New Fanfic:LOVE IS ALL AROUND part 9 updated 2/18 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
I think he is prem...who else can knock heer's door like this.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey rlly gud
plz update
or pm me prtty plz
thnx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
when r u adding the nest part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

hey , just now i read all the pts.ur ff is very nice and cute.please pm me when u post your next part.

plssssss conitnue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Guys,
I'm back aFter 2 months and sorry about that.I was busy with familand school.
Part9:
Heer opened the door to find Preet standing there with a crimson red box with a small card on top."what are you doing here ,Preet?"asked Heer."hey i just came to give you this gift."answered Preet.He handed her the gift and left before heer could blink her eye.Heer closed the door behind her and sat on the bed with her gift.He read the card and said"MY TO BE WIFE,THISS GIFT IS FOR YOU AND IT HAS BEEN HANDED DOWN FROM MY GREAT GRANDMOTHER TO GRAND-MOTHER TO MOM AND NOW TO YOU.PLEASE KEEP IT SAFE AND I WANT YOU TO WEAR IT TOMORROW AT THE WEDDING."
She opened the box to find moang tika which was beautifully carved and looked old fashion but was beautiful."Oh my god, thats so pretty" she thought to herself.She got up and went to the mirror and tried the mang -tika on.After trying it on she placed back in the box and called it a nght.
The next the whole Mann house was preparng for the wedding and Heer came downstairs to find her parents instructing the decoraters where to put the flower etc. Her mom saw that she came downstairs and went over to her."beta why are you down so early, you should be resting."her moom told her.Heer smiled and asked her mom " do you need me to do something?" "Yes go upstairs and rest and thats it."her moom instructed her.Heer became sad "mom come on let me do something" The mother told her" how can I let you work when its your last day in this house and then your going to be going to your new house.Then you could work there all you want and just for my sake go upstairs, I'll send you breakfast."Heer hugged her mom and both mother daughter cried.They broke apart and Heer went upstairs.Later that evening, the guest started to arrive.Heer was upstairs sitting on her bed looking at her family photo pictures and remembering her childhood memories.Some girl came up and informed her the guest came and that she shoulde get ready.Heeer told her that she will and the girl left.Heer put away the photos and left for the bathroom to take a shower.20 minutes later she came out wearing a golden wedding attire with sequences.She went to her dresser and started to apply make up and put jewlery on espically the mang-tika that Prem gave to her.Muski. came up and stood at the door way looking at her sister in a bridal attire.Her eyes became teary and Heer saw her throught the mirror and told her to come in.Muski. came in and stood by her sister with watery eyes."Di are you going to forget me? when you leave." she asked her.Heer got up and put her hands on her shoulders."How can you possibly think that I will forget you?" with that she hugs her for long time until some girl came and informd them that the groom has arrived.They broke apart and Muski. then said "Di you stay here and I'll go check on my jiju and I'll come get you later." Muski left and Heer felt nervous and went back and sat on the chair in front of the mirror looking at her reflection in the mirror.Soon she will be gone from this house and staying with the love of her life.
Thats it guy but plz bear with me I have math exams and i have to study.
Hope u enjoy it and ;eave comments.
PS:let me know if
i should continue after Premeer marriage or end it.😊
Edited by Penzee2007 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
yay....ur back. the update was amazing. 👏 cant wait for the wedding. take ur time dear....school always come first. continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thankyou sooooooooo much for such a nice part.continue asap.do you think that we tel u to end it with marriage no way.......we want mooooooooooooooore😉😊.take ur own time.ALL THE BEST for ur exam

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