FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Charmed...

Just loved it Rimz! aww thanks BhavReading your answers to JC's comments, how does Ayesha know Inder is her father and please don't kill him off.I'll explain some of that in the next part and he wont die dont worry...😊 I would love to see their relationship grow. you will to a certain degree...The scene with Neev, Ayesha and Prachi was hilarious 😆 LOl...glad you thought so...I also loved the last bit. Neev's such a sweetheart! Neeeeevu...I love him tooMichi were just 😍 I apologise for it being short michi ...I'll try make it more 😍

Thanks for the update Rima!

Thanks hun...😃

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Hey Rima, sorry for the late comment...The Shachi interview took up all my time..! 😆 hehe only for Shachi you are forgiven Tweets...no one else...😉😆
Loved it...It was superb...! A lovely beginning for all four of them...! Again I wonder why Ayesha walked out of the house on seeing Inder? Does she have something to do with him just as in the serial? Yes she does tweets...I'll try relavel more in the part...
Loved Prachi and Ayesha's interaction and the way their friendship is developing...Ofcorse Michi and NA were too good..! hehe aww thanks hun...I love ayesha prachi friendship too...it's refreshing...
Waiting for the next update Rima...!!

will try write as soon as possible thanks hun!😃

Originally posted by: Anushka

All four chracters shaped up very well 👏 Thanks Anushka...

Ayesha knows Inder is her father? Why did she walk out from there 😕 Yes they are father and daughter and I'll try reveal more in the next part...😊

Loved the Michi and NA moments awww good good.

Originally posted by: fahimataq

Finally u updated rima! NA moments are too cute esp at the end omg ur neev is tooo sweet. 😳 😳 hehe...It was only 4 days...😳...Glad you're liking NA...Neevu too...😃

wt can i say bout michi as always u described them jus as they are: made for each other!!Aww Fahima, that so nice...😃 milind doesnt hav anything else to do except get lost in prachi hainaof course...hamari Prachi hain hi aisi... 😆 its too sweet man. awww...

i reli liked this part and i reli like ur translation cos my urdu/hindi isnt too good it takes me time to read. Thanks and glad you liked it...if you get time, read the hindi ones too...just helps you imagine it better I think...😃

keep it up i'll be waiting for the next part hun! update sooonnn!!! 👏 👏awww thanks hun...😃...next part...I'll try write asap...

Originally posted by: milindkidewani

Rima ki bachchi!!! 😆 😆 Kya update likha hai... Haaye main mar jaawaan gud kha ke!!! 😳 hehe...YOU STILL HAVEN'T EXPLAINED TO MEEEEEE what that means Jaanu😳😆

Why do I get the feeling that Neev is ur fav in this??Um...because he might be???😳 😉 The character u potrayed for him...fun loving, flirt and then he goes and apologizes to Ayesha(reminded me of Hum aapke hai kyun)...Yeh he is like that, I love salman in that....Cho Chweet and lovable. 😳 I loved his interaction with PL... yeh me too...even in the show it's great...

So it looks like Inder is Ayesha's dad..uh huh....wonder how this will affect Prachi n her relationship.You'll see... I guess Ayesha already knows that so I will wait and see what happens when Prachi comes to know about it. It should be interesting...I'm hoping...

Milsi n Prachi already feeling eachothers' heat!!ai hai...perfect way to describe it... lagta hai ab unki pehli kiss door nahi.... 😉 😃 tuje kaise paata? Ayesha vision ka kamaal?
Will look forward to the next part!!
LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED this one !!! 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: chituku

ohhhhhhhh rims jaanuuuuuuuu superb update yaar...luved it... millind and prachi already feeling for eachother... hun do u hav to make neev chooooooo cute...u know what i mean 😉 he is such a sweetheart ahhhhhhhh i soooo luv his he relationship PL...ayesha inders daughter.hun plzzzzzzzzzz no negetivity here.we hav that sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much in serial.here all happy happys 😃 and yeah update soooonnnn😊

Originally posted by: swt_gurl001

WOW...LOVED IT Thanks hun...

My favorite is Neev, He is damn cute in ur FF and saying sorry at the end, tooo cute hehe mine too hun, isn't he just...😃

So Ayesha is Inder's daugther, hopw their wont be any negativity Not much dont worry...it wont be like the show...

Thanks, and cotinue soooooon

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey rima wonderful part.... 👏 Milsi cant sto staring at Prachi...so cute 😳 Neev is sweet n naughty i really enjoyed readin this part... 😉 Plzz continue asap 😊