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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: silparavindar
very nice....coffee shope scenes r like they r real...and i feel like am watching them infront of me....gr8 narration...

plzzzzzz udpate soon

I wasn't sure if i had the whole coffee shop thing done, because im sure coffee shops in NZ are much different to ones around the world!!!!!
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Thanks so much for commenting! I will continue ASAP!

Sunayna

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tanya

@tanyaaaa26

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#102

very nice dear it was superb do cont soon i will be waiting

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 17 years ago

#103

awesome great work i read it when next part will come

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#104

sunayna awesome....simply awesome......wow i loved it ....and thanks for the long update...i was soo looking forward for your update...loved the whole coffee shop thing, the getting to know each other thing.....and so finally they turn out to be childhood friends.....wow....

loved the way Prem couldnt take his eyes off Heer.....plz do update soooooon............

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#105

thanks for the update.loved it do continue soon if you have the time

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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: fijiana
thanks for the update.loved it do continue soon if you have the time

I cont. ASAP!

Hopefully tommorow!

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Sunayna

Thanks for commenting!

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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26
very nice dear it was superb do cont soon i will be waiting

Thank you heaps!

Im glad you liked it i will con.t really soon!

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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: pisces26
awesome great work i read it when next part will come

Thanks for commenting!

I'm just writing the 2nd part now!

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Sunayna!

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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: angel82
sunayna awesome....simply awesome......wow i loved it ....and thanks for the long update...i was soo looking forward for your update...loved the whole coffee shop thing, the getting to know each other thing.....and so finally they turn out to be childhood friends.....wow....
loved the way Prem couldnt take his eyes off Heer.....plz do update soooooon............

Oh, im so happy you liked it! I didn't know wether to keep them childhood friends, i thought it would be cool having at least a bit of connection with the KDMHMD storyline! so. . . .

Will continue soon!

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Sunayna!