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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

ah shabzie...meri mustache ko monday se bilkul nafrat hai!! rehana di- chi chi 🤣

hawwww i was cursing that woman for making me go through hell........first it was additi but now it's abt my cutie pie beta.....😭.....sach mein meri haye lagegi ussko if she even bothers to think of killing prem😭......
kimz- vikki is a good boy huh? 😆 aah looks like shabz is gnna make him...a bad-boy! 🤣🤣

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: farzana98

hawwww i was cursing that woman for making me go through hell........first it was additi but now it's abt my cutie pie beta.....😭.....sach mein meri haye lagegi ussko if she even bothers to think of killing prem😭......
aww didz it is fine...i was surprised cuz i never saw u like that 🤣 ah if she has a brain then she wnt even dare to think abt killin ur son, 😉 cuz then this show is going down the drain 🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome fanfic.All the parts were amazing.Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shareen

Awesome fanfic.All the parts were amazing.Looking forward to the next part.

thanks hon😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Shot # 6

"wooow!!! last night I thought today will be my farewell from this office...." expressing her fear, Veera settled down herself on her comfy seat while keeping the hot coffee on the table...... "why??...." asked a confused Heer, who took the last sip of her black tea....."the way he looked at me as if I was the ONLY one responsible for that situation......" observing her friend's surprised face, she admitted, "alright alright, I admit I was the one who literally dragged you for a walk but I didn't invite those psychoes to bug us....did I??.....".......giggling at Veera, she started to flip through the papers in the file........"Oh God!!! I still can't imagine what would have had happened if he didn't appear at the right time......I think I would have been cursing my mouth for the rest of my life for always opening it at the wrong moment.....damn it!!"......after taking a sip from her coffee, she coyly continued, "..But what an entry he made yaar!!!!.......perfect entry!!!....hayeeee!!" confessing her approbation, she shared a giggle with her friend........noticing Veera's excitement, Heer decided to tease her, still keeping her gaze on the papers, ".....aahaa!!!!....had a crush on him??....."......stunned by her sudden inquiry, Veera replied "honey, I LOVE MYSELF......so kick that thought outta your mind..." resting her case, Veera took a sip of her coffee...
"well!! I would say, he is the perfect one.......for YOU" making Heer instantly look at her with a raised eyebrow......ignoring her colleague's look, she continued, "Prem and Heer.......wow!!!".......unaware of her own blushed countenance she shushed her friend "...Shut up!!!!........what made you think that I don't love myself??!!!"......observing the sudden glow on her face, Veera stated, " oh my goodness!!!.......look at your face Heer...."......hearing Veera's sudden scream, she touched her cheeks while confusedly staring at her friend......" I can already see a fresh glow on it......ohhoo!!!.....as if his 'name' with 'yours' did the magic......kyun??!!" winking at her, she teased back........rolling her eyes, she decided to quit the game, "....fine my bad......I take my words back.......happy......now stop it!!!".......seeing her cute face, Veera laughed, "awww....apology accepted.......but think about it, Prem the hot and handsome with Heer the sweet and sexy"......noticing her colleague's raised eyebrows at her sudden judgement, she quickly justified herself, " arre I was just kidding yaar......aur waise bhi at least I didn't call you a dumb.." grinning at her, both girls broke into a laugh......
Pretending to be thinking, Veera again started "..ok...I know you two are completely different from each other......but have you ever heard of the phrase, 'opposite attracts'??......who knows one day you two might end up toge...." cutting her off, Heer got up from the seat, ".....I have better things to do hon....good luck with your matchmaking......"......"but....I was just...." Veera made a face as she again got interrupted by Heer....".....sorry dear.......see yaa...." smiling at her dear friend, she left the cabin....
"May I come in Sir?", asked Heer before entering the room......."here it is..." handling a file to her boss, she stood there, waiting for the file to take back with her........"yes! the branch number is 99460-2523......I want an immediate result of this issue.....make it fast!!!!......thanks" finishing his conversation on the phone, Prem handed back the file to his new employee........'should I say that?....no!!...what if he gets me wrong?' debating within herself, she decided to leave for her cabin, when she heard his concerned voice, "what is it?", noticing her little activities of uneasiness as she was looking everywhere but him, he couldn't resist himself from asking.......'Oh God! did he just read my mind?' surprised at the sudden inquiry, she mumbled for words, "umm....huh....I mean....yeah..."....trying to keep her concentration steady, she finally uttered the word, "thanks!!!"......seeing his confused face, she quietly expressed her gratitute while keeping her gaze down, " I meant to say....I mean, I wanted to thank you for last night....." satisfied with her confession, she looked up at him with an admirable smile.....
Leaning back in the leather chair to place the right elbow on the armrest with twisted index and middle fingers in his lips while left hand was swirling the paperweight on the table, he closely observed Heer.......why is she being so sweet??......is she acting??......who knows??......first will apologize, next will attempt to impress him, then that same shit*y 'love' topic.....and at the end will make her cheap way to get back at him......reason???.....simple........his MONEY!!!!!.......that's all, it matters to this kinda girls........always after their wealthy Boss......just like Sanjana......how sweetly she tried to trap him.......however, at the last moment, he did give a dose of her own medicine......since then he always kept himself alert from such 'sweet' girls......
But why does she seem different to him??.....what is so special about her that compels him to think inversely about her.....is that her attractive and innocent eyes or her simplicity???.......what if she deliberately put on that mask of simplicity in order to get whatever she wants??......unable to take his silent observation, she cleared her throat, assuming that her boss might have missed her point...... "Thank you Sir!!" she repeated with a half smile......still staring at her, he pursued, "anything else??!!......lets say I am impressed by your apology....so.....n....."......."excuse me si.....?!!" taken aback by his response Heer confusedly stared at her boss......"lemme finish!!!........so!!!.....now you don't have to pretend to be in love with me.....then yo."......unable to take anymore of his nonsense, she interrupted, "Excuse me, Sir!!.......first of all, I have no idea, how and where this conversation is heading to......secondly, I don't think you deserve my appreciation, so I take my words back.......and last but not the least, love could be a priceless junk for such unfortunate people like you but for me, love is life" throwing a revolted look towards him, she decided to leave the place.....
Impressed yet surprised at her guts, he casually got up from his comfortable chair........" huh!!!......girls like you can do anything for money......so cut this bulls*** okay!!!......." sarcastically answered back whilst making a drink for himself......."......people like you can give importance to nothing else except money........but to me, my self-respect is very precious...." she snapped back.......pissed at the common blo*dy lecture, he bursted out while pointing at her, "Oh really!!!.......I will see how long you can keep that 'self-respectism' in yourself......I have heard of this same crap before......but when time comes, you all show your true colors......"....then changing his expression to bring a smirk on his face, he stated, "at the end of the day, you don't even give a damn to your so-called self-respect....".......taking a gulp of the brand alcohol, he continued, ".......but to enjoy a glimpse of this luxurious life, you proudly prefer to be a one night stand "......
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Edited by tania86 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
FIRST!

