Confession ke baad.FF on saruv updated last part on page 1 - Page 11

Originally posted by: hemangi0601

Hi vinee,

read part 16 &17.

so separation track is on in your ff.

You have depicted both saachi and dv's emotions very nicely I could visualize the scenes...you are very good with words.

I know we might soon see separation in the serial also so your ff is preparing us for that.

Great work.Take a bow...👍🏼

hema.

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

I can't see hurt Dv...what a beautiful update I read back to back...Really you are a very good writer...I loved your ff...continue soon...ho sake to muje pm karna...

Arz kia hai...

Wo khafa hai humse to khafa hi rehne do,

Hume unka gunehgar hi rehne do,

Wo samajte hai chod dia humne unko,

Baat to jooth hai magar sach hi rehne do...

Originally posted by: vinee_vinee

i was earlier just like you thats why i like you so much...and ditto i also used to find romance in these reel life people thinking such romance does not exist in real life and always dreamt of such love life in real too...but kehte hain na...humne itni shiddat se kisi ki chahat ki hai to saari kaynaat ne ussse humain milane ki saazish ki hai...on a funny side...and i am now going to read your SS...really excited.

Originally posted by: tinatartari

i knw it wud nt b nyc 2 ask u 2 update again as u r busy bt u knw am nt nice wen it comes 2 ur update nd i admit it

plx plx plx plx update vinee..am dying 2 read ur ff furthur

Originally posted by: vinee_vinee

I did update it but nothing much spl as it went very clish,...that's why did not PM you...infact i wanna change that scene...advice me how should I go about the story...it was just a filler update.

Originally posted by: tinatartari

did u delete tat filler??if its thr i wanna read it again before gvvng u sme advice..btw y dnt u add sme hot romantic scene lyk their beach date,or kiss or saachi planning smthng 4 dv??

even aftr everythng saachi cudnt stop herself nd stops dv nd goes 2 meet him secretly???

Originally posted by: vinee_vinee

Hmmm...sounds intresting to me...I will change my scene now and put something like this only...even I wanna see Saachi's passion now . thanks Tina.