Mmm, maybe an FF. . .||UPDATED 11th august| - Page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago
ohwwwwww.. continue soon wen possible lol.. omg.. am like in lurv wif ur ff.. well i crnt say, cuz i read sum ov d most interesting ff's lol.. n one ov them is urs.. lol.. i jush luv d story line.. it's jush shooo interesting lol.. plz continue.. ma eagerly waiting for d nxt part.. will heer go india?.. will prem find out tht probz she's d friend ov dat swing.. will he go india.. will ayesha cum wif her.. oh gosh.. so many questions lol.. am shooo anxious tu find out d nxt part.. i jush hope u post d nxt part soon =D
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: guju_angel

ohwwwwww.. continue soon wen possible lol.. omg.. am like in lurv wif ur ff.. well i crnt say, cuz i read sum ov d most interesting ff's lol.. n one ov them is urs.. lol.. i jush luv d story line.. it's jush shooo interesting lol.. plz continue.. ma eagerly waiting for d nxt part.. will heer go india?.. will prem find out tht probz she's d friend ov dat swing.. will he go india.. will ayesha cum wif her.. oh gosh.. so many questions lol.. am shooo anxious tu find out d nxt part.. i jush hope u post d nxt part soon =D

x. Radhika

Thanks, im glad u like it! I don't even think can answer all your questions because i have so many ideas and have no idea which one to use now!
I wil cont. ASAP!
I'm working on it right now!
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Thanks sooo much!
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Posted: 17 years ago
I have just started reading ur ff.It's fantatic.Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shareen

I have just started reading ur ff.It's fantatic.Pls continue soon.

Thanks for commenting, and im happy that you liked it!
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Sunayna
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Recap: Heer was sitting there thinking as she cried, "wait his name is Prem Juneja, like my friends name".

Chapter 5

Heer was thinking "Oh my god, that's Prem". She knew who he was but he didn't recognize her. She had know I didn't know whether or not to tell him who she was or not. Prem snapped her out of her thought by saying

Prem: Hey, can you believe we both have similar memories! Okay last question, your sur-name?

Heer: Ummm. . . . .

Suddenly Heer's phone rang, she thanked God that she was saved. Prem told her to pick it up, which she did without any hesitation.

Heer: Hello??

Heer: Ronit!

Heer: Im at a caf.

Heer: Umm, I'll be home soon!

Heer: a surprise??

Heer: Okay, I'll be home soon!

Heer: Bye!

Heer looked up to a smiling Prem.

Heer: I have to go now!

Prem: One more question . . . ?

Heer: Sure.

Prem: Your favorite food?

Heer: Does ice-cream count???

He laughed,

Prem: Hmmm, I'll drop you of!

Heer: No it's okay; I have to get a few things on my way home anyway!

Prem wasn't going to take No for an answer. He didn't know why but his breath was taken away by one look of Heer, or even just one small smile!

He stood up and walked Heer to the counter, where he paid for their coffees. They turned to walk out the door, but Prem turned around to take one last look at the place where he fell in love, with the most beautiful person in the world! They were both outside and the wind had picked up and Heer's hair was blowing around uncontrollably. Her hair brushed Prem's cheek. He tucked her hair behind her ear. Heer blushed and slightly smiled at his gesture.

Heer: Okay bye!

Heer turned to walk away, when a strong grip held her wrist. She turned around to find Prem holding her. Prem shook his head and said. . . . . .

Prem: Uh uh, I told your friend Jessica I would take you!

Heer: I'm fine, really!

Prem: I'll carry you to my car if I have too! So it would probably be easier if you just walked!

Heer remembered when they were little Prem used to make Heer go everywhere with him, and if she didn't go he would throw her over his shoulder and make her go. He would always complain she was heavy even though she had a perfect figure !

Heer: Please, I have to go and do the shopping and all too!

Prem: That's it!

He rolled up his sleeves and picked Heer up and she was now over his shoulder, like when they were little.

Heer: Please put me down!

Prem wouldn't listen, after a while she stopped complaining as she knew there was no use. Many people were watching them, Prem would smile at them and continue walking. Heer started to try and get him to put her down again but he was adamant. It wasn't everyday Prem carried a lady down the road. He cherished every moment of it, he hadn't been this close to her since they first met earlier that morning. They finally reached the car, he owned a shiny silver Volvo, with leather seats and black tinted windows. Prem put her down and opened the car door for her. He then walked t the other side of the car quickly, not wanting to be away from her for very long. Heer was blushing embarrassed by what just happened, and Prem was smiling mischievously as he caught Heer blushing. Prem realized he hadn't asked her where she lived, which he did.

