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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: vinee_vinee


you are drama...full on drama...i dont say aise hi that you are cutest...ok baba i will update it today...may be a liittle but i will...and madam where is your update.



awww...love u... :)
U r the best vinee...waiting desperately 4 tat..
mine z aftr u, almost half done wid tat nd I intended 2 update 2day itself bt then u were nt thr, so dropped the idea...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Muah...so sweet of u vinee...
love u 4 this...
ll read it nd then cmnt abt it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: tinatartari



awww...love u... :)
U r the best vinee...waiting desperately 4 tat..
mine z aftr u, almost half done wid tat nd I intended 2 update 2day itself bt then u were nt thr, so dropped the idea...

Oh my...you are a sweetheart...waiting for your update desp...update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
22day u made me cry...
believe it or nt bt I ws feeling each nd every emotion of saruv..
aftr sucha dhamakay daar romance evn much more better than the actual serial itself, hw beautifully u made a transition 2 just so sad scenes of dv bidding gudbye 2 saachi aftr she chose him over her family...
kuddos 2 u vinee..hats off..
nd thnks A lot 4 updating it just on my demand..i just cant thnk u enuff...k
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Its sucha kind gesture of u tat u managed an update 4 me evn aftr sucha busy nd hectic routine..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
UPDATED ON 21st Nov.

It is almost shown that Aaji will come to know through Ulka Kaaku who sees DV and Saachi romance. Aaji is very upset and is not even talking to Saachi. Saachi is under guilt of hurting her granny and has decided something...

SCENE 16

DV: Saachiji aapne mujhe yahan is jheel ke paas akele milne bulaya to aap nahin jaanti mujhe kitna chain mila...aapko aaj poore 7 din ke baad mil raha huin...mujhe pata tha aap bhi mujhse mile bina nahin reh sakti.
Dv had a smile of satisfaction and he was seeing Saachi so lovingly...the way a small kid who everyday yearningly looked at a doll in the glass and its the day that the doll is his and he cant take his eyes off the toy, the same was DV's condition. His emotions overflowed and his happiness brought tears. He was feeling the joy which was far more than what he felt when Saachi had confessed her feelings. It was the emotion which comes through seperation and DV had felt it so badly in the last 7 days. He would not have agreed to keep away if it was not Saachi who had asked for this promise from him a week ago when Ulka created nonsence infront of Naani and Aaji. He has waited every day and every hour for Saachi to show up again...he knew its very hard for her too thats why she is not meeting him...tears were uncontrollably flowing through his eyes wiping away all the pain they had seen in long 7 days.

Saachi: DV mujhe bhool jao ...chale jao yahan se !!!!!! It was emotionless and firm...a rigid decision which she had not come to discuss but to dictate...

DV just stood there lifeless...not believing what he just heard...the expressions were a complicated mix of agony and anger mixed with a disbelied and still alive hope that its not what Saachi meant.

DV: Jaan sakta huin ki kyon mujhe aisa karne ka aap order de rahi hain? his voice strong with anger.

Saachi: mein galat thi..mere liye meri family se upar kuch bhi nahin hai...mein bhi nahi and you know this DV. Itna sabkuch hone ke baad mein aaji ko aur pareshaan nahin kar sakti...meine aaji ko promise kiya hai ki mein tumhe phirse nahin milungi aur mein apna promise nahin tod sakti.

DV: this time with a sarcastic tone...aapne ek promise mujhe bhi kiya tha...aap bhool gayeen...bas thoda sa bhool gayee...bhool gayee. Ah...he sighs!! His tone which started with sarcasm changed again to deep agony.

Saachi: DV mein galat thi...samjho mujhe...hum apne badon ko dukh dekar kabhi khush nahin reh sakte. aaj hum dono ko dukh hoga par aage ke us dukh se jo humne apne badon ko diya hai usse to yehi acchha hai ki hum apne raaste alag kar lein.

DV: mein galat that...aaj agree karta huin ki aapko samajhne mein galat tha...mujhe nahin maloom tha ki aap itni coward hain...

Saachi is shocked and pained to hear that...but she knew what she was doing was unacceptable to DV but how could she go against her family...how could she tell DV that she can hurt him because she considers them as one but she cannot hurt her family.

Dv: ab mein aapko kabhi mujhse pyaar karne ke liye nahin kahunga...mujhe pata hai ki aap mujhe bhool bhi nahin payengi aur khush bhi nahin reh payengi par aap jo apni aaji ke liye ye sab kar rahin hain mein iske beech kaise aa sakta huin...par meri Zindagi se khelne ke liye Thanks Miss Saachi Prabhu. Yaad rakhiyega aapko good bye wish kar raha huin DV style...
DV leaves and saachi stood there crying for long...very long.

