update:

Part 15

The streets once busy were now very quiet and sound. No one was to be heard as the darkness fell upon the skies. The full moon lit up the sky with its vibrant light as the wind whistle through the grey skies and the grey trees.

Everyone at the Juneja Residence was preparing to eat that night's dinner. Prem, still lost in the thoughts of Heer, waited for someone to call him down. He was extremely hungry and wanted to stuff himself as soon as possible.

"Sir, dinner is served, please come down and eat it", said Baba (one of the servants)

"Mmmm...smells good...too good...the aroma is so inviting", said Lalit who came down in a beige Kurta Shalwar. He came down from the stairs looking as happy as he could ever be

"Ill eat first, I have been working all day", Said Preet jokingly
"No, Ill eat first, I am the daughter", Said Veera
"No I will eat it first", said Heer because she got into the mood
Everyone turned around to look at her as they believed that she was so gentle and quite. They werent used to this
"I mean Mama and Papa will eat first as they are the eldest", she said quickly trying to divert attention from herself
"Suck up", said Preet
Prem slapped Preet's head from the back
"If you dare say anything like that about you bhabhi, ill do more than just a slap", Said Prem
Preet took two steps back, and then gulped loud and then sat all the way across from Prem
This caused everyone to chuckle.
"Mmm, its not only good in aroma but as well as the taste", Said Lalit proudly," When did you make this baba"?
"I didnt, Heer ji did", said Baba with a wink
Prem choked on the food as soon as he heard her name. He slowly looked up at Heer who was already staring at him with so much love, so much care in her eyes that it could make anyone melt.
Everyone complimented Heer on her achievement.
After the dinner, Prem went up to Heer who was outside. She was holding something in her hand Prem looked up at the sky and saw the bright moon...
"My chand is better than you", he said with a smirk
The wind was blowing hard and the trees were whistling. It was dark but the light from the lamps in the garden enlightened their surroundings. Prem came tapped Heer on her right shoulder. By the time she had turned to her right, he had already tapped her left shoulder. When Heer finally caught a glance at him, she told him to stop. He got annoyed and took the papaer in her hand.
"Give it back Prem, its not funny", said Heer
"No, what are you going to do", replied Prem playfully
"Please Prem", said Heer
When Prem read the peice of paper, his eyes looked like nothing before. It looked like he was about to burst. Burst into laughter that it...
"You...you...you ordered that food....you didnt make it"? said Prem while laughing really
"Shut up Prem, i cant cook..i needed to impress Gayatri aunty" replied Heer
Prem couldnt stop laughing. His face was something to see. This really annoyed Heer and so lifted her pallu (dupatta/veil), and left without realizing that her pallu had fallen on Prem's head and covered his face. The light feathury, emerald dupatta was very alluring. Prem closed his eyes to dwell within the senses that he was feeling. Senses of love, kindness, attraction, need and many more that he felt at that second. Heer turned around snatched her pallu and started to walk.
Prem ran towards Heer and fell to her feet and grabbed her foot
"Prem, usually in movies, the hero grabs the female's hand. AND NOT HER FOOT", replied Heer angrily
"I know, but I wanted to show you that for you, I am ready to do anything. Ready to fall at your feet and not complain. Your feet are just as precious to me as any other part of your body.", said prem with a twinkle in his eyes
Heer couldnt help but to fall into his arms and let his body be wrapped areound hers. They were close, close enough that every part of their body was touching the others. They could feel each others dadhkan.
Heer looked up into Prem alluring eyes. His heart skipped a beat or so as her astonishing eyes made contact with his. Her hair was flowing everywhere due to the wind; most of which was around prem.Her scent was something one could not ignore, he was....intoxicated....
That was it, they couldnt control themselves anymore. The sight of her was making him melt. She could feel herself getting red, and hot. She was also feeling a physical attraction towards Prem. She couldnt help herself....she was ...intoxicated....
Prem took Heer's face in his hands. He gently placed a kiss on her forhead. Slowly moving down, he left a peck on her nose. Then finally, her soft gentle, pink lips came in contact with his. He nibbled on her upper lip and they closed their eyes. Heer slowly wrapped her hands around Prem's waist;tightly hugging to never let go of him. Prem brought his hands down from her face, to her shoulders, to her palms, and finally to her waist. He slowly felt her against his firm hand to make her feel comfortable around him....
Lalit realized he had forgotten something outside, he came outside whistling.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG you are such a good wirter and i luved the prem and heer scene and o god heer actually ordering food instead of cooking🤣i would wish that happend in kdmhmd and that look of heers face would've been priceless!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg awesome update!!!!!!!👏 lolz heer ordered food instead of cooking it!😆😆 omg im blushing!!!! the kiss was soooooooo cute and romantic! omg hope lalit doesnt catch them!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Haha heer cant cook🤣🤣🤣Preemer scence*blush*lol!plz do continue very soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely update... it was quite funny that Heer ordered food and did not make it.. and Prem grabbing Heer's foot...😆

omg such a romantic kiss and Lallu came outside the house, did he see them????

post the next part soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so heer had ordered the food and didn't make it tht was funny, i liked prem and heer's part.... so will lalit catch them or.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys..I am back with the update...

