FF:LOVE STORY PREMEER compiled on pg102 (bye aLL) - Page 3

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tht was sooooooooooooooo gud! =D.. thankU =D
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wow what a great. pls update next part soon.
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hmmmm...i liked this part...prem said we'll have fun!!!!!!!!......i can imagine that...

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woooww! good job! it was really really ammazzinng. please do continuee soon yaar! can't wait till the next part 😉
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Great job, continue soon!

I love this!

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wonderful ........plz continue....hope we get to see smthg like this on monday....
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It was amazing didi...👏
I loved premeer scene...awwwwww prem can never get angry at heer..lol..
i wonder wht lallu is gonna do with dj...cant wait for the next part...
continue soon...

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Great, can't wait till the next part!

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3rd PART

PREM holding her hand looking at her with a cute smile on his face HEER still did not get what he and bauji is up to.

HEER: PREM what happened what BAUJI said? Why you are looking me like that?

PREM: A surprise is waiting for you.

PREM started hi s car holding her right hand AS if she is going to run away.
HEER: confused PREM

PREM: hmmm

HEER: where are we going this is not the way to home?

PREM: A very special place

HEER: where?

They reach the hotel PREM HOTEL on the gate way all the staff was standing a red carpet with a lot of rose petals PREM stopped the car PREET ASH and PREM MOM

Was there, they both took blessing from her and she gave them a big hug .PREET

Hugged PREM AND he took PREM N HEER blessing

Mom: chalo Bata ..

HEER confused just following PREM came closed to her as he was meeting his staff

PREM: HEER ask for her hand ASH and PREET smiling

PREET: bhai be quick
HEER: what is all this?

PREM: wait..

HEER: why you are teasing me?

MOM: PREM go and get ready I am taking HEER

PREM: with a long face MAA

MOM: hai raa I am not take her far from you just next door she has to get ready

PREM: can I come?
MOM: NAHI leave her hand

PREM: MAA you don't know she ran away please let me in I will just guard. Smiling

MOM: PREM BAUJI will get angry we are getting late Bata

PREM: ok

HEER: smiling but still did not get what it is all about.

MOM: HEER you just get ready ASH will help you I will bring the jewelry.

That I made for my PREM BRIDE HEER
HEER: ASH what is all this?

ASH: YOU and PREM BHAI WEDDING (PREET entered the room WITH PREM)

PREET: ASH you can not hide YOU told her

PREM who was listening all this had a smile on his face you all can imagine what kind

Of a smile it must be no words to describe that. MAA enter the room scold them

MOM: all of guys are still standing get ready BAUJI is calling. We just have 30 min ASH BATA helped her HEER wear that dress (dress of reader?s choice) PREM get

Out of here now you will see her after marriage

PREM: MAA

PREM n PREET went out she closed the door HEER went to change the dress she came

Out.

MAA said .. (I SAID MASH ALLAH) nazar Na lagi meri bati KO ASH bata give her all the jewerly to wear

KNOCK AT THE DOOR
PREET: MAA! MAA

MOM: YEH PREET BHI NAA.

PREET: MAA we have to leave right a way BHAI will help BHABHI to get ready.

MOM: what happened?

PREET: ASH mom had find that ash and I are missing from home and she is creating a scene BAUJI just called to come back DIDI will come to get THEM.

MOM: ASH your mother is ..?PREM now HEER is your responsibility

Make sure she wears this jewelry and cover her face so that no one can see (HEER AND ASH <PREMN PREET ALL CLOTHES ARE SAME)

PREET: BYE BHAI he whisper CHACHI JI NA AIK KAM TO ACHA KYA BHAI
WHAT DID YOU PRAY?

MOM: PREET chalo PREM don't tease my daughter come soon.

PREM closed the door HEER confused abt to faint
PREM TURN AROUND WALKED SLOWLY TO HEER???..

TO BE CONT.............😳 hope you guys like

Edited by pisces26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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liked it ?? loved it.............
haila but why did you stop there..........
plz continue soon cant wait to read what naughty Prem is up to...

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