SCENE 17

Dils : bye DV...i will miss you a lot...mujhe tumme saachi ke baad sabse acchha dost mila hai.
DV: Dils ek tum hi to ho jisse mein apne dil ki baat aajtak karta aaya huin...mein shayad aaj ke baad tumse kabhi baat nahin kar paonga...tumhe kabhi phone nahin karunga.

Dils : mujhe pata hai DV...mujhse baat karke tumhe saachi yaad ayegi aur mein nahin chahti ki aisa ho. Usne apni family ko chuna ye galat nahin par tumhe apna kar chod diya iske liye mein bhi use kabhi maaf nahin karungi...par shayad mujhe pata tha ki saachi apne liye kabhi nahin sochegi...par shayad laga tha ki wo tumhare bina bhi nahin reh payegi...but tumne use pehle ki tarah kyon nahin force kiya.

DV: nahin Dils...tab saachi ko mein uske dil mein jhaankna sikha raha tha par ab wo jaanti hai ki uske dil mein kya hai. Meine kaha that ki pyaar ki is lo ko hum dono ko thamna hoga...hum dono mein se koi use akele nahin rok sakta bujhne se...par jab ab us lo par uska haath hi nahin to mein akela kuch nahin kar sakta...mein duniya se lad sakta huin jab wo mere saath khadi ho par usse kaise ladu. Aaj usne faisla le liya hai.

DV: saachi ka khayal rakhna Dils...wo mere bina sachme nahin reh payegi...tum ho use sambhalne ke liye mujhe isbaat ki tasalli hai.

Dils: par kaun hai wahan tumhe sambhalne ke liye...mein kis baat ki tasalli karoon.

DV: hain na my sweetheart...meri mom...jo mujhe is duniya mein sabse zyada pyaar karti hain...
In so much pain...the thought of returning to his mother filled in him a peace and he yearned to empty all his worries and sorrows in her loving embrace...the embrace of a mother in which the child feels utmost peace and protection from the harsh world...he longed for his mother now...he wanted to cry now...cry his heart out in the most protected place, his mothers lap.

Dils bids adieu to him teary eyed...








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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: tinatartari

22day u made me cry...
believe it or nt bt I ws feeling each nd every emotion of saruv..
aftr sucha dhamakay daar romance evn much more better than the actual serial itself, hw beautifully u made a transition 2 just so sad scenes of dv bidding gudbye 2 saachi aftr she chose him over her family...
kuddos 2 u vinee..hats off..
nd thnks A lot 4 updating it just on my demand..i just cant thnk u enuff...k

Its DV's magic...when i imagine him doing these scenes it feels so real that i go on writing...but i do know when he will potray pain as he did for a while when he was in the self realisation phase it was adorable.
And you are so nice with your words ...i admitted it before and i admit it once again that only you make me write as otherwise i would have left this FF long back...you are simply amazing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Thnks vinee..u always praise me so much tat I blush..
its nt me bt the magic of ur wrds tat make me go fida 4 ur ff nd it forces me 2 nag u again nd again 2 write nd obvio the dv magic it iz!
Nd its been an honour 4 me tat u got inspired by my wrds nd they made u write...
btw does ur real life dv knows abt ur ff?
M sure he ll go fida on u if he ever reads tat..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: tinatartari

Thnks vinee..u always praise me so much tat I blush..
its nt me bt the magic of ur wrds tat make me go fida 4 ur ff nd it forces me 2 nag u again nd again 2 write nd obvio the dv magic it iz!
Nd its been an honour 4 me tat u got inspired by my wrds nd they made u write...
btw does ur real life dv knows abt ur ff?
M sure he ll go fida on u if he ever reads tat..

No he doesnt but he knows i am active on IF for only this show. I had mentioned my story in brief in my first post in this forum...and i made him read that. He is amazing with words and i am nothing infront of him...it was too difficult not to fall for him even though he was younger...this is what initially brought me to watch this show as otherwise i dont watch TV...no time from office.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Wow..tats awesome..
I Wanna read ur story.if u ve sme tym, do plx wearch the topic again nd plx send me the link..
i wsnt thr in the forum wen it started...
nd does ur real life dv z as charming as our onscreen dv?
Nd hz ur mil?dint she object?i

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