Prem: Umm, so where do you need to go?

Heer: In Kelburn, Everton Terrace.

(soz, I don' live in America and I can't remember any suburbs from when I was there so bare with me as I use suburbs which we have in NZ)

Prem:Okay!

Prem turned the radio on and Yeh Ishq Hai was playing from Jab we met.

Haan hai koi toh wajah

Jo jeene ka maza yoon aane laga

Yeh hawaon mein hai kya

Thoda sa jo nasha yoon chaane laga

Pucho na pucho mujhe kya

Hua hai teri rahoon mein aakhar

(Pooch na pooch na)

Pooch na pooch na mujhe kya

Milega teri bahon mein aakhar

Yeh ishq haaye

bhaite bhitaye jannat dikhaye haan

O Rama

Yeh ishq haaye

bhaite bhitaye jannat dikhiye haan

Heer listened to the song; it was one of her favorite songs. She blushed even more now that this song was on. Prem saw her and turned it to another radio station.

Kyon Ki played from the movie Kyon ki

(male)

kyon ki itna pyaar tumko

Karte hain hum

kyon ki itna pyaar tumko

Karte hain hum

Kya jaan loge

Hamare sanam

kyon ki itna pyaar tumko

Karte hain hum

Kya jaan loge

Hamare sanam

kyon ki itna pyaar tumko

Karte hain hum

Hamare dil ki tum

Thodhi si kadar karlo

Hum tum pe marte hain

Todhi si fikar karlo

Fikar karlooooo

This song made Heer blush even more even Prem was turning red. Prem quickly turned the radio of, he knew it would be better if he stopped playing these love songs. Heer didn't exactly think she was in-love with Prem but she knew she felt something for him, in the short moments she'd spent with him. Prem on the other hand was madly in-love with her and could do anything to make Heer his own. They both sat in silence, but Prem had to say something because who knew when he might see Heer again. But he had no idea what to say, Prem's phone rang.

Prem: Hello?

Prem: Preet?

Prem: Are you serious?? Your in California??

Then Heer's phone rang.

Heer: Hello?

Heer: Ayesha! How are you?

Heer: Im good too!

Heer: I'll be home soon. . .why?

Heer: no reason?? Okay.

Heer: Bye!

Prem: Bye Preet!

They both looked at each other.

Prem: My brother!

Heer: My sister!

Prem: He's come from New York.

Heer: My sister's at university there.

Prem: So is my brother!

They fell silent again; they were about 5 minutes away from her house. Prem didn't want these minutes to fly away the way that they were.

They arrived at Heer's house.

Heer: Umm, thanks for the ride, and the coffee!

Prem: No problem!

Prem got out of the car to open Heer's door, to bad for Heer, Jessica was outside now and asking Prem to come in. Prem looked at Heer who was staring at the ground.

Prem: It's okay, maybe another time!

Jessica: No, you must come in, Mustn't he Heer?

Heer was still staring at the ground and hadn't heard anything Jessica had just said.

Jessica: Heer?

Heer: Hmm?

Jessica: Nothing. Anyway you must come in!

Prem tried to reason with Jessica but she wouldn't take no for an answer, he looked up at the house that stood in front of him; it looked nothing like the other houses on the street. It had its own character and style whereas the others looked the same. The front garden was beautiful, there were hedges all trimmed neatly with fuscia, roses and frangipani growing in all corners.

Jessica led them both into the house, Heer put down her bag on the counter and walked into the lounge. Prem was close behind them. He was thinking "wow, she knows how to decorate, this looks WOW".

Heer walked into the lounge and a group of people shouted

"HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY!"

Okay that's all for today, Im so sorry for all these late updates.

Exams have taken up so much time plus internals and all!

Thanks for being patient! Hope you enjoyed!

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Sunayna

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Posted: 17 years ago
ohhhh.. am reli anxious tu find out wat happens next!.. plz continue!... lol.. hehe.. luved this part.. x. Radhika
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Posted: 17 years ago

wow, your writing is superb! All the scenes you have written are just SO sweet and are really easy to conjure up in my mind. Continue soon and keep rocking!!!!!!!!!

Love Vibs x
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Posted: 17 years ago
its awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for the update.do continue soon.all the best for the exams
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow what an update........thanks a lot for such a wonderful update.....haila how i wish smthg like this would happen in the show too...Prem picking up heer on his shoulders and walking down the street to his car😳
I'm sooooo eager to read the next part....but can understand your situation...you take your time to update...studies comes first....me off to premeer land till then... 😍

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