New Fanfic:LOVE IS ALL AROUND part 9 updated 2/18

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Rani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

hello..nice update..so now Heer knows about Preet-Muski..but..what was that at the end where she thinks to herself saying..sab ko pata chal chuka hai??..well hopefully my doubt will be cleared in the coming update..

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Sunayna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Ohh cute part!

and they got caught...lol!

Looking forward to the next update!
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Amerra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Hello Guys, Here is the 7th part B:

Preet and Muskaan came down stairs and sat at the dining table.After they finished their breakfast,everybody statred to plan for heer and prem's wedding.Balraaj then announced that The Juneja crew is going to leave the house.Muskaan and Preet made sad faces and then lalit explianedthat they can't live here because the bride is gonna leave from this house and we have to bring her in her new house.The juneja crew packed and left for their house to get things ready.After they left the Mann family were busy decorating the house with helpers,ordering things(clothing, food etc.)They did all the work during the day and ended the day with the whole house decorated for the next dya.They slept early so they can get up in the morning early.

Next Day:

Everybody woek up in the Mann house except Heer.Teji let her sleep and Meher,Teji and alraaj worked through out the day until Heer woke up and it was 12:30.She got up and got freshed and went downstairs.When she went downstairs,everything was done for the evening.The 3 members were sitting in the living room chatting.She went in there and Balraaj said"arre beta tum utt gayi".Heer asked him"papji app ne muhje jagya kyun nahi?" Teji answered "humne siocha tha ke tum soohi raho aur thora sa kaam tha hum katam karle ge." Balraaj tells her to come and sit down.She went over there and sat down.Teji began saying to her"tum tho is ghar mein tho thore din rahne wali ho aur hum tume kaise kaam kara sakte hai."Heer's eyes got teary and told her family"mein is ghar se jari hu lekin iska matlab nahi ke mein is ghar ki beti nahi rahi,mein beti tih eti ho aur beti rahu gi." Muskaan then speaks up and tells her"app ki shaadi ho jayi gi toh app muhje toh bhool jayi gi,app ke pass toh prem jiju hoga na.toh phir app ko meri yaad kab ay gi." Heer gives her a seriou/sad look and tells her"are pagli tumne kabse soch liya ke mein tume bhool jao gi tum tho mere dil mein ho aur raho gi.'Muskaan get up and gives her sisterly hug,then she tells everyone that she has to go outside with Ash.She leaves and the rest of the afternoon the parents and daughter talk and remember the old memories.

Evening:

Guest started to come and the Mann family was dressed exceptHeer who was getting dressed for her Mehendi ceremony.Heer wore a light pink lengha and kurta that had handful off straps that were on the back tied.She wore a big necklace and matching ring, earring and bindi.The Juneja crew arvied and Muskaan came and told heer that they have arrived and are wating for her.Teh nVeera comes to Heer's room where Muskaan is.She comes up to her and greet her.She tells her"babhi app tho bahut sundar lagri hai,prem bahiya app ko dekhte hi ra jai ge." Heer blushes and Prem was already seated on the bed/stage type of thing.He wore a cream colored sherwani and chunri matching his clothes.He was waiting for Heerimpatiently and he turns his head.Heer was coming down with Muskaan and Veera by her side, he had his mouth opened wide.Preet cam and told him to close his mouth while he saw Muskaan coming down and winked at her.She was seated next to Prem and he kept looking at her.He then from the back hold her hand from the back and doesn't let go.She's trying to free her hand but fails.She then tels Prem"ma ari hai" and he suddenly lets go.Everybody is having fun and she laughs and tells him"just kidding". Then the song "Move Your Body Now" from the movie Kismat Konnection.Preet and Muskaan start to dance,Veera joins them.(sorry couldn't get the lyrics written out)In the middle of the song Veera goes and brings Heer and Prem to the dance floor.Prem and Heer start to dance and don't notice that everybody has stopped dancing and watching them perform.When the song finishes, they notice that they were the only one dancing.Then the mehendi ceremoney started,the real one.The designer put mehendi on Heer both hand and teaseingly Muskaan asked"Di app ke haath pe kiska naam likha jai."Heer blushed and said"Prem". Prem smiled and they filled her both =hands upto her elbow.After she was done,Muskan, Ash and Veera got thier hands filled.The ceremoney ended and people started to leave.Gayrti gave gufts to the Mann family as shagun.Finally they left and Heer went upstairs.She washed off the henna and was really red and she smiled at the hand that said prem's name.She started to take her jewleyoff and went to the bathroom to change into her night clothes.She finally went to sleep after the fun eveing she ahd was tired.

