FF:LOVE STORY PREMEER compiled on pg102 (bye aLL) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Ron16

i like the Premeer scene.. i can just picture it ..lol...

one complain, very little premeer scene... so unfair...
waiting for ur next...

oh n Djs still crazy

My dear friends watching yesterday episode i felt so sick migraine. I gather my courage and wrote this part .i am sorry in advance if I hurt any one feelings i like your appreciation .but plz tell me my faults too. plz that will help me in future IF any resemblance with any story writer in this forum I am sorry .this all is my fantasy world.😳😳😳

One kid: oh I broke the promise MAMA said not to tell anyone.

DJ: what your MAMA said

Same kid: MAMA said when we went with PREET MAMOO to bring PREM MAMOO.

BAUJI: DJ why you are standing here you will not give groom n bride your blessing.

DJ: why not

BAUJI: first see her face. (DJ IN SHOCKED abt to fall but managed her self)

(I will sort her out later my dear readers. I will not let her go like that but right now I am not in a mood to do that as 6 Aug epi made me sick)

GAYTIR: take HEER to PREM bedroom and let them rest both of my children had gone

threw a great trauma's. As it was the 7 day of your kasam so I made them get married all the rasam we will have tomorrow .I have to sort DJ.

HEER sitting on PREM bed suddenly walked towards the window she hear his footsteps entering the room and the door and closing the door.he walks slowly towards the bed, the lights dim , the room lighten up by candles and the light of the shinning moon entering its way from the terrace door. Prem holds on to her shoulders and slowly turns her around, and finds a tearing heer.... He wipes away her tear and kissed her holds her close

PREM holding her tight let her cry as he knew she must be missing her parents and all that happen to them made PREM tired too. After few min HEER realized what she did crying in PREM arms. Now she tried to free herself but PREM did not let her DO that

PREM (in naughty mood over come his own emotion) Why HEER you Ur self came in my arms why should I let you free he he kissed her again

HEER: plz PREM someone will come and see us

PREM: My dear no one can come here this is OUR ROOM. ONLY can see us.

HEER: plz

PREM hmmm you made me wait for such a long time.

HEER: ouch

PREM: what happened he suddenly let her free.

HEER: you were standing on my feet PREM for the last 10 min

PREM: shocked really wait a min let you sit here I will turn on the light When he turn around HEER vanished. PREM with a smile went to his cupboard and take out some thing turn off the light and went out on terrace.

HEER sitting with on the couch think what will happen to her now confused. PREM walk to her bent down on her knee

HEER why you are sitting here plz don't sit there.

PREM: shhhh. Open the box taken out her both payal about to hold her feet she withdraw under the couch.

HEER: plz PREM

PREM: pull her feet out put the PAYAL. Don't dare take that off I love there voice I feel it in my heart. Where ever you will go I will fellow you MY DEAR HEER now you can not run away from me.

HEER plz PREM don't sit there

PREM ok on one shart

HEER yes I will full fill your shart

PREM: think before you make a promise.

HEER: I did think. You go ahead.

PREM first go and change come back in 5 min you look nice in these kind of clothes. But I like you more when you are simple. You must be tired but only 5 min.

HEER: I will. She ran in with PAYAL melodious sound PREM smiled look at sky with in few min she was backing PREM lying down on couch.

PREM: you kept your promise (he hold her hand and made her sit next to him). Heer can you plz do what you did last night I am so tired I can not tell you ( HEER started putting her fingers in his hairs)

HEER why did you told me before worried

PREM: ok I will tell you next time with a smile closed his eye and put his head in her lap .holding her tight so that she does not fall from couch. He went to sleep as if he was very tired.

She bent and kissed his fore head her hair touch his face.

HEER: I will never let you down PREM .. you thought I did know you are not feeling well your face say every thing to me

MOON LIGHT WAS AS spot light only on them and stars glittering as if they were smiling ...............

TO be cont...........

Hope you guys like today i wrote from my heart 😳😭 plz do tell me how you all feel

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uGi490LmaP8

i LOVE it

Originally posted by: Ron16

i LOVE it

so romantic ... and u brough the payal scene ... the payal that Heer left behind when they first met ... and still has it... now that was cute...

however that scene n lines remind me of this other show...