Mmm, maybe an FF. . .||UPDATED 11th august|

Okay, Hi! everyone, i don't exactly know anyone, but I am extremely bored and have nothing to do until college starts again tommorow! so I thought i might try an FF! I have never written one before so. . . . . So thats a charecter sketch (not a very good one but) please comment!

Heer Maan- Although she doesn't live in India she is still traditional in ways. She loves music and her younger Sister, Ayesha. She is waiting for her Prince in shining armour to come and get her. She isn't spoilt, but very hard-working. She is very shy which her sister teases her for.

Ayesha Maan- Heer's younger sister, a prankster and lively person, who still lives like she is 10. Overflowing with personality, wins in all fights and great with come-backs! She is studying at university in New York.

Preet Juneja- In-love with basically every girl he sees loves playing pranks and loves his brother a lot.
College heart-throb, though he is caring, friendly when he wants to be. Studying at university in New York, same year as Ayesha.

Ronit- Heer's best friend, caring and kind. He works with Heer and has been friends since College.

Heer's parents have died and she has to pay for Ayesha's College funds. Prem's parents are still alive, not sure how much they will be in this FF but if they do they are Lalit and Gayatri. Oh and Prem, Ronit and Heer are out of University/ College.

This Fanfic is based in California
(I don't live in the US, so I'll be making up most of the places as in suburbs and all)

anyone. . . . . . ?

?xXx?

Sunayna

Thank you all!
I'm just trying to fix it up/edit!
?xXx?
Sunayna

Chapter One

Heer sat on the couch, flicking through magazines. She had no interest in them what so ever but it was going to pass time until Ronit was coming to pick her up for work. She threw them on the ground one after another, until she heard a horn beep outside. She quickly got up and checked through the window. It was Ronit, he waved at her and she smiled back.

She grabbed her bag, her keys, cell phone and drink-bottle, which she stuffed into her bag. She checked herself in the mirror, straightening up her white blouse, her black work trousers and black blazer. She ran out the door, checking that the door was locked and walked towards Ronit's car.
Ronit: Hi, how are you?
Heer: I'm good, how are you?
Ronit: I'm fine.
Ronit continued smiling at Heer; he was lost in his own world, a world where Heer was his and she loved him. Everyone knew except for Heer that Ronit loved her. After a few minutes Heer clicked her fingers in front of his face, he wouldn't snap out of his dreams.
Heer: Hellloooooo ?? Ronit, Ronit wake up!
Ronit finally left his dream world, and blushed, slightly embarrassed.
Heer: What's wrong? What were you thinking about? She asked him
Ronit: Umm. . . ah. . . .mmm. . . Oh yeah Work!
Heer: Well if you cared about work so much, you might want to start driving otherwise we might get fired.
She said this while pointing to the cars clock which was saying 9:54 am, and they both started work at 10 am. The ignition started and they were soon at work. They both worked at a five star hotel, Heer worked mostly in the reception area, and Ronit worked at the help desk. As they walked through the front doors, they saw huge crowds of employees in small circles talking. They were all gossiping about something. Heer and Ronit looked at each other confused. They looked back at the crowds, Heer saw her friend Jessica waving at her. She said "Bye" to Ronit and walked over next to Jessica.
Heer: What's all this about?
Jessica squealed and then said
Jessica: The C.E.O of this hotel is coming here to stay for the next few months, while he's on business!
Heer just looked at Jessica; she was waiting for the exciting part, not sure when it was coming. Heer thought "aren't C .E .O's meant to be old? So why is Jessica all this excited?" She had never seen the C.E.O of the Juneja hotel. All she knew was that they (they, meaning the Juneja family) were rich and snobby people, who only cared about themselves.
Jessica: He's only the cutest bachelor in town! He's going to be arriving soon!
The manager walked in, Mr Mehra, hushing the crowds of employees. No one liked him; he got worked up so easily and loved ordering people around.
Mr Mehra: Everyone into the meeting room NOW!
Everyone hurried to the meeting room making sure not o stand in Mr Mehra's way as Mr Mehra made his way up to the front.
Mr Mehra: As you all know Mr Juneja is coming to stay at our hotel for the next 3 to 4 months, and want you all on your best behaviour. Now everyone GO!
Jessica and Heer walked out the doors and towards the reception. Jessica sat down behind the desk eating a chocolate bar. On the other hand Heer was busy getting ready for Mr Juneja's arrival. She put the newspapers and magazines into tidy rows. She changed the flowers and added white roses, those were here favourite. A black limousine pulled up at the entrance to the hotel. Heer hadn't notice anything, she walked back up to the reception desk, when a hand tapped her on the shoulder. . .

Thanks for reading!
Please comment, and give suggestions!
I accept criticism!
?xXx?

Thanks again Sunayna
P.s, I can't think of a title name so for now will " Mmm, maybe an FF. . . ." do?

Originally posted by: IndianPari

Sounds great so far dear....

Aaaw, I already feel bad for Ronit...

B/c one look into those deep chocolate brown eyes, and Heer's gonna be a goner....

And Ronit will lose her before he had her....Thats sad....

Will be eagerly waiting for the next part! =)

Love,
~P