Next Morning:

She woke up and went to the bathroom to take shower and get dressed.She came out and went downstairs.She greets everybody "Good Morning" and sits at the breakfast table.She starts to eat her breakfast.Few minutes later their door bell rings.Meher was about to go bbut Heer stopped her.Heer went and opend the doo.She was surprised!!!!!!! It was her bstfriend Sonia and Heer huged eacother.Heer told her to come in but she refused.she said"mein zara jaldi mein ho mera husband car mein wait kara hai lekin tum muhje se park mein milne ana waha pe sab baat karege."Soon she left and Heer closed the door & went inside.She told her parents it was Sonia ans she wanted to meet herat the park.She wants to spent the day at the park hanging out and her parents told her that she can go but come before evening.She went upstairs to get changed again and her cellphone rang.She saw it was prem and she closed the door so nobody can hear her.She answered it and befor saying anything Prem said"tum ko aprk mein ek surprise milega." Then he hangs up and Heer is standing there all confused.

Thats the part for today and hope u guys enjoyed it,Do comment plz!!!!!!!!!!!

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Rani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

hey..that was a quick update..really nice..wondering what's the surprise??

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poonam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

hey
great update
can't wait...
prem has a surprise for heer

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Amerra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

hello guys,

i'm gonna start a PM list so if u want to be in just add your name or username then i will add u.

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Edited by Penzee2007 - 16 years ago

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poonam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

hey
add me to pm list
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Amerra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Hello Guys

Here is a part 8:

She stopped thinking and took out a light blue kameez with white sequence and whit salwar.she put her hair in a hair clip and put on alittle makeup.She headed out side the house went to the park.She reeached the park and starts to look aorund for her friend.While she's lookinng somone comes up behind her and covers her eyes with their hands.She turns around to find Prem behind her.Heer asks Prem"tum yahan kiya kare ho?" Prem tells her" your dear firend sonia and I made a plan;I wanted to spend time with you and if I aksed you, you would refuse so I aksed Sonia to bring you over here. I wanted to surprise you."Heer smiled and said " I liked your sweet plan but I have to be home by evening." Prem says"Theek hai mein tume ghar drop kardu ga." After spending the whole afternoon,Prem dropped her home.Heer was about to get out when he grabbed her hand and sweetly said"sirf ek aur tuh phir tum meri ho jao gi." Heer blushed and got out the car..She went in the house and theri was a commotion in her house.Her mother saw her and told her to get ready the Sangeet and Haldi ceremoney is gonna start.Heer went upstairsand saw that her clothes were already on the bed.She took them and went to the bathroom.She came out wearing a red and green lengha with a little sequence.she went to the dresser to put jewlwey on and put make up on.Muskaan came in and compliments her"Di app ko sab niche bula re hai, jiju ki entery ho gayi hai." Heer smiles and tells her"mein tayar hu." Someother girl came to escort Heer down with Muskaan.Prem was seated at the type of bed thing there was mattress with white cloth over and pillows around it.Prem saw Heer being escorted down by two girls, he didn't care about the girls around her he only cared about her future dhulhan.Prem was waerinf a black sherwani with white sequence.Heer came down and was seated next to Prem.They kept looking at eachother and the Haldi and Sangeet ceremony started.The song "move your body " came on and Preet and Muskaan started to dance.Soon everybody joined them and Prem and Heer were on their own.Prem from the behind got hold of Heer's hand.He kept tickling her on her hip.When the dancing stoped, Heer gave him a look stating to let go of her hand.The Sangeet came to an end and the haldi ceremony started.Heer was taken upstairs so the haldi could be applied on Prem who had changed into white kurta and pajama.After the hladi being applied on Prem,he was taken away.Heer came down in a white slawar/kameez,eveyrbody came to apply haldi on

heer.When the haldi ceremony ended, everybody left.Heer went up her room.she took a shower and came outside in her PJs and then someone knocked on her door.She opened the door and was shocked to see the person......

well here it is and hope you enjoyed it!!!Do Comment!!!! ppl i need to knowwhat u think!!!!

Edited by Penzee2007 - 16 years ago