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amana

@AmanaR

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Posted: 16 years ago

#981

hhiiiiiiiiiiii rehana

omg the last shot???\

im gonna miss reading it

always loved ur updates!!!

preets parents are tooo funny...lol

oooooooo i like prem the insane lover

and i totally loved the line "...Can I ever expect a look from you, which doesn't imply that 'you are so in trouble' ??..."

im still laughing

anyways i totally loved ur ff

i kno i havnt commented oflate...... so im sorry

but its really one of the most well wriiten ffs ive read

its truly be amazing reading every shot

ur twists and turns were really awesome

it had me totally hooked to it

im really gonna miss reading it

its been one of my fav ff.....

great job and really hope to read more ffs by you

love

Amana

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#982

Rehana dear....

its been a while I havnt commented here...Me was very less active this month....I just caught up with all your updates that I had missed....simply mind-blowing....literally mean that my mind was blown away by your creativity....your style of writing is what I love the most....you take care of every minute thing while writing down your imagination...the actions, postures ,emotions and thoughts of the characters...you write it down in the best way....hats off to your work....

I am happy I got to catch up with your FF till the last shot...would have missed it if you had planned to end it next month or so...

The last shot was really a long one....and loved the way you have mentioned about every character's life in that one shot , along with ample romantic scenes between Prem & Heer....

Btw, was Atul there in your FF...I dont remember reading about him ....Is he Preet's brother ?

Luv

Angie

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#983

👏 Thank you soooo much for spending your precious time writing this amazing FF- I cannot praise you enough on coming up with such an interesting, gripping, and lovely story- each shot of yours had kept me desperate to read the next shot, and I am sad that it is coming to an end!! I was beginning to like your FF more than the show, lol!! This last shot was superb as usual, love the Prem-Heer beautiful moments- you desribed their passion and love for one another so well!! Pratham is so adorable, as usual, I'm gonna miss him a lot!! aaawwwwh, Preet and Ashlesha had a little baby girl- that was so sweet!! When Heer was knitting the sweater for their baby, I seriously thought she was pregnant, like Prem did! But wow, that gesture from her was lovely!! Prem is soooo naughty- 😳😳😳 I am gonna miss his flirting aswell!! You are amazingly talented, and truly deserve this praise that you are getting!! Good luck Rehana di, will you be thinking of writing another FF, as you are a great writer!! I don't think I will be able to forget this story- it's marvellous and I know I will be reading it numerous times!! Take Care, Love Zahra 😉 xx

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ruexangel

@ruexangel

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#984

Aww i read ur last updates & now this last one, bt didnt get chance to comment untill now...it was rlly beautiful & romantic & also entertaining👏 the way premeer & rest of d couples tease each other. Lol & prems naughty teasing & when Heer was knitting lol, thought she was preg 2. I lovd pratham & im imagining ash-preets angel is gonna b wif him wen older lol. I rlly loveddd reading ur ff😳😳, i cnt belive its ended 😭😭. I rlly hope you right more, ive read both ffs uve written & their rlly v. gddd,👏👏👏 i wuld luv 2 read more from u.

Thanks sooo much for spendin ur tym to write this awsome ff 😳

Wuld luv to read more ff from u, if u write. 😳

t.c rehana d.

~Rue 😳

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ashpush

@ashpush

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#985

omg di!!...that is the last part??😭..

but im atleast glad to catch it before i go....😃

That was superb! fabtastic! marvelous!👏...and it was sooooooooooooo romantic☺️☺️☺️ sigh!..prem is tooooo romantic n naughty....n everything was written beautifully as always..loved each n every line...needless to say, it was one of the best shots of urs.....n i cant believe that u dint edit,...it was perfect,......And Ash-Preet also have a new member now.........aww, i will miss pratham..he is soooo sweet..........n he willl get one more person to boss around during his next b'day😳...

Altogether,ti was too good...And that was the perfect ending to a perfect ff..

