New Fanfic:LOVE IS ALL AROUND part 9 updated 2/18 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
Sorry for the late reply!
It was a great part and i can't wait till part 2!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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and i also loved the 2nd part!
i wonder how there days gonna turn out going to the fields and all!
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cont soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'm sorry!!!!!!!!!!!I didn't get time to post it!Hope u guys forgive me!!
So today I'm gonna post the 3rd part!!!!!!!!
Hope u guys enjoy it!!!!
Part3:
Everyone was talking and then they noticed that both Prem and Heer were missing.While they were walking around the fields.They both were talking and having fun.They reach the swing where Heer usually comes.Heer tells prem"yeh mera jhula (swing) hai ,may yahan rooz ati ho aur yeh muhje papaji ne muhje bana ke diya tha jab mein is duniya mein ayi thi." Prem tels her"tum bato na mein tume push karta ho." Heer hesitates first then finally sits down.While prem is pushing her, she tells him to come and sit next to her so both will enjoy.Prem gets excited and sits next to her.There is silence between them but finally Heer speaks up and tells him"Prem muhje tume kuch baat karni hai." Prem tells her"hai bolo kiya kana hai."She tells him"muhje jab pata chala tha ke humari shaadi paaki ho gayi thi jab hum chote the,muhje bahut khushi hui thi.mein ne faisla kiya tha ke mein tumare intezaar karo gi aur intezaar karti karti muhje tumse pyar hogaya.Muhje pata nahi tha ke tume bhi mere liye aise socho ge.Ab mein tum bata diya hai ab faisla tumare haath mein hai."She gets up and is about to leave but prem gets a grip of her hand and pulls her back to him.He makes her sit on his lap and tells her "tum muhje pyaar karo aur mein nahi yeh karo yeh hohi nahi sakta.Tume pata nahi meine iss din ke liye 20 years intezaar kiya tha.Hai mein bhi tumse bahut pyaar karta ho au humeha karo ga."Then Heer hugs him and both share a passionate hug.This is seen by Preet and Muski. and they tell them"app ka romantic scene katam hogaya ho toh phir hum andar ja sakte hai aur sab app duno ko dhoond reh hai.Both get embarassed and leave.Preet and Muski head inside when Muski trips on a rock and is about to fall.Preet catches her and both look into eachother eyes.Preet tells "shall we go inside or else everybody will think we're romancing outside.Muski comes out of her dream and both head inside.
I will post real soon!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeee too good plzzzzzzzzzzzz update more asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Fantastic part!
Soooo cute!
Please continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey there..ur FF is really good..read all the three parts in one go..very nice..looking forward to the next update..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Guys
I'm back with the 4th part!!!!!!! Sorry guys that I'm, posting soo late its becuz of school, school projectsetc.So plz bare with me!!!!
Well Here you go:
Balraaj asks Muski to show everybody their rooms.All of them followed Muski up the stairs and Muski showed Lalit anf Gayatri's room first then Preet's room second then came Prem but he told her "muhje Heer ne mera room dihka diya tha."Muski was confused and wondered when did Heer show Prem his room.Well she had no clue.So she didn't care and went downstairs to help Heer.While Heer was in the kitchen fihuring out what to make for lunch.Heer didn't notice Muski come in so she sneaked up behind Heer and said"BOO". Heer was scared like she had seen a ghost or the ugliest creature on earth.Muski started to laugh hysterically and Heer was fuming!!!!Muski told her"Di app apna zaara chera dekh thi jab app ne yell kiya."Heer said"tum rukho mein tume dekh thi ho jab mein kaam katam karti ho."Muski told her"arre di app itna serious kyun layri hai yeh to sirf ek chota sa mazaak tha."Heer left the kitchen to go to her mother for help.Heer went up to her mom and asked her "maa app zaara aj kahan bana sakti hai because muhje kuch smaaj nahi ari hai mein kiya banou.App ko toh pata hoga So plz app kahan bana sakti hai."Teji smiled and told her that she will cook but she has to plant the water with Muski instead.Heer agrees and goes to Muski saying that they have to go outside to water the plants.Then Heer left and while an idea popped in Muski's head and decided to take Prem along with her.Heer is outside turning the hose on and started to plants the water.She heard footsteps coming and thought it was Muski but actually it was Prem.Muski was behind Prem and Heer turned the water high.She didn't know so she wetted Prem with out knowing it.While she had her fun!!!!?When she was done she was shocked and frozen there with her mouth opened.She dropepd the hose and tried to bring words out of her mouth but couldn't.Muski goes over to prem and whisper"jiju app ka yeh moka hai app bhi Heer Di seh badla lay."Prem thought for a minute and the nagreed to what Muski said.He starts to walk closer to Heer and Heer asks him"Prem tum yeh kiya kare ho."But Prem doesn't listen and has his naughty smile on his face.Then Heer says"Prem" and Prem says"Yes Heer".They keep saying these dialouges until he reaches up to heer.He picks up the hose and then looks ate Heer with his wicked but cute smile on his face.Heer gets scaredand moves back.Prem then wets Heer from head to toe.Heer is screaming"no prem yeh mat karo plz ."Finally Prem throws the hose down.He stares at Heer and thinksto himself"wwo yeh gili bhi ho, phir bhi bahut khoobsaurat lagti hai"Heer was duming and yells to prem"may tume nahi churo gi nahi.She starts to chase Prem around the fields.Then with out knowingshe trips on a rock and falls on the field with prem.Prem on top of her and heer on the bottom of prem.They have an eye lock for 2 minutes enjoying veryminute of it.Then Prem starts to move closer to Heer and slowly moves her wet hair from her face and puts it behind her ear.Heer becomes shy and blushes.Muski has gone inside so she doesn't know whats happening outside.Both Heer and Prem are enjoying every moment of it.Then they hearsomeone calling them and both get alittle shocked!!!!!!!!!
Stay Tune for the nextaprt!!!!!!!!
Precap: muski and preet become friend and muski tells everyone how heer watered prem instead of watering the palnts!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
very nice
loved the precap heer water prem
cont soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tooooooooooooo good!cant beleive keep it up!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

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