Golden Moments pt7(b) pg22 updt Aug 1st, 2010 - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
Soooooo sry tht I am updating after such a long time...actualy my studies really hung me up and truthfully m running out of inspiration and ideas for the fic (so I would really appreciate if any1 can give any ideas!)...well anyways....actually this is what I came up with soo far so hope u guys enjoy it😃
Golden Moments

Part 7(b)
Heer gasped silently in horror. A whisper escaped her dry lipa, "Prem...!" It seemed more of an assuring statement than disbelief. She gulped down the memories that were creeping up and clouding her brain. Slowly, closing her silvery shaded eye lids in an attempt to subdue her nervousness, she tool a deep breath as if to wake herself up for the hallucination she has created over these vast years. She mentallu shook herself and opened her eyes slowly and painfully, as if wanting to escape from the bitter reality that is presented in front of her.
While Heer was in a state of predicament, Prem tried to sucumb himself to the situation presented right in front of his very eyes. Were his playing tricks on him? The girl whom he thought, No...expected to be dead just like everyone else, was standing at the center of the hall dressed extravagantly in a simple attire, looking at him with an obviously aghast expression on her face. Was this who he thought this was ? Was this Heer? He took a step forward, and felt the chilling breeze sending chills down his spinal chords. His brain waves suddenly becoming active as if his soul revived again. The musical chords within his body suddenly started vibrating and he felt his dulled eyes sparkling with newfound hope and determination. He took another step towards her, his lipa curling into a pleasant smile that was invisible and unknown for years. He whispered, "Heer..." His voice so low that it was inaudible even to the prodigy lip reader or the nearest person to him present at the party.
Heer looked at Prem, his intense gaze penetrating hers. She was brought back to the day she first met Prem. It was a day when she defied her aunt and went against her orders just to get her mother's ring back from Prem's room. That was the first time when she saw Prem so closely and clearly. It was the day when shw saw his fire-lightened face from the light of his lighter. She felt the same nervousness, the same anxiety, and the same intensity as today. She felt as if she was caught red-handed while doing a crime just like she felt on their first eye-to-eye meeting. Her heart began pounding in her ears, and she felt her tiny hands perspiring from strange anxiuosness of wanting to get out of the party.
Some one shook her from the side and Heer turned around to find Mukti saying something that Heer was not able to conceive due to the intensity that was penetrating her, making her side feel bare. She gulped the lump down her throat. Someone taped her from behind and tuned to see her Uncle smiling widely and gladly at her. She felt at ease, her body relaxing. Wait! Why was it relaxed? She did not seem to feel the shivers anymore. Her heart sped again. She slowly turned towards the main entrance so she can reunite her eye-contact with her Prem but.....Prem was gone! A panic rose within her. She looked around, here & there, to make sure she did not miss him anywhere. She halted her search as she felt someone calling her. "Shruti Beta, tum theek to ho?" She smiled weakly to the innocent question that her uncle put up. Still in daze, she closed her eyes. Her mind was still playing tricks on her. This was a very common occurence. She would always feel that he is there at the most unexpected times, and this was very logical considering this was supposed to be a very important day for any bride-to-be....But this was a different sensation from all. This was not the remorse and sadness she felt from parting with him, but a newfound freshness from seeing him again, of loving him all over again from scratch. This seemed real. It was not hallucination, it was a real sensation she felt from him. He was real!
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Thanks all for the wonderful reviews and replies...I am soo sorry again for the late update...I will soon update with the rest bit of this part but right now...I have to go somewhere so this will be it...but please do read and review becuase your replies make me want to continue and complete this fanfic...becuase I am known as a person who leaves off in the middle but for this fanfic...keep your replies coming since they are much appreciate....lastly...Enjoy!😃
Ciao
Jiya
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww.....luved the update...ur words were really vivid...i still feel goosebumps..lol...but plzzz cont. soon n I mean sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey jiya once again Amazing update👏
So heer feel he is there for real hopefully they meet soon
Please update soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
OK....sooo sry I dint reply soon....but WOW....ut part was awesum...I was speechless...please cont. soon n this time plz make them meet, I cant wait any longer!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
YUH...man when are you gonna continue...you continued the OS as you promised....so continue this one tooooooooooooooo as soon as you can...i am waitng!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

When are you updating sweetyy......ppppppllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssseeeeeeeee update sooonn!

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Posted: 14 years ago
please add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for it yaar...when are you gonna continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi act12

I stumbled on to this FF yesterday
wow nice take on what might have happened when Heer left Junejas, after the storm.

Too bad the separation is really long.
Interesting scenes and also loved Preet, Meher and Heer's uncle.

It'd be nice to find out if Prem meets Heer soon.

Thanks for the lovely FF.
Keep it up.👍🏼

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