Take care di...dont know wen i ll see u again...

Bye..I enjoyed reading ur ff

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sshekar

@sshekar

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#986

Hi Rehana! I am here as promised...
I read your FF in one go...brilliant...absolutely brilliant....👏 and lots of 🤗
My favorite was Pratham...move over Prem...I mean how adorable is he!!! Awww...Can I have him forever, please....😃??
I loved the emotional aspects that you created between all the characters....it was beautifully portrayed! I loved Preet and Ash's protectiveness for Prem, when he was missing Heer...
Heer's initial fear for her son and her stiffness towards Prem...how he finally manages to overcome all that...awesome!!
You have done a great job...kudos!! I was sad to see it end, but it was very well done...left a good feeling in my heart, you know the kind that says love wins over all the time...? that kind...thank you for the beautiful story!! 😊

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#987

*sigh* All good things come to an end!

You surpassed your self didi...so well, wonderfully, beautifully, fantastically, excellently written! Left me yearning for more but I guess I'll have to make do with reading it over and over again!😆

The Prem and Heer scenes☺️☺️☺️My eyes were as wide and saucers while i was reading their scenes, I hope you'll forgive me for only commenting on them...right now nouthign else is registering.☺️

Their love threw this ff was just shown in such an amzing light, how it started with passion, hate, frusterastion, struggles, lingering hope, new-found love, sorrow, undertanding and then finally happiness! I think your best defined character was with no doubt Pratham...what a sweet, naughty lil boy, his thoughts on the situation were always interesting!!

Thanks for entertaining us with such an amazing ff and can't wait for you to pop around with another one!

Shabz

P.S. Did I mention I loved what the ending implies? ☺️☺️

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lala

@Harshitipremeer

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#988

Hey wonderful and different ff yaar👏👏👏Prem a play boy😆n than one nigh stand🤢🤢🤢Anyways later it was very nice😃eww that one small misundersnd destroy two ppls life😭Y the hell prem need to go to balcony to take freash ais freash air keh waje seh do saal barbad ho gaya😭😭😭This misunderstanding is😭😭😭Anyways Pratham is innocent,cute,entertaining,protective for her mummy.good boy and alot😆😆😆Same like our Prem😳ewww later prem finally find his wife and son😃😃😃Heer shouted at the poor door that line was so funny for me😆later they get together😳So happy and the ending was very romentic😛Loved it i also hope u publish it😭Plz yaar this is the first ff which i find so different and interesting😛

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Magpie

@Magpie

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#989

Hi dear,
I used to be a regular reader of your first FF "Everlasting love"..It still is one of my favorites.....I loved your writing style.

I always wanted to read "Blackmail" as well but couldn't do so due to some or the other reason unfortunately. But I just started reading it...it's wonderful...Will read the whole thing and post my comments either here or through PM.

Love
Meera.

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Rinki

@~Rinki~

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#990

ah didz, finally commenting on the last five or six prts 😆 srry i just finally caught up on everything i missed today, the comment mite be short but know that i loved this fic like crazy 😳

am so happy to know that mittal and prem are okay, rlly that was such a heart touching healing process, and the love btwn heer and prem becoming more and more noticible and prath is of course like always an complete angel..love him! ah neev and veera were so cute, in just a day he fell for her and the scenes with neev, prem and heer were too funny! loved them! ah mr. gupta and his mrs are sooooooo adorable! ah their love and the playful fights btwn them are just too sweet, can totally see them in prem and his antics...haii they had a girl! shabzie must be going crazy with happiness! she rlly wanted this na, so what is the name of this angel? hm i can totally see her and prath growing up to fall in love!

ahh the whole ff went by so quickly, its as if we barely started it yesterday and now its already done! am gnna miss this so much, dnt wnt the cute scenes of premeer to end, the sweet things my prath does...ahh loved it!

love always

Rinkuu

ps- srry for short comment! 😳

Edited by ~Rinki~ - 16 years ago

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