FF: Blackmail - COMPILED on Page 133 - Page 20

Originally posted by: shabo24

Ahhh damn it I'm third.....!

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So di how'z university? I know i haven't asked you yet and I feel bad! *kicks herself* Loads of work?😉

ouch!!!.....did it hurt??🤣🤣.......awww uni is not that bad.....thanks for asking shona😊

Getting to the part...*rubs hands together* WOWWWWW! LOLZ that beginning was sooo good, it reminded me of me and my friends when we see a hot guy and we tease each other about him, see hwho's name his name looks the best with etc. 🤣 Haila, Heer glowing already.....*dances* I tollld you soo Heeeeer! Listen to you nanad.....!😳

seeeeee!!!........that's how i feel when prem doesn't listen to me 😳😆

Prem: The hot and the handsome☺️

ehm ehm ehm **looking away**.......i-m-a-good-girl😛

Heer: The sweet and the sexy

yaar yesterday's blue saree, I just loved her........even my mamu was like, 'see she is looking stunning in that simple get-up........she often shud wear saree'😃........she indeed looked sexy man😍😍😍

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I can not WAIT to see how Heer handles Prem and his whole "I'm-the-best" attitude. Prem hun, Heer is coming to show you some REAL girl power!🥳Prepare yourself.....

hehehhehe😆😆

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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THAT PREMEER SCENE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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No words needed, haila, the describtions! I can just imagine Prem leaning back in his chari, lazily, a coupe buttons undone, twirling around a parerweight with his loooong and lean hands.....☺️

🤣............**fanning myself with my hand**.......ok! back to my 'i-m-a-good-girl' look😳😳😳

HAHA PREM!!! Heer told you OFF! I was laughing my head off, a shock aint is, for a ego filled man?

awwww glad you liked it hon......means a lot to me.........i thot i didn't meet my own expectation.......but the sweet encouragement from you guys always make me feel better.......😊

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MG I AM HOOKED! ME WANT TO KNOW WHAT PREM DOES NOW!*stamps oot* NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW! woahhhh one night stand? Haila di.....keep this G rated....! Not that I'm complaining☺️ but there are younger kids on this forum as well!

lol.......thanks for the warning hon.......as i already mentioned before that most of my readers are kids, so I always write stuffs keeping that in mind😉......so don't worry abt it love**muah**......

Update soooon!!!

inshallah by tonite or tomorrow😉

Shabz

Originally posted by: tania86

oh my god!!......thank you so much for the optimistic feedback di.......you have no idea how hard it was for me to post this part as I wasn't sure whether I was able to express my ideas in the right form with the right words or not.........but your wonderful encourage did give a sigh of relief.......😃😃.....I LOVE YOU DIII🤗........honestly, I was too depressed to write the next part as somehow I was not satisfied with this part.......but now I will surely continue with next part and post it by tomorrow or may be TONIGHT😉.....once again love you for the constant support di🤗

luv

rehana

Originally posted by: angel82

You are doing a great job and I think hyou have really expressed your ideas well...You are very imaginative and you write them well too....honestly saying....I was reading this part and in the first read itselfI could imagine the scenes soooooooo clearly, Veera and Heer's conversation, Heer in Prem's room, Prem's way of sitting and Prem-Heer conversation everything...That is becoz it was soo clearly written...And I must say

the words you have used explains or expresses your ideas well without elaborating too much...So have confidence and do continue writing like this....

And a big 🤗 to you tooo...

Luv

Angie