Confession ke baad.FF on saruv updated last part on page 1 - Page 7

Originally posted by: vinee_vinee

you always give such beautiful comments...i wait for your comments the most. I will update it more next weekend as during weekdays when the show is telecasted there is so much happening to discuss ki update ki taraf mind hi nahin jaata...but it feels really nice that you are enjoying the FF...i simply loved this word you used " irresistable" for it...thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: tinatartari

Thnks 4 liking my cmnts bt the truth zi really m a loyal fan of ur ff lyk ma fan of dv evr since I 1st saw him...
bt by updatng only on weekends u gng on cvs jlz track..torture...so plx dnt do tat if possible..nd update soon..
i Ve a plan 4 raising ur ffs trp vinee...thnks vinee! Thnk

Originally posted by: prodipto18

finally i am really sori Vinee for being so so late

i was busy with my wrk

u have written really well

👏

applause for u

its so well written dat we can even visualize each and every moment

vinee its saachi not saanchi

even sristi mam specfied it in her tweet,confirmed

i really liked the last part

grt one

its a request that if u can write sumthing now were Saachi cumes to know abt DV s real identity

and he is a part of PE.

and how he tackles saachi aftre this,it wud be grt,dnt make him negative

make an interesting story dat how DV came to panchgani wid a purpose bt loved changed everything and now he is wid saachi

it wud be hard for him to make saachi realsise his truth as he has hidden its from saachi for so long

here u can put an intense romantic plot which u have already putbt a more intense one

not crossing the boundaries types bt an intense one were saachi is shocked aftr DV s identity is revealed and he tries to pacify her etc etc

then i really liked ur part were they go for action movies,the frnd conversation

the makers shud show sumthing in the show as well

i suggested in one of my posts that they must show saachi planning a romantic date for DV to make Him feel specail and try to bridge the age gap

saachi in a grown

c plans al dese wid dils

sangeeta luks ravishing in western attires as well😉

then DV will get shocked and suprised wid dis justure of hers

then a small romanctic track,den DV will make her realise and will say dose dialogs from MOHABBATEIN,which SRK taught us

kisise pyaar karo toh use pyaar karo,uske badal ke pyaar karo toh woh pyaar nehi samjhota hota hain😉

Originally posted by: desigabru

Simply wow :) just read the last update you made Vinee. Can I like it a zillion times? I could visualize every scene, and its all so meaningful. I love all the songs u have used for previous scenes as well. It gives your FF a very serial like treatment, lovely..keep up the good work & keep writing beautiful romantic scenes :) thanks

Originally posted by: vinee_vinee

You built up the suspense everyday saying that you will comment and not commented...today i thank you for the post and say it was worth the wait...every bit.

I am really surprised to know being a guy still how deeply you think about the show and you have so many ideas to take it forward...actually i needed such inputs to add more updates to the FF. Some of your ideas as worth implementing but i really dont want to bring any misunderstanding part or show DV any grey even but will try to see how can this track be brought without turning him grey. Lovely reply Prodipto...thanks for it.

Originally posted by: prodipto18

thnks vinee

dont turn him grey

but u shud include the dv s real identity part too,its an integral part of the story

we can neglect it bt it will come soon in th real story as well

i also told u make it in a way dat he shud not turn negative

i will disagree wid u vinee in this point bcoz u mite not know dat most script writers ,dialog writers ,directors and creatives in serials and movies are MEN

i am really gud in story telling vinee-will write one book one day for sure

i am gud at making stories for other types of stories apart from romantic ones