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Posted: 16 years ago
out of town, will comment and read when i get back!
Posted: 16 years ago
SYDNEY!?!?! *eyes pop out* I hate you.

But yea...have fun...without me. *winks*

Anywho...moving on...really FLUFFY update! *pulls cheeks* So cute, with Kiran/Nihaal dropping all the work on Prem-u's deask. ☺️Had me *ROFLING* to my hearts content...can't wait for the next part....my fingers are still crossed for a tragic ending...OHOHOH! Make it a dream. That is deadly. 😆

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

My spot! 😳

*unreserved* You know my excuses, I have work, and see there are some ff's that take good concentration in reading....yours happens to be one of them and so I can only do it every thursday night!😆😆😆 So onto the update, but ohhh I love the number 13 as well...I don't find it very unlucky... Nevermind, at least I knew you read it! 😃 And thirteen is not unlucky! Hence I used it in my ID here and on YouTube. 😉

Firstly...that song!😳😳😳 no need to say anything about it do I? It's one of my most MOST fav songs!😳😃Mine too!
That meeting at the shiv mandir...classic Radz, and you wrote it beautifully again!👏👏👏 The last line in that part was just superb, "now nothing could tear them apart" 😳😳😳 Thank you. 😳 You are too sweet. 😳

The way you showed Veera and Prem meet was awesome Radz, there was so much love there! 😊 I wish they were like that on the show again!😃😳Aw, thanks! Not everybody likes Veera. 😆 So there were one or two *cough*Bhav*cough* people who disregarded it. 😆

Wow...Meher's very..uhem excited na?😆😆😆 Awww they have a daughter? She'd be so cute! 😆Meher is one of a kind. 😉 Oh she is, believe me. I've imagined her to look like one of my neices, and she is adorable! 😆

It was fantastic as always Radz! 😃 And yay, I get to read the next part right away! 😊And I shall comment on it below!

Love you loads, love you too!

Meera😳

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I have to edit both my comments as usual Radz! 😊 will do it asap!

*unreserved*

The other comments are on pg. 32😳

Second last? I can't believe it...probably cus I started reading it after...but still!😆😆😆 Ohh have fun in Sydney! 😊 Ahh MJHT! MayUr!😉😃😳Thank you! I shall be taking my laptop along, no worries, though I won't be online the first week of May. 😃 I've only reached mid-Jan. *pouts* I wanna catch up with it already!

Ahhhhhh the song!😳 No need to explain how much I love it right?😳 Naw, the blushes did that for you. 😆

The Harman-Meher scene was super cute, and adorably subtle with Harman's sweet comment!😆 Aw thanks! They kept writing themselves in. 😆 Kinda like Meet in the other one. 😆

Awwwww they kept his office totally unopened and unused? that's incredibly sweet! 😳 I'm so proud of them all...😛So am I! Though Nihaal is making it hard, he's acting like his kid! 😆

OH NO!😆 Aate hi kam pe!😆😆😆 Poor Prem!😳But he sorta expected it, just not so much! 😆

Awwwww I love love LOVED the way you ended it Radz, that is so totally awesome! 😃 Tomorrow or well Tuesday right? will defintiely be interesting!😛😃😳 Can't wait for it! 😳Tomorrow! I hope you'll like what happens!

Love you loads and loads, love you too! Thanks so much for always commenting!

Meera😳

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Boink! Will edit this once I'm done making 16 lasagnas! O.o 16? I want one!

-Bhav (:

Ah-hah! I hit 'edit' instead of 'quote' this time! 😃😳 Anyway. I love the brotherly relationship they all have. It's so sweet and really well-written. I totally forgot what's on the paper thingie Heer gave him, but yeah... Aw thank you! The 'paper thingie', as you've so eloquently put it, was the original wedding card from the beginning of the show. 😆
I have a stomachache now. I knew I shouldn't have snacked on all that grated cheese while I was making the lasagnas. Ooh, yum. I want!
Love, love you too!
Bhav (:

@ sweta, purplestar22, premeer928: Thank you!
@ Maddy: Ooh, hope you had fun! 😃
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shabo24

SYDNEY!?!?! *eyes pop out* I hate you. 😆 I'm taking my laptop. 😉

But yea...have fun...without me. *winks* Oh I will. 😆 And I'll also be online to tell you ALL about it. 😉😆

Anywho...moving on...really FLUFFY update! *pulls cheeks* So cute, with Kiran/Nihaal dropping all the work on Prem-u's deask. ☺️Had me *ROFLING* to my hearts content...can't wait for the next part....my fingers are still crossed for a tragic ending...OHOHOH! Make it a dream. That is deadly. 😆Thank you! How's about - NO? 😆 I've already written it dude. I'll write a tragic oneshot for you soon. 😉

