FF:LOVE STORY PREMEER compiled on pg102 (bye aLL) - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
heyyy, your ff is greeatt!
so happy that premeer are getting marrieedd
aha, it was a very sweet update
please update again ssoon!! 😊
and thanks for the PM.
- Deena
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
wow... great job...
i enjoyed reading ur FF... more romance ... lol...
n i hope what you said does happen in the epic...
keep writing , n plz do update me, hate to miss out on it...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

MY dear friends sorry to be mean last time I my self felt that I wrote to be cont……….

On a very … .moment. Sorry for that at that time nothing was coming in my mind. Right

Now I am feeling I may not let you guys down .I am very nervous hope you all like my love story part 4 if not do let me know so I do end the story next time...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
PART 4
PREM turn around walk slowly towards HEER. HEER standing near the dressing table stool as he came closer to her she sat down on the stool. PREM look at her with a smile and sat on the dressing table staring at her.

PREM: be quick

HEER: nervous PREM aap naraaz to nahi hoga.

PREM: why? Looking in her eyes

HEER: I can not get ready if you sit like this and we will be late.

PREM: with a smile I am just looking at you I will not going to eat you up I am here to help you. (PASS HER PERFUM)

HEER: with a shy smile OK

PREM started passing her jewellery she started wear that he fix hermaang tika fore head

(Plz if some one has that picture plz send me he did that before)liana did that for me

HEER: OH! I forgot the bangles.

PREM: CAN I?( took all the bangles from her hand and started to put them in her hand holding both hands HEER TRUN to wards him........

PREET

PREET driving the car MAA DJ did not created any scene at home I could not see BHAI face so I said that plz don?t tell BAUJI he will scold me reach home

MOM: PREET you are very naughty .What you will say to yours to BAUJI

PREET: I will say I came here to take MEHAR and DIDI ok.

They enter the house DT standing.

DJ: PREET where are you coming from. BAHABI you too with him ASH

(With a surprise) where are you all coming from?

PREET: Chachi Ash necklace was broken and as it is not good sign so we all

Went to repair it Then ASH said I want to eat PANI PURI so we had it from

Roadside you know her condition I have to fulfill her each and ever wish after

All I am you SON IN LAW.

ASH playing with her duppata went in with MOM

DJ: They think I am crazy .they don?t know who I am PREET I will sort you out.

PREET coming out with DIDI, MEHER and her kids.

PREET: DJ did you say some thing to me

DJ: No (how can he hear me) where are you going

PREET: to get few new clothes for MEHER.

DJ: OH MY GOD What he is up to?

PREET turn around.

PREET: CHACHI did you said some thing?

DIDI: MEHER you sit with PREETI will sit with my kids.

MEHER: DIDI

MEHER sat in PREET who was coming open her door again and put her

duppata which was out of the door put in MEHER was shocked for a moment he went to the driving seat and start driving at a traffic signal he stopped and a kid with flowers can on PREET Side

KID bhai take flowers for your lovely wife.

PREET confused for the first time looked in the back view mirror to DIDI trying to figure

Out did she listen gave him money and put the flowers on the dashboard in front of MEHER....

PREM N HEER
PREM: HEER now never every leave me. Why you did not tell me that you are BAUJI

Dearest friend daughter my HEER. Promise me that you will not hide any thing for me

And will share all your sorrow with me we will be best friends1st then husband and

Wife. PROMISE

HEER with a smile PREM quickly embraced her giving her no time.

TO BE CONT.....

Edited by pisces26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

That was such a great part, loved the end!

?xXx?

cont. soon!
Sunayna

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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
it was a great part di...and a very happy ending...luved everything..
cont soon..
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
wow di...another nice part... wow he got flowers for meher...wow...lots of wows in this part.😳..and yes the scene in which prem sat and helped heer to get ready.. i imagining it all... rele very nice even i imagined heer in a bridal dress...wow....gud work di....plzzzzzzzzz cont soooooooooooooooooooooooooooon.....

wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#48

lovely part.......plz do continue sooon.......

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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
ya that was gr8 part superb hope to see the next soon dear dont stop do cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
Ooh u've turned Prem more Romantic...no complains , i'm loving it
waiting .......
Edited by Ron16 - 17 years ago

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