Golden Moments pt7(b) pg22 updt Aug 1st, 2010

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys, i jus randomly got an idea of an FF. it will b held when heer left prems house for the station. after prems father found out that she was his best friends daughter. jus imagine if Heer actually left, what wud b different. so m gonna cont. plzzz R&R.

Prologue-pg 1
Part 1 - pg 2
Part 2 - page 3
part 3- page 6
part 4 - page 10
Part 5- page 14
Part 6- page 17
Part 7(a)- page 19
Part 7(b) - page 22

Golden Moments

Prologue:
As all the thoughts ran through her mind of her and prem, her clerk entered her cabin and said, "madam, its time for u to leave, everyone is gone already and your uncle wants u to meet your fiance. he is waiting for u downstairs". she smiled weakly at the old clerk. Then she got up and made her way downstairs. there she saw meher with Ash and Preet and they were shocked to see her. An old man of the 60 came forward and introduced her, "she is shruti sharma, my neice and the owner of this beautiful hotel". They all were shocked to see Heer in front of her, but what shocked them the most was how can 2 ppl look so muck alike if she is Shruti.
ok, ppl plzz R&R, then i will cont. if u guys want alright.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wat a superb prologue...... 👏
cont it soon........this sounds nice.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice prologue
do continue😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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liked it .....continue wanna seee more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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glad u ppl liked my FF, for those who dont no what epi. i was talkin about here it is: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zvcS5ahAdso

Anywayz, i m gonna continue now:
Golden Moments
PART 1:
Heer wiped her tears as she heard the roar of the train engine in speed. She felt lonely and scared. she didn't know where she was going to go, for now she will just go to Amritsar. There she will buy a small apartment with the money she had from working in the hotel that Prem owned. Then she will find a job and work there until she can find her uncle, her mom's mu bole bhai (rakhi brother).
When her parents died, she decided to leave all the memories there and search for her uncle but for the time being, she decided to live with her chachi since they had nowhere to go. she had this goal set in mind until she met Prem and his family. They were such a loving family, so pure and nice; then what made them hate Heer and her family. Did they really just wanted money. Why does my heart keep on telling me that they don't hate us? She sighed.
She wanted to tell Meher about this but Meher wanted to be a lawyer and for that she needed money for studies so she decided to get a job. She didn't really expect that she will fall in love so easily after going through so much. There were times when she wanted to tell Meher about her uncle but she couldn't after seeing that she is so happy with Prem's family. They treated her like there own daughter but then, they didn't know that they were Balraj's daughter. And now he does........what will he do with Meher......Oh God, why did I leave Meher behind!!!! but wait Prem is there so I don't need to worry about it that much...Heer sighed in relieve.
She went back to her memories when she first met prem, and how she was just looking at him like he was some beautiful artifact under the moonlight. she remembered all her time she spent with prem. She was actually planning to leave Prem on the day of the Storm but instead she flew and fell in the river, but Prem saved her. Just like an angel, i thought i was in heaven when i opened my eyes, i even acted like i didn't know him so when i leave him, it wont hurt so much. Every single time i acted like I don't know him, it pained me more than it pained him. But now i m alone again with noone but myself to take care of me. No Prem to come to my rescue like a knight in shiny armor. We were always alone after bauji's death then why do I fell so lonely, Oh God why me, what did I do to deserve this? Heer choked back the tears that she was trying to hold as the train pulled back at amritsar train station.
😃OK u guys so here is the first part plzzz, do R&R and tell me how u feel about this. the start was kind of boring but it will get better especially when there will be cute scenes between PREMEER. and they wont be long cuz there will be a leap, so guys tell me how my attempt was.😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Seebz

wat a superb prologue...... 👏

cont it soon........this sounds nice.......

thanks a lot, hope u liked the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

that souns awesome!!

continue soon

thnx i jus got the random idea, hope u like next as well
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

nice intersting
do cont soon

Thanx for replying. i posted the 1st part, hope u liked it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: act13

very nice prologue

do continue😉

Thanks a bunch jaan, u always reply to my FF, well next part is up hope u like it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonlightgurl

ohhhh v.interesting!!!!!

cont ssoooonnn!!!!

Glad u liked it, hope the 1st part is worth your time
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