--shabz

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
[QUOTE=blackdaughter]out of town, will comment and read when i get back!
Ok!!! I'm back! And yes i did have fun, thanks for that!!! 😆 For full information please visit the post i made about this........ 😉😆
ROFL!!!! They put Prem to work right away!!! That is so mean......... and funny!!!!! 🤣 Awww, poor Prem, complaining all the time too!!! I thought that was really sweet the way he asked why the door was locked in a childish tome!!!! *pinching cheeks* 😆
Obviously he would get right back to work too!!! *shaking my head in dismay* Prem kabhi nahi sudhre ga!!! 😆 I didn't fully understand what Heer gave to Prem exactly !?!?! Was it a shaadi ka card or something !?!? 😕
Anyways, Great update, i really liked it and i can't wait till the next part!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Ok!!! I'm back! And yes i did have fun, thanks for that!!! 😆 For full information please visit the post i made about this........ 😉😆 I shall do that then! 😉
ROFL!!!! They put Prem to work right away!!! That is so mean......... and funny!!!!! 🤣 Awww, poor Prem, complaining all the time too!!! I thought that was really sweet the way he asked why the door was locked in a childish tome!!!! *pinching cheeks* 😆Aw, thank you! Am glad you liked it. 😃 (ooh, side note, how would you like to be in a oneshot I plan to write today?)
Obviously he would get right back to work too!!! *shaking my head in dismay* Prem kabhi nahi sudhre ga!!! 😆 I didn't fully understand what Heer gave to Prem exactly !?!?! Was it a shaadi ka card or something !?!? 😕Heer gave Prem a wedding card, the one Lalit and Balraj made before Lalit left for Canada. 😃
Anyways, Great update, i really liked it and i can't wait till the next part!!!! Thank you! Next part will be up in a bit!

@ Sweta: Hey sweetie, am updating in just a few minutes!
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey all! Happy Vesakhi! (or Baisakhi, however you may prefer to spell it. 😃) It's such a great day no? 😉 Especially after last night's episode. How giddily in love were PremHeer? I mean seriously? *sighs dreamily* Awesomeness.
Okay, so get ready for the last update, ever, of DTHM! (Sorry Shabzie, no tragic ending. 😆 I've got a tragic oneshot in the works! 😉)
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Mujhe Mera Junoon Aakhir, Kahan Se Hai Kahan Laaya
Jisse Khwabon Mein Tha Dekha, Usse Raahon Mein Hai Paaya
Itna Na Chaho, Yoon Na Saraaho
Kal Milna Paaye, Toh Jaane Kya Ho
Kabhi Na Kehna,
Aisa Tum,
Ab Tum Na Ho Na Gum


Ashlesha was finally home from the hospital, baby Sukhpreet having been given a clean bill of health, and everyone was thrilled, Angad most of all. He was excited to have a baby in the house, and both mothers were very much amused to see the cousins getting along, and their fathers' playing like children themselves. Amidst the flurry of activity, no one noticed Prem plot silently with Harman.

Meher had been surprised to see a note posted on her door after dinner, directing her to the garden. She followed the instructions, bemused, and was rewarded with Harman finally admitting his feelings for her.

On the other hand, Heer had been receiving a single red rose from each of her family members, including Angad and Sukhpreet. By the time she had reached her room, she come to the obvious conclusion that something was up. She did not, however, expect her room to be bathed in the soft glow of candles as Prem stood in the centre, a bouquet of white lilies in his hands.

"Prem, yeh sab," she gestured around her, "kya hai?"

"Candles hai," he responded drily.

"Prem!" She scrunched up her nose in irritation.

He smiled, and went down on one knee, holding out one hand towards her, reminiscent to the way he had over a year ago, only, this time, there were no tears and no words. Just a silent promise, and quiet happiness as Heer slipped her hand into Prem's.


Meelon Ka Jaise Tha Faasla, Sadiyon Ka Jaise Tha Raastha
Anjaan Tha Dil Ke Hona Hai Kya,
Phir Bhi Mujhe, Lagta Hai Yeh
Humko Toh Milna Hi Tha


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And there it is. The end of DTHM. Thank you guys so much for taking this journey with me. My first foray into a long FF, that I actually completed! If it weren't for your support, and encouragement, I'd probably have abandoned this ages ago! So thank you so much, and I hope you enjoyed this as much as I did!
On another note, I hope to start updating Chupke Chupke regularly on Tuesdays, starting from next week. Please, let me know if you want to be PMed when I do update, and I shall add you to the list. 😃
Also, there were one or two requests for me to include scenes into this FF, ones that were mentioned but never shown. Heer yelling at Preet (after part 1 and before 2) and Prem thinking about Heer (after part 8 and before 9). If you do want me to write these bits, please let me know. I shall post them in my Ramblings' thread as DTHM Extras. 😃
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

tango! =)

Awwww, *sob* it's over!!! *wailing here, give me some tissues*!!!!!! 😆
It was a great FF!!! It was short and really to the point!!! LIke Prem's proposal, it was so......... perfect!!! It wasn't over the top, it was just a promise to be together forever............. *sigh*, how romantic, i'm such a sap at times!!!!! 😆
Finally Harman told Meher, about time too!!! 😆 That's really sweet how all the males of the house become like kids around the new baby!!!! 😆
Well, i have to say it was an awesome FF, and you did a fab job!!! *thumbs up* Now i'm really excited for Chupke Chupke!!! Yay!!! Please add me to your PM list!!!
Hope you have fun in Sydney and a safe trip too!!!! *hug*
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
*poke*
Awww this was so sweet! I wish it were longer, but I approve. *nods* I wish you'd shown how Harman admitted his feelings for Meher though...
You totally got me psyched up for CC!!!! 😃 *dizzy* Hurry up and write it!!!
Love,
Bhav (:
P.S. Ohgod I totally gave a completely ditzy comment. *winces* I'm sorry...!
P.P.S. We need to meet up before you go to Sydney. Also, what if you get a call from NTU while you're in Sydney or something? ALSO, Yeggie's not free. At all. She was so...odd...online yesterday...like, tired-high-kinda thingie, y'know?
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