*edited*

Okay first of all, I'm really sorry for editing like a day later, but yesterday was just.. bleh.. for me. But I'm back now, so get ready, get set, GOOOO!!

I can just see Veera talking rapidly infront of Heer, except i see her chewing on some doritos. Hmmmmmmmm... I wonder who she reminds me of? 🤔 Oooh and GIMME HER COFFEE! I need coffee, i'm puposely not eating a lot to make my mom worried... muahahahah! I love attention... hehe..

Veera and Heer's convo was SO cute, there such cute friends. Ugh thanks alot rehana di, you've finally got me to start liking Veera... *sigh* I was determined to not like her, EVER... but thanks to your awesome writing, I'm liking her.. (And yea, that was a compliment) Okay wait, lemme take that back, I think i'm starting to LOVE her! I mean her attitude, its so ermm... attitude-ish, but i'm loving it. Especially when she said 'I love myself'. I'm supposed to hate her when she says that, but I loved it!!! And aahhh! Heer's words back-fire on her, and SHE BLUSHES! So somewhere, where she doesn't know, she likes him too. How wonderful? 😃😃

Loved how Veer described the pair. Opposites Attract. Hot and Handsome, Sweet and Sexy. There made for eachother. 😍 You will continue writing FF's after hc leaves, write? Please, pretty please? *goes on knee's and begs*... You'll be like one of the reason's i'll hang on to this forum. 😳

