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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sourpuss

I totally loved it. Well, except for the Veera-Nihaal-have-a-son thing, but you already know about that. (What? It's ICKY, okay?!) *rolls eyes* Aren't you glad it's almost over then? I should write a Veera-Nihaal oneshot just to annoy you. 😆😆

Yeah I don't feel like saying anything else, because I'm getting rather worried for tomorrow, but yeah. Waiting for Friday! And you were worried for nothing! It went okay right? 😉
Love, love you too!
Bhav :S

@ sweta, premeer928, zaibun, purplestar22: Thank you guys so much!

Originally posted by: fj08

hi aradhana
glad prem is back with his family, do we get a prem heer heart to heart next?
only two more parts left, well we can bug you for CC then 😊

tc
fatima

Di! Don't know if I have mentioned this, but I love your new avi. They look so good together there! And no, I didn't want to go indepth on the PremHeer conversations, because I can't! 😆 So, imagine that the conversations already took place.
Yes, after this, I can be bugged for CC. 😆 I have got to get back to writing that.
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

tango!!! =) *does random dance next to Maddy* I don't know how to tango. 😆

You may have noticed that now i use the different dances to reserve, so you'll always know that's me in the future!!! Anyways, moving on!!!! 😳😆 Ooooh, only a couple of parts left!!! I promise i will not ask for an epilouge, seeing how you mentioned that like FIVE times!!!! 😉😆 Now what is chupke chupke about!!! Sorry if you mentioned before becuase i missed it!!!! 😳 😆 I just wanted to drive home that point. 😆 Chupke Chupke is my other FF, which I put on hiatus for a really long long time. I think I stopped it at where PremHeer meet for the first time. I have not mentioned it to you I think. So no worries on that front. There are only five parts for that so far, if you want to catch up. 😉😆 Self-advertising!
It's so perfect how Prem would know where Heer is at that time........ *sigh, why aren't guys in reality like him*!!!!!! 😭 😆 I really like how you don't have to show anything dramatic like even a hug or something to prove what Premeer are for each other!!!! Great job *thumbs up*!!!!! 👏Aw, thank you! Yeah, I wish guys were like that in real life. My parents are going to have such a hard time finding a guy for me. 😆
Awww, poor Veera, futile attempts to feed her son!!! Nihaal is no better either *shaking my head in dismay*!!!!!! 😆 Don't worry Veera, Prem is back forever now!!!! A happy and sweet reunion between brother and sister!!!! Aw, thanks. 😉 Glad you are not so anti-Veera like some people. *cough*Bhav*cough*
Haha, Meher is sho cute!!! She just came in and started babbling and only Harman gets her!!!! 😆 Shukpreet..... hmmm...... any particular reason for the name!?!?!?! 😆 ROFL!!! I loved Meher's reaction!!!!!! She squecked!!!!!! 🤣 I reacted just like Harman!!!!! Awwww, she hit him!!! I don't think he minds!!! I wanted to bring the old Meher back. The one from the beginning of the show, that is slowly coming back whenever she is with Preet. 😉 Sukhpreet, because it's due to her that Prem came back to the family in a way. So it was either this or Khushi, but this is more Punjabi I'd say. (I have a best friend with this name. 😉 And she's going to become my Parjai soon. She's engaged to my cousin!) And of course Harman didn't mind. Any physical contact between the two is welcome to him. 😆
I'm so glad that Prem is finally back with the family!!!!! Great update and i can't wait till the next one!!!! Thank you so much for the long comment Maddy! See you tomorrow!
Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: munam_13

3 parts at one go... Yay!!!! I salute my capacity😆... 1st of all loved the simplicity with which you brought the truth out... it was just awesome... Sanjana deserved what she got... I am really pleased her character ended *I hope*... the last part where he comes back home feeding his nephew was just very sweet.. now really waiting to see what happens next...😃

Priyo! 🤗 I had wondered where you had disappeared to. 😆 Glad you enjoyed the parts. Don't worry, Sanjana is not coming back. I'm not BT! 😆 Thank you so much! Hope you enjoy the next part too! 😉

Originally posted by: shabo24

🤣I think I remember asking you to stick in a part with Veera working and Nihaal smirking. *ROFL* I forgot about that. Yeah, you did! 😆 Only thing missing was the Bengali sari she was supposed to wear. 😆

But wow, that lil, mini mini Prem and Heer meeting at the mandir just was GREAT...I mean you really showed the significance of the moment with the duppata and her eyes and all! *bravo* Thank you. You are way too sweet. 😳

Meher is too cool...and Preet/Ash had a BABYYYYYYY! *squeels* Preet is a daddy-o ☺️ Uh-huh, PreetAsh had a baby. And Meher is awesome! She and Harman wrote themselves into the part, and the last one. 😆

Three more parts?? Can I hope for a tragic ending? Two more parts, not three. 😃 And what do you think?

