New Fanfic:LOVE IS ALL AROUND part 9 updated 2/18

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello Guys,
I have read so many fanfic on this forums.So I thought why not I start one.The fanfic is there is love for everyone.They will find their soulmate.If you guys want me to continue, I just alittle support because this is my first offical fanfic.By the way, Im gonna keep adding parts to this thread and I just alittle support from you guys.😊😊😊
It has the same cast like in KDMHMD but there is no meher i replaced her with Muskaan from DMG.
INDEX:
part1-pg1
part2and3-pg2
part4-pg3
part5and6-4
part7a and7b-pg5
part8-pg6
part9-pg 7
Edited by Penzee2007 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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no replys i guess i will cancel it!!!!!!!
its ok guys if u don't want me to continue!!!!😔
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Posted: 17 years ago
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will be waiting for part 1
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Cool, no plz update part 1
Edited by ruexangel - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay Guys Here I Go!!!!!!!!!! I will keep updating after couples of comments or if I have time.
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A girl woke up in when the sun came in her room through the window.She woke up befor anybody in her family rubbing her eyes.She got up from her bed took out her clothes and went to the bathroom.She took shower and brushed her teeth.She came out wearing light blue kameez that came up to her knees and whit salwaar.She brushed her hair and then went to her little sister Muskaan's room(shorten for Muski).She was none other than Heer Mann.She lived with her family(dad,mom and lil.sis).Her father Balraaj had set her marriage with his best friend Lalit Juneja's older son Prem.The Juneja crew were in Canada for 22 years.Lalit hasn't been India yet.
Toronto,Cananda:
There was a guy who was in his study room looking at files .His neck was badly hurting from all the work..That was none other than Heer's ranjha Mr.Prem Juneja.Then someone came and started to massage Prem's neck.The person asks him "ab acha lag raha hai ke nahi".
Prem answers him by saying"yes bahut acha lag raha hai".Then he turns around and finds his little naughty brother Preet.Prem says "arre tu Preet yahan kiya kar raha hai?"Preet tells him "may ne app ko dheka that ke app ka neck dukh raha hai toh phir may massage karne agaya."Prems saya"ohhh toh phir may ne bhi tumare liya kuch karna hoga bol kiya karna hai."He knew that when ever Preet needs to tell him somethin or ask something he does something good for Prem.Preet tells him"baat hai ke dad ne kaha tha ke Balraaj uncle to phone kar ke batao ke hum sab wapis India lote re hai."Prem tells him"sirf yeh baat thi.Theek hai i will call him."
Back to India:
Heer goes to her sister's room and wakes her up.But, Muski tells her "Di sirf 5 minuter sone doh na."Heer tells her"utt Muski aj Friday hai aur ajj mandir bhi jana hai."Muski's eyes open and tells heer"oh shit, app ne mujay pale kyun nahi humm mandir ja rahe hai."Heer tells her"ab tu utt aur come downstairs hum ne nikal na hai."Heer leaves her room and goes in the kitchen.She makes teafor her parent and leave a not saying"hum mandir ja rahe haiaur thori se late ho jai ge leking app fihkir mat kare.hum jald se jalde lote aye ge."Muski comes donstair and dressed in a black kurti and jeans with black slippers on.She was ready and both left the house.
Guys that was part 1. Hope you guys liked it.
I will update soon and next part has Premeer meeting & little scene!!!!! So don't forget to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by Penzee2007 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow very nice do cont soon i will be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello Guys,
I have read so many fanfic on this forums.So I thought why not I start one.The fanfic is there is love for everyone.They will find their soulmate.If you guys want me to continue, I just alittle support because this is my first offical fanfic.By the way, Im gonna keep adding parts to this thread and I just alittle support from you guys.😊😊😊
It has the same cast like in KDMHMD but there is no meher i replaced her with Muskaan from DMG.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its awesomeeeeeeee too good waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello Peoplez!!!!!!!!
Here is the 2nd part:
The 2 girls reached the temple.They both went up to the pandit and did the aarti,finally took the parsad.After they were done praying.They headed for their house,when they reached their house.There were cars parked in front of their house.Muski asks Heer"di humare ghar kon aya hai?" Heer responds to her saying"pata nahi andarchalte hai aur pata karte hai." They both came insdie and they saw their Lalit uncle &his family sitting in the livingroom.They were shocked to find them here in India.Then Balraaj saw them and told them"chok gai na hum bhi chok gai thei."They both smiled and took their blessings from both Lalit and Gayatri.Heer and Muski sat down and looked around not knowing what to do.Then Muski nudges Heer and asks her"in teenu bahi may se kon Prem ho sakta hai".Heer tells her to shut her yaps! Then Prem looks at Heer and knows that she's gonnabe his future wife.preet nudges prem and asks him"app aisey usko kyun dekh rahe hai."Prem tells him"arre pagal yeh tumare hone wali babhi hai."Preet ask him"appko kase pata hai yeh Heer hai."Prem doesn't answer him and keeps staring at Heer's beauty.Then,Heer getsup and leaves from there.She goes to the kitchen.After 5 minutes, Prem getsup and tell Preet that he's going to the fields but he goes to the kitchen after Heer.Heer gets shocked when she sees Prem in the kitchen .Prem goes up to Heer and says"hi Heer".
Heer says the same thin to Prem.He thinks to himself and tells himself"I'm so stupid may ek conversation be nahi shuro kar sakta."Heer is thinking the same thing. At last, Heer breaks the silence and asks Prem"app ko kuch chaiye tha?"Prem tells her "nahi kuch bhi nahi." He then asks her"zaara tum mujay mera kamra dhika sakti ho aur phir mujay fields pa lay jao gi."Heer thinks for a minute then agrees.Both head out of the kitchen and go upstairs.Both of themreahc upstairs and Heer tells him he can pick out a room and he picks the room thats across from Heer's room.Heer actually likes Prem but can't say it to him and Prem can't tell his feelings to Heer.She was happy that he chose the rom across from her room.
That's it guys for today.I will update tomorrow and Heer's feelings come out to Prem.So stay tune for the next part.Its gonna be cute.❤️
Edited by Penzee2007 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice update..plz continue soon

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