Mmm, maybe an FF. . .||UPDATED 11th august| - Page 10

Originally posted by: naima1

please continue. i like the fact that it sounds different from kis desh.

hi sunayna...

Hey everyone!

Originally posted by: zenia

hi sunayna...

i loved the ff.......waiting 4 more premeer scenes & ofcourse...preet & ayesha scenes.........

plz cont soon

Recap: Prem got up; he picked Heer's hand from her lap and helped her up. She didn't know what to do, she just followed his lead.

Chapter 4

He pulled Heer towards a small coffee shop which sat on the main road. Heer was still holding the cup of coffee which Jessica had bought for her in her left hand so she threw it away. Prem's hand was entwined with hers, he stopped walking waiting for Heer to catch up. They were now standing outside a beautifully furnished coffee shop.

Prem: Chalein?

Heer: Kya?

Prem: come on. . . .

Heer checked her watch.

Heer: I have to go

Heer had to get back to the hotel as her 20 minutes was nearly over. Heer turned to walk away but Prem caught her hand and pulled her towards him, there was no gap between them. They could feel each other breathing, Heer was starting to take deeper and faster breaths, as she was so close to Prem. She was now leaning on Prem's shoulder, her hands on each of his shoulders for support. She stepped back, taking her hands of his shoulders. He was still holding her and had no intention of letting her go. Heer waved her hand in front of his face, He was staring at her, this surprised Prem as he never looked at girls the way he looked at Heer, he never looked at girls anyway. But he looked at Heer, and he didn't know why. Prem suddenly let go of Heer as he realised what he had just done. They both stood outside the coffee shop feeling a little uncomfortable with the current situation. He pointed towards the entrance gesturing her to enter first. She didn't know what to do. After a few minutes she walked forward towards the door. Prem got there first and opened the door before she could. She smiled thanks. They looked at each other once again, her eyes were almond shaped and a vibrant brown colour, which he had never seen before.

Came to them immediately, there was only one free table and this was the table she led the too. It was different to the other tables. There were rose petals on the table cloth, there was a rose standing in a vase and a candlestick which was lit even thought it was only 2 'o' clock in the afternoon. This scene made Heer feel a little awkward. He held out a chair for her to sit on like a real gentleman and they both sat. They ordered coffee's with one sugar and no cream and then they both sat in silence for the next few minutes.

Prem: Sooo, have you been in America long?

Heer: 3 and a half years.

Prem: Same, I moved because there was so much of my work he I might as well move.

Prem: Do you like working at my hotel?

Heer didn't know what to say.

Prem: Its okay tell the truth!

Heer: Umm, It's okay.

Prem: How long have you been working there?

Heer: nearly four months.

Prem: Okay, do you live near the hotel?

She really wasn't sure whether to lie or tell the truth. She lives about 20 minutes from the hotel in a 3 bedroom apartment but she didn't want to say so.

Heer: No I live quite far.

She lied.

Prem: What did you do in India?

Heer: I got my masters in medicine, so I worked at a private hospital.

Prem was impressed and Heer was wondering why he was asking her all these random questions. Heer looked right out the window trying to avoid Prem's gaze which was focused on Heer.

Prem: what do you do at the hotel?

Heer: I have to go now

She said picking up her bag.

Heer: So sorry, I'll pay!

Heer had seen Jessica walk through the coffee shop door. There was a tap on Heer's shoulder; she turned around to see Jessica standing behind her. Heer was going to be in deep trouble with Jessica.

Jessica: Hi Heer!

Heer: Jessica? What are you doing here? I was just on my way back.

Jessica: No need!

Heer: why?

Jessica: Mr. Mehra gave us the rest of the day of!

Heer was thinking "Noooo, I could have gotten out of here, go somewhere to clear my head!" Prem had just been watching them, looking confused but he know knew why Heer had been in such a hurry to leave.

Prem: Great, now you can stay here. . . . .Heer?

Heer didn't know he knew her name and it never came across Prem that he hadn't known her name. He thought " Heer, Heer. . . . Heer, I think I love that name now!"

Heer: But I need to go and pack for my trip!

Jessica: I forgot about your trip back to India next week!

Heer: Why don't you stay Jessica?

Jessica: Why would I stay? And anyway Ronit is giving me a ride!

Heer: He was gonna give me a ride home too!

Prem: I can drop you off Heer!

Every time he said her name it made him feel happy and relaxed.

Heer: Its okay!

Jessica: Hey, I've already interrupted your coffee, why don't you catch up and then go home with him?

Jessica: Okay?

She said to Prem.

He agreed whole heartedly.

Heer: But I don't even know him.

But it was too late, Jessica was already waving her hand good-bye from the door. BANG- the door was closed and Jessica was gone. Heer watched the door hoping Jessica would come back and save her. But she had no luck so far. They sat in silence, Prem once again looked up at Heer and she tried to avoid his gaze, which was basically impossible. There coffee's arrived. Prem saw a piece of paper on the ground and he picked it up. He looked at Heer then back at the piece of paper and then he mischievously smiled.

Prem: Good point, we don't know each other.

Heer: Mmm,

Prem: So I think we should do this quiz!

He said while flapping the piece of paper.

Prem: Okay?

Heer: Okay.

Prem: I'll say the question, then you answer it and then I'll answer, Where were you born?

Heer: Ludhiana, Punjab

Prem: Ludhiana, Age?

Heer: 22

Prem: I turn 25 next week, date of your birthday?

Heer: July 19^th!

Prem: That's my birthday!!

Heer: My birthday!

Prem: I'm older, so it's my birthday! Dream destination?

Heer: New Zealand!

Prem: France and Russia! Person you love the most?

Heer: Ayesha!

Prem: You he whispered, Heer didn't hear him properly.

Heer: huh?

Prem: Nothing! Favorite pass times?

Heer: Reading, going back to India, playing with kids, and being with Ayesha!

Prem: Being with my family, playing soccer, work! Your favorite childhood memory?

Heer: When I used to sit on a swing in our garden at home with my friend!

Heer was trying very hard to keep her tears back, whenever she thought of her friend she thought of her parents, and she missed them so much after their accident!

Prem: That's really scary, I remember I used to go to my friends house and we would play in her garden and sit on her swing!

He noticed her crying!

Prem: Sssh, why are you crying??

Heer was sitting there thinking as she cried, " wait his name is Prem Juneja, like my friends name".

Hope you liked it, I made it longer than usual to make up for the whole time I hadn't posted!

Please comment!

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Sunayna

its awesomeeeee too good very nice part waiting for next

Wow Sunayna. that was awweesommee!! I tottaallyyy loovveedd it! waaay too gooodd yaar! pleasepleaseplease update sooonn!!! 😊 - Deena

Originally posted by: sweta2005

its awesomeeeee too good very nice part waiting for next

Originally posted by: sakeena

Wow Sunayna. that was awweesommee!! I tottaallyyy loovveedd it! waaay too gooodd yaar! pleasepleaseplease update sooonn!!! 😊 - Deena

Thank you so much! Im glad you liked it!

very nice....coffee shope scenes r like they r real...and i feel like am watching them infront of me....gr8 narration...