--shabz

Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
It is Friday! And this is the second last part of this FF. After this, I shall concentrate on CC, though I haven't written that in ages. Hopefully, I'll start writing this weekend. Maybe not until I catch up with episodes of MJHT though. 😆 I want to catch up before I leave for Sydney. My cousins have Star One, and it'll be easier for me to watch there then here on YouTube! 😆
I'd mentioned that the parts got shorter right? Hope you still enjoy!
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Na Kuch Poocha, Na Kuch Maanga, Tu Ney Dil Se Diya Joh Diya
Na Kuch Bola, Na Kuch Tola, Muskura Ke Diya Joh Diya
Tu Hi Dhoop Tu Hi Chaya, Tu Hi Apna, Paraya
Aur Kuch Na Jaanu, Bas Itna Hi Jaanu
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Main Kya Karu
Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Main Kya Karu
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Main Kya Karu
It had been two days since Prem Juneja had regained his lost memory and returned to his home and Harman had decided that his Bhaiyya needed to start taking up his other responsibilities again, something that Meher had scoffed at, saying that Harman just wanted more time to flirt with his secretary. Harman had smirked in response, telling her that his secretary had nothing on her (and failing to mention that his secretary was married, instead taking in Meher's blush rather happily). So he and Nihaal had decided to take Prem Bhaiyya to the office that morning and finally reopen the Chairman's office after a year. (Preet was once again spending the day in the hospital with his wife.)
Prem had complained as everyone had bundled him into the car, sulkingly accusing them of wanting him back just so he could free them from responsibilities to which Nihaal had replied with a cheeky "Of course!" which sent the rest into uncontrollable laughter, and had Prem pouting and petulantly calling "Heer!". Heer did not bother to protect Prem from the family's teasing; she was too busy giggling at his misfortune.
By the time they reached the office, Prem had somewhat stopped whining, though he was still making faces at both Nihaal and Harman. Harman just rolled his eyes and dragged his brother into the building as Nihaal handed the keys to the valet. He rushed in after them, wanting to see Prem's reaction to Harman informing him that they had never opened his office (except to get it cleaned, of course). He had promised his wife play-by-play details of the emotional scene that was sure to occur.
"Why is the door locked?" Prem asked, finally breaking his childish silence. Harman and Nihaal exchanged grins before Harman's slipped as he realised he had lost his bet with Meher. So Nihaal answered for him, informing Prem that the office had remained unused; nobody could take over his office. Prem was obviously touched by the gesture, and as the peon unlocked the door to his office, he hugged the two men.
As Prem made himself comfortable in his chair, Harman looked at Nihaal, who hastily stopped bouncing on the balls of his feet and playing air drums and hurried out of the room. Prem looked at his brother in question.
"Patience is a virtue, Bhaiyya," Harman said, laughing as Prem made another face at him.
Nihaal returned with a large stack of files which he dropped on the desk in front of Prem. "Have fun, saale-sahib." Prem looked in askance at him. He called out to both of them as they walked out of his office, but Harman just waved cheekily, chortling. Prem settled down with a sigh. Time to get back to work.
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Prem loosened his tie as he entered his room. Preet and Harman had made a lot of noise when Heer had moved back out, saying that it had take ages for her to move in in the first place. He sighed wearily. He had thrown himself back into work the minute Harman and Nihaal had left his cabin.
"Prem?" Heer's voice distracted him from his work-related thoughts. He smiled at her as she came to stand in front of him. She looked a little nervous and when he noticed what she was holding in her hands, he realised why.
"Woh, Bauji ney diya tha, tumhe dene liye, jab tum wapas aaoge tab."
She hands him the thick paper, the words still visible after all these years. She bade him good night and left the room.
He took in their names as they were written on the card, and looked in the direction Heer had just gone. He grinned to himself. Tomorrow would be interesting.
Tu Hi Toh Jannat Meri, Tu Hi Mera Junnon
Tu Hi Toh Mannat Meri, Tu Hi Rooh Ka Sukun
Tu Hi Aankhiyon Ki Thandak, Tu Hi Dil Ki Hai Dastak
Aur Kuch Na Jaanu Main, Bas Itna Hi Jaanu,
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Main Kya Karu
Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai, Yaara Main Kya Karu
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Main Kya Karu
...Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi...
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Do tell me what you think! There is no more conflict, just light-heartedness. 😉
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
I have to edit both my comments as usual Radz! 😊 will do it asap!

*unreserved*

The other comments are on pg. 32😳

Second last? I can't believe it...probably cus I started reading it after...but still!😆😆😆 Ohh have fun in Sydney! 😊 Ahh MJHT! MayUr!😉😃😳

Ahhhhhh the song!😳 No need to explain how much I love it right?😳

The Harman-Meher scene was super cute, and adorably subtle with Harman's sweet comment!😆

Awwwww they kept his office totally unopened and unused? that's incredibly sweet! 😳 I'm so proud of them all...😛

OH NO!😆 Aate hi kam pe!😆😆😆 Poor Prem!😳

Awwwww I love love LOVED the way you ended it Radz, that is so totally awesome! 😃 Tomorrow or well Tuesday right? will defintiely be interesting!😛😃😳 Can't wait for it! 😳

Love you loads and loads,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Updated both comments! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome update.. Teasing part was cute... Update soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Boink! Will edit this once I'm done making 16 lasagnas!

-Bhav (:

Ah-hah! I hit 'edit' instead of 'quote' this time! 😃😳 Anyway. I love the brotherly relationship they all have. It's so sweet and really well-written. I totally forgot what's on the paper thingie Heer gave him, but yeah...
I have a stomachache now. I knew I shouldn't have snacked on all that grated cheese while I was making the lasagnas.
Love,
Bhav (:
Edited by sourpuss - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
that was so cute...loved the cute scenes with prem, nihaal, and harman. cant wait for the next part...continue soon. 😃

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