Part 16:

Lalit, in his kurta shalwar, was walking outside as he felt that he had left something outside. He looked around the garden and spotted two people and wondered why they were so close. He went up closer to check upon the two slender figures standing in the moonlight when, all of a sudden, Preet jumped out of thin air and said

"Papa woh...what are you doing here?"

"I am looking for something that i think i have misplaced...tujhe kia..?"

"Nothing Papa, Mamma thinks you came out here to smoke your 'cigaar'" Preet said with some hesitation

"Kia, arey yaar.. okay i have to go console her now. She probably thinks i am smoking...Gayatriiii MAINN AA RAHA HOOOONNN", said Lalit as he ran towards the door

Preet walked to Heer and Prem

"Uhmm Uhmm..." coughed Preet

"Arent you ashamed even a little, you bhabhi is standing here... why do you ALWAYS turn up at the WRONG time?"replied Prem with a sense of annoyance

"Bhaiyya, i came to warn you that papa was coming. You think i like doing this? Fine i wont help from now on hmph" replied Prem as he pretended to be mad at both his brother and sister in law

"Arey Preet..Preet yar i was just joking.." replied Prem as he nuggied Preet

Both the brothers hugged and Heer left to go to bed...

The next morning, Heer got up to an aching head. Apparently, she hadnt slept all that well and didnt feel so good. She slowly went downstairs but felt giddy so slipped. She fell off the stairs and...

"HEEEEEEERR!! screamed Prem as he got worried seeing her fall

"Heer wake up...wake up Heer, sh*t what do i do... no one is home"

He went to call the doctor and then came back to Heer. He picked up her slender body in his arms and rushed upstairs to lay her in her bed. As he gently laid her on the bed, her dupatta got caught in his button. He got on the bed, layed close to Heer's body.

She then slowly opened her eyes, sat up and caressed Prem's hair. She ran her fingers through his face which caused Prem's blood to rush inside of him. Prem got up and gently pushed Heer flat on the bed. His body was on top of hers. He got close to her lips...infact so close that there wasnt a breath of hers that he couldnt feel. Heer got a little worried so she kept her hands on his chest to try to push him away. However, he was too sturdy for her petite body frame. He came closer to Heer's lips and....

Realized it was a dream. Yes he was lying close to Heer's body but she was still out cold.
"Heeer, what happened to her?" Gayatri came out from the back
She had just gone out to get some stuff for the house when she got a call from Dr. Malik that Heer had fallen off the stairs.
"She fell, Prem is she okay?"
"I dont know, Dr. Malik hasnt arrived yet" replied Prem anxiously waiting for the doctor to show up so that he can confirm that nothing had happened to Prem's Jaan
"Is her child okay?" asked gayatri with concern
"Child?"
Oh no..Prem hadnt thought about that at all. If the doctor comes and checks on Heer, everyone in the household would find that they had made it all up. All of a sudden, Prem wasnt as anxious to meet with the doctor. He wanted to figure out a plan first.
"Okay ill go downstairs to confirm that he is coming...wait with Heer okay beta" Replied Gayatri as she left to make the call once more.
Prem couldnt help but pace around Heer wondering what to do.
"Ahh, Prem?" Heer said in a faint tone
"Heer, FINALLY, you know, a doctor is coming to check on you"
"Wait why, what happened, why am i in my room?"
"We dont have time for that Heer, a doctor is coming to check on you and your child as you had fainted, you are fine but what about your 'child'?"
Heer was shocked and nervous as she didnt know what was going to happen now.
"Wait"..Prem said with a smirk
"Hi i am Dr. Malik, may i know where Bhabhi, i mean Heer is?"
Yes, Prem had created a plan. Preet was apparantly our Dr. Malik
"Oh, you dont look so good Mrs. Heer..."
"Just call me Heer"
"Okay, so why did you faint" questsioned Preet
Gayatri gave him a stern look and asked
"Arent you the doctor?"
"Oh right right, umm i need to check on her so i am going to need you all to leave" said Preet
"Why me, I am like Her mother" said gayatri in a subtle tone
Upon hearing this, Heer felt a sudden rush of guilt inside her body. She couldnt believe she was lying to a mother like figure...especially lying about something as serious as becoming a mother...
"Maa , Maa main Pregnant na.." Prem put his hand Heer's mouth just in the nick of time cause he felt that she was going to tell the truth
Gayatri left as she knew that he had to check on Heer. Prem left with her but snuck back into Heer's room without notifying Gayatri.
Preet kept his stethiscope on Heer's wrist when Prem came in...
"Dr. Malik....If mamma came in right now she would know you are not a real doctor. YOU ARE NOT LOOKING FOR HER PULSE YOU ARE LOOKING IF THE CHILD IS OKAY...."
"i cant do this bhaiyya....i am going.....bye" Preet left
"Heer, if something had happened to you i would have died. Do you not know how much i love you" said Prem with concern
"No i dont" Heer said jokingly
This caused the both of them to chuckle and they were glad they were out of that awkward situation
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
awesum update
preet dr malik
👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

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