Anyways getting to the part, I'm not going to hate Prem. I'm going to feel bad for both of them instead. First of all Prem got set up by a girl, Sanjana! 😲 Poor Prem, fell for it. I can understand what he's going through, ummm sort of, i've never been through it but seen it going through someone... Did Prem love her a lot? If he did, then awwwwww... and if he didn't then, to sanjana: Suckaaaaaaaa!!... 😆😆

Now feeling bad for Heer, have to feel bad for them. Poor girl has to listen to so much from her boss, who doesn't even know her. I mean Prem's doing like something worse than judging a book by its cover. He's taking the cover and calling it fake... But i guess he has a good reason, seeing so many fakes, how can he trust her? I loved how Heer stood up for herself, and didn't let her character be tainted like that. But ufff.. Prem! Can't he give up? If see's something in her eyes... then why go after it? Sure everything shiny isn't a diamond, but you can't not call it a diamond till you see it? Right?

I hope Heer comes up with something better. Now I have to go read the next part and see what happen's. Ahhh SO EXCITED!

kimz
Edited by kimmu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks dear for the update...I was expecting it tomorrow....
Loved it....Loved the way Veera was teasing heer and the way she unknowingly blushed...
She surely was attracted to him...
But Prem had to spoil it, thinking her to be like one of ''those'' girls....But cant blame him...he must have seen only such girls...Loved the way Heer answered him back....I'm really enjoying your FF...Its soooooo different and love the way the story is progressing...
Oh eagery waiting for the next part,where she gives answer to the one night stand part...and the self respect thing...
Angie
Edited by angel82 - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
Ahhh damn it I'm third.....!

*edited*

So di how'z university? I know i haven't asked you yet and I feel bad! *kicks herself* Loads of work?😉

Getting to the part...*rubs hands together* WOWWWWW! LOLZ that beginning was sooo good, it reminded me of me and my friends when we see a hot guy and we tease each other about him, see hwho's name his name looks the best with etc. 🤣 Haila, Heer glowing already.....*dances* I tollld you soo Heeeeer! Listen to you nanad.....!😳

Prem: The hot and the handsome☺️
Heer: The sweet and the sexy

I can not WAIT to see how Heer handles Prem and his whole "I'm-the-best" attitude. Prem hun, Heer is coming to show you some REAL girl power!🥳Prepare yourself.....

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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THAT PREMEER SCENE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
☺️

No words needed, haila, the describtions! I can just imagine Prem leaning back in his chari, lazily, a coupe buttons undone, twirling around a parerweight with his loooong and lean hands.....☺️

🤣
HAHA PREM!!! Heer told you OFF! I was laughing my head off, a shock aint is, for a ego filled man?

😲
MG I AM HOOKED! ME WANT TO KNOW WHAT PREM DOES NOW!*stamps oot* NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW! woahhhh one night stand? Haila di.....keep this G rated....! Not that I'm complaining☺️ but there are younger kids on this forum as well!

Update soooon!!!

Shabz
Edited by shabo24 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

wow loved it!

its so different from othe FF's. lyked Veeras & Heers convo. & heers guts! & prem leaning back on his chair & thinkn, both against each other..(hope premeer scenes come soon 2) .& am rlly lkin forward 2 the next part, brilliant
Edited by ruexangel - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: angel82

thanks dear for the update...I was expecting it tomorrow....
Loved it....Loved the way Veera was teasing heer and the way she unknowingly blushed...
She surely was attracted to him...
But Prem had to spoil it, thinking her to be like one of ''those'' girls....But cant blame him...he must have seen only such girls...Loved the way Heer answered him back....I'm really enjoying your FF...Its soooooo different and love the way the story is progressing...
Oh eagery waiting for the next part,where she gives answer to the one night stand part...and the self respect thing...
Angie

oh my god!!......thank you so much for the optimistic feedback di.......you have no idea how hard it was for me to post this part as I wasn't sure whether I was able to express my ideas in the right form with the right words or not.........but your wonderful encourage did give a sigh of relief.......😃😃.....I LOVE YOU DIII🤗........honestly, I was too depressed to write the next part as somehow I was not satisfied with this part.......but now I will surely continue with next part and post it by tomorrow or may be TONIGHT😉.....once again love you for the